FF : These Three Words (Part 35 - 19/11 Updated - P: 79) - Page 51

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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing update
It's good that Suraj's feelings towards Chakor didn't stop him from being a good friend to her. His heart is too quick to judge him, he hasn't given up on his love, he's just being a good friend.

Finally Chakor realized her first love was an illusion, it's interesting that even at that moment Suraj's opinion of her was the first thought on her mind.

Sukor first kiss was ❤️, they were both shocked and their inner dialogues were cute.

The story is flowing nicely didn't feel any disconnect.


Eagerly waiting for next.

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Posted: 7 years ago
The mind and heart talk was sooo amazing...and sukor moments...very very impressive story...keep it up..👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
It was an amazing update sis..
It was a long time u have updated the story..but now u have cum with a bang..it doesn't lost its essence sis..
I just loved tis update a lot..
Eagerly waiting 4 next update sis..
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Amazing update

It's good that Suraj's feelings towards Chakor didn't stop him from being a good friend to her. His heart is too quick to judge him, he hasn't given up on his love, he's just being a good friend.

Finally Chakor realized her first love was an illusion, it's interesting that even at that moment Suraj's opinion of her was the first thought on her mind.

Sukor first kiss was ❤️, they were both shocked and their inner dialogues were cute.

The story is flowing nicely didn't feel any disconnect.


Eagerly waiting for next.

Thank you so so much Mai

You have a point!
He is being a good friend to her and still his heart is not satisfied that he is close to her.

Finally she is out of her past!
You noticed it! Well yep! She is being attached to him, so taking care he thinks good about her!

Glad you liked the inner dialogues :-)

Happy that the flow is there!
Thank you once again Mai!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: HayaZehra313

The mind and heart talk was sooo amazing...and sukor moments...very very impressive story...keep it up..👏

Thank you Thank you dear!
Happy you enjoyed the mind and heart talk!
😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj

It was an amazing update sis..

It was a long time u have updated the story..but now u have cum with a bang..it doesn't lost its essence sis..
I just loved tis update a lot..
Eagerly waiting 4 next update sis..

Thank you so much for the encouraging words sis!
Happy you liked this update!
Will try my best to be back soon as I'm on RC and this now!
Thank you
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hello!

Here is the next part!
Hope you all like it!

Link to the previous part: Part 27 : Stuck in the storm

Happy reading!

*******

Part 28 : Long drive talks!


Leaving her form as she left him, both stood on their ground for minutes before he decided to break the ice.
"We have to go on!" he said getting back his sense.
"Hmm!" she said. And as she saw him take a step forward and slide, she yelled "Watch out!" but he didn't fall but stayed there and turned to look at her.
"You be careful!" he said forwarding his hand for her to take "Waiting for someone else to come and take your hand?" he questioned seeing her eyes which were with questions.

'Is our Dude talking in double meaning here?'
'For the first time in the history of my being, I don't know in what way he meant!' his mind replied.

"Come alone! It's your choice that you don't want to take my help to get to the jeep! Don't blame me afterwards!" he stated as he got back his hand.
And that made the end of awkwardness to go away.

'I think you got your reply now!'
'Yup! I got it! And I got to know that you also don't know him that well!' His heart mocked.
'Don't start it again!'
'Scared of me and your lies, I see!'
'PUFF'

"Why should I blame afterward when you are behaving like a kid now?"
"Kid? MEEE?"
"Yeah! You!"
"Chakor!" he asked with his raised brows.
"No patience at all! Poor wife of yours!"
"Poor me! Not her!" he said as he extended his hand that she took in hers so they could move from there to the jeep without getting hurt.

'How come they can talk so coolly when few minutes back they were MUAH MUAH'
'Can't you get that it was an accidental kiss and this is their friendship?'
'Are you sure about it?' His heart questioned.
'You are never going to change!'
'Thank you for the compliment!'
'It wasn't!'
'No problem! I will take it as one!'
'Unbelievable!'

Cleaning the seats with a dry chiffon he found under the seat, they both climbed on it.
"By the way, why are you still single?"

'Good Question!'
'Shut up! Can't you see he is starting to stress not knowing what to reply?'
'Oups! Sorry!'

Calming his racing heart, he started his jeep.
"I asked you something!" she said.

'Why is he calm?'
'May be he is not interested to open up!'
'Or maybe he is hiding something!'
'Possible!' her mind

"Not interested!" he replied as his eyes landed on her curious eyes who were already on him.
"Liar!" she smiled "Your eyes is telling some other story!" she said as he diverted his eyes.

'Am I that visible to her?'
'Probably!'
'Calm down! Calm down!' his heart chanted to himself.

Making a smile on his face, facing her "Why should I lie?"
"May be because you are afraid of something!" she said thinking.
He laughed "If you think so! Your wish!"
"So there is something!" getting curious, she settled herself comfortably to face him "I will help you to get her!"
"Really?"
"Yeah! Of course!"
He smirked "Will you help me to get me yourself to me?" he said it speedily.
Catching just few words, not getting the full meaning she said "We are playing tongue twister with words ME Me me!" looking straight "Repeat! In a simple way!"

Pulling out his smirk, his look taking a serious trait, he said "It's you!" and he drove the car as if he said nothing while she was opening and closing her mouth in shock.

'Is our dude serious?'
'Yup! He is serious! Yahooo!'
'What will happen now?'
'What else? Marriage! Honeymoon! Babies! Etc Etc Etc'
'Ohhh' his mind.

'What did he just said?'
'That the girl is you!' her heart replied.
'But'
'No worries! If you like say you like him else just say sorry!'
'Don't rush! We need to think a lot! I mean feel a lot!'
'Yeah! Yeah! I feel like you are doing my job nowadays!'
'May be! As you are not feeling anything!'
'Oh I see!' her heart mocked.

With just one hand on the steering, he closed her mouth with the other one as he started to laugh "You believed it!" in between his laugh riots "I was just kidding!"
Relaxing herself on her seat, she smiled "You are crazy!" putting her hand above her chest "I thought if I don't reply you now, I will get a heart attack!"
"No bad thinking!" he warned "Well! If I want to tell you something, I will tell you! And I promise you that you will be the first person to know!"
"Else I will make sure to kill you! I'm your friend and I have to know it first!"
"Okay! Promise!"

'Was he joking?'
'No comments!' his mind.

"How much time we have before we reach?" she asked after few minutes of silent ride..
"15 or 20 mins!"
"That's good! I'm tiered!" she yawned.
"Me too!" he added as they entered the city border.

*******

Thank you for reading buddies!
Hope you enjoyed reading the talks and actions.
All COMMENTS and VIEWS are welcomed!
From next part, few fast forward scenes and few slow scenes including everyone. So less of our hero & heroines ;-)
Next part, next week!

See you!


Next part : Part 29 : If only!



- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 7 years ago


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Posted: 7 years ago
OMG mind blowing update...🤪i loved the way she can even read his eyes...❤️waiting for next part...plzzz update soon...😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
It was a lovely update sis..
Is the suraj really playing with her..
Once again i just loved the heart and mind fight..
Hope both feel 4 each other soon..
Eagerly waiting 4 next update sis..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing update🤗
Loved Sukor's conversation😆
Was Suraj playing with Chakor or he really meant it😉
No words for heart & mind😆
Waiting for next

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