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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#531

Originally posted by: taahir004
Fabulous and Amazing Part

Thank you so so much buddy!

Happy you liked this part too!😊

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#532

Originally posted by: sumsukor
Maithu
nice update

atlast MINART settled their chores that my dude indeed loves the lady...😆

you know Maithu all through i was not imagining Sukor but you words just brought them in front of me like the show it was like virtual indeed👏

cutie pie and sleep (food and sleep ha ha can she be away from it) the jeep scene and dude carrying her awwwhhh

hope her MINART also settles... has to know ...

SuKhi is always a bliss but Uncle hmmm 😭 poor guy...

Ooollalala garland falling on

waiting waiting!!!!

Thanks Sumi for this heart melting comment!

Always on cloud nine with this!

But wish I got bad comments one day!

It was time for the MinArt to be settled LOL

Saying it virtuelle is too too much dear!

You are putting the bars up for me! :-|

HEee

I remember the last time when I said she was sleepy and he was too, you got scared but as I told you see, Maithu is not that evil for now LOL

It will take a lot more than him for her MinArt to settle!

This is not the first time Garlands are falling Heee

I think you have to read like 5-6 last parts to see the links ;-)

Thanks a ton dear for this lovely comment

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

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Posted: 7 years ago

#533

Originally posted by: maithu_

Thanks Sumi for this heart melting comment!
Always on cloud nine with this!
But wish I got bad comments one day! ( You may only for one reason and you know ... only if you bring that ***** anywhere near my adories... be warned...)

It was time for the MinArt to be settled LOL

Saying it virtuelle is too too much dear!
You are putting the bars up for me! :-|

HEee
I remember the last time when I said she was sleepy and he was too, you got scared but as I told you see, Maithu is not that evil for now LOL thank u Thank u,

It will take a lot more than him for her MinArt to settle!

This is not the first time Garlands are falling Heee
I think you have to read like 5-6 last parts to see the links ;-)

Thanks a ton dear for this lovely comment

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#534

Originally posted by: sumsukor

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SilverLove.

@SilverLove.

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#535

Hi di 😊

How r u ?

First of all thank u very much for posting this story ..😃

Second Your sense of humour is really great .👍🏼

I wish i was a director so i could make a film of ur stories and fetch a lot of money .😆(obviously I'll give u the credit for ur writing )

No words to describe how much i loved it .Wish there was a messaging option available on india forums (coz I'm too lazy to write a comment 😛)

This story always brings a smile on my lips .😊

Loved the battle between mind and heart .👍🏼

As I said before u r my online english teacher , remember ?

Now i have improved a lot in english and its credit goes to u .(thanks for it )

Third from where the hell do u get these kind of imagination ? (anyways forget it from wherever it comes its no problem ,I'm really happy that u share that with us through ur writings .😊)

Loved this part very much .

Waiting for the next part eagerly ...

Lots of love...❤️

Edited by SilverLove. - 7 years ago

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 7 years ago

#536

Beautiful Chapter

Well there was no hug but wow at least Suraj had a chance to carry Chakor in his arms

it has to be difficult for both the line between friendship and lovers is just so thin

that when Suraj does something because he cares its easily justified as friendship

Imli is really excited about all the wedding dresses

Chakor I wonder what she truly feels about Suraj

oh and again the heart and mind talks always fascinating

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#537

Originally posted by: SilverLove.
Hi di 😊
How r u ?

First of all thank u very much for posting this story ..😃
Second Your sense of humour is really great .👍🏼

I wish i was a director so i could make a film of ur stories and fetch a lot of money .😆(obviously I'll give u the credit for ur writing )

No words to describe how much i loved it .Wish there was a messaging option available on india forums (coz I'm too lazy to write a comment 😛)

This story always brings a smile on my lips .😊
Loved the battle between mind and heart .👍🏼

As I said before u r my online english teacher , remember ?
Now i have improved a lot in english and its credit goes to u .(thanks for it )

Third from where the hell do u get these kind of imagination ? (anyways forget it from wherever it comes its no problem ,I'm really happy that u share that with us through ur writings .😊)

Loved this part very much .
Waiting for the next part eagerly ...

Lots of love...❤️

Hello dear!

I'm good dear! H r u?

What have you done?

All the praising!

I'm in heaven already!

I'm so so happy that you are happy for seeing TTW back!

It's all thanks to the people like you around me that I could make things to be a bit funny ;-)

Well! You are the second person in the same day to say the same thing!

Making film!

And the first person is my secret man! :-)

If you wish, without salary, I'm ready to do it for you as writing is my entertainment!

Messaging option!

I think IF has to include calling system too so we could all interact :-|

I'm feeling blessed to make you smile dear!

Thanks a ton!

Pleasure is all mine dear as I also learn a lot of things while writing!

To be frank dear, I just go with the flow, no thinking a lot!

Bcs when i think a lot, I feel it is not good!

So always going with the flow!

Will try my best to get the next part out soon

Thank you so so much Sis!

Take care!

Love you!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#538

Originally posted by: taahir004
Beautiful Chapter

Well there was no hug but wow at least Suraj had a chance to carry Chakor in his arms
it has to be difficult for both the line between friendship and lovers is just so thin
that when Suraj does something because he cares its easily justified as friendship
Imli is really excited about all the wedding dresses
Chakor I wonder what she truly feels about Suraj
oh and again the heart and mind talks always fascinating

Thanks a ton buddy!

So happy you liked it!

Yup! The hug is missing but soon it will happen! ;-)

Heee yes! The thin line here is what makes the difference between Suraj and Chakor!

According to Chakor it's her mind which rules! So she thinks he is her friend and family, that's it!

Thanks dear once again!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#539

Hello!

Here is the next part of TTW!

Link to the previous part : Part 29 : If only!

Happy reading!

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Part 30 : Mariage!

Lifting her head, the lady turned around to see a hidden man inside the garlands with his hands on the railing.

Huffing puffing, cleaning her face, she climbed the stairs in her running speed while he was pulling his head out of the garlands.

"I knew it! It was you only!" she accused as he got his head out of the flowers.

'How did she have to know it was him?'

'His dress!'

'Oh! I thought she knew it in some other way!'

'How?'

"Blame me after! For now, get me out of this!" he said.

"You deserved it!" she said helping "What was the need to play with kumkum paste when you have works to do!"

"It was for Paakhi!"

"Don't try to blame someone else for what you did!" she said pulling out the last piece of the garland out of his neck "Now I have to clean myself and redo my make-up!"

"It is not as if you are going to take hours and hours for that! Just 10 or 20 mins!"

"Luckily my dress is not stained!"

"If you want, I can colour it too!"

"Yooouuu" getting her hands close to his throat as he was fixing the garlands in its place "Leave it! Never marry! A girl's life will be spoilt!"

"Ouch!" he acted as if to be hurt with his hand on his chest.

"Drama artist!" she said and moved from there.

"Thank you!" he called back shaking his head.

Time pressed and the marriage took place between all the elders, family, friends, relatives, kids...

"Always be happy together!" the old man blessed his children as he hugged them.

The newly married couple moved towards the emotional lady, witnessing her little sister getting married.

As both bent to get her blessing as it is from the bride side, she just pulled them up and hugged her sister tight.

"Your happiness will be residing in understanding and trusting your relationship! Maa and Papa are always with you!"

"I will miss you Di!"

"Oh oh! She is going to be here only with you!" Suraj.

"But bro, we are leaving in few days for our internship as dates have been preponed!" Vivaan replied.

"I completely forgot it!"

"Love you a lot Di!"

"Love you too"

"Enough of sister dramas!" Suraj said just to get an elbow punch from his secret lover "Ouch!" closing his tummy "I'm waiting for you both to take my blessing!"

"Don't you think it is too much to ask for?"

"Oh madam! When they are ready to take your blessing, I'm not less!"

"You mean to say I'm not worth!" they faced each other.

"Children! This is a marriage hall and you are grown up if I have to remind you!" the elder of the family said.

"I didn't mean to create a mess Dad!"

She glared at him.

Pulling out a cover from his pocket "Vivaan! Imli! This is a small gift from my side!"

And Chakor cleared her troth "Well both of us!" the young man added grinning at his secret lady love.

'What does he think of himself? Always making us angry!'

'He is just playing with us!' her mind.

'Oh really?'

"What was the need for the trip bro?"

"Spending time with you all would the best thing we could wish for!" the newly wedded couple declare.

"You both are going! And that is final!" the sports teacher said.

"Hmmm" the married couple hummed while the old man smiled at the lovely future generation of his small family.

With all the guests leaving the mansion, the event took its end.

"All packed?"

"Yeah Di!"

"Both of you take care of yourself!"

"Sure bro!"

"Children! Enjoy your trip! This is just the start of a new life! So enjoy!"

"Yes Papa!" the young couple replied in unison!

Taking the elder's blessing and hugging their respective sibling, the couple departed for their destination for a trip of 3 days.

"You look happy!" he said to her as their father left them alone to get his sleep.

"I am!" she replied.

"That's good!"

She simply smiled.

"There is still the stain of the kumkum on your forehead!"

"I didn't have enough time to clean it! Marriage then had to take care of guests and then helping them pack luggage!"

He smiled this time.

"You seem to be tiered!"

"Yeah! Going for a long sleep!" he said as both came to stop in front of the room which was for both the ladies but now Chakor's. 'If you need anything! I'm just next to you to ask!"

"Sure!"

"Good night!"

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Thank you for reading buddies!

Hope you all liked it!

Let me know your views by comment!

See you all next week!

Happy weekend!

Part 31 : My Love

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 7 years ago

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