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Posted: 8 years ago
I swear to God if the baby's dad is Suraj I will absolutely cry. On the contrary I think he is not because you cannot do this to me. (MAKE IT SHIKHU'S).
Amazinggg. Feels like I am watching a detective show. With little naughty/romantic bits.

Why do I have a feeling that it is not KN who wants to kill Suraj? I mean, he must have had plenty of opportunity to kill him before, why suddenly now? And also he is in 'jail'.

Cant wait for the next PM for the update! Do it asap!!

-Sanu
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Khushi_Dillse

You are really really wonderful writer...Outstanding update...

matalb kya chahiye ek kahani main...drama, plotting, romance, action, mystery, thrill everything is here...your every update for me like roller coaster ride...still mystery continue kya hai wo peppers...And for me more shocking is that child called suraj daddy...??? 😲 like really or suraj ne bhi kitni casually liya...Suraj has child...okay now chakor also know about this...per kya wohi imli ka bacha hai...may be coz your earlier update I was read when chakor said suraj give her lift imli's face brighten up, pata nahi iss oe chakor ka kya reaction hoga...But now suraj is in danger and chakor solved puzzle about surajmukhi and she would be rescue him...
My favourite part was Suraj with baby... this part was so emotional and best part...poor suraj jo use nahi mila wo chahta wo uski niece ko mile...even chakor also cry...love sukor moments and my action hero suraj achha sabak sikhaya us cockroach ko...


Bichadte waqt mere saare aib ginaye usney...,
Sochte hain jab mile the tab kon sa hunnar tha hum main...!!!


Thank you so much, Khushi! 😳

You'll find out about the kid in the next bit...and that's a good observation about Imli's reaction to Chakor mentioning Suraj.

I loved writing the scene with the baby (and the cockroach), so thank you! 😃

Aah that is some lovely poetry...and so apt for them! Thank you Khushi 😳 Is it yours?
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

I swear to God if the baby's dad is Suraj I will absolutely cry. On the contrary I think he is not because you cannot do this to me. (MAKE IT SHIKHU'S).

Amazinggg. Feels like I am watching a detective show. With little naughty/romantic bits.

Why do I have a feeling that it is not KN who wants to kill Suraj? I mean, he must have had plenty of opportunity to kill him before, why suddenly now? And also he is in 'jail'.

Cant wait for the next PM for the update! Do it asap!!

-Sanu


Muahaha my lips are sealed 😈

Thank you Saanu 🤗

KNR is not in jail...he was let out more than a year ago! He's happily prancing all around Azadgunj, up to no good 😆 Chakor almost ran into him at the haveli after she saw the pit.

I think the next one will take some time...let's see!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Aradh_27


Thank you so much, Khushi! 😳

You'll find out about the kid in the next bit...and that's a good observation about Imli's reaction to Chakor mentioning Suraj.

I loved writing the scene with the baby (and the cockroach), so thank you! 😃

Aah that is some lovely poetry...and so apt for them! Thank you Khushi 😳 Is it yours?

Not really...I'll love to write but kuch mere hai or kuch jo ache lagte hai likh deti hu...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update. I absolutely love this Suraj and Chakor. Gripping drama, Chakor always hugging and grabbing Suraj. Sweeet!!
Looking forward to the next update.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -Namita-

Amazing update. I absolutely love this Suraj and Chakor. Gripping drama, Chakor always hugging and grabbing Suraj. Sweeet!!
Looking forward to the next update.


Namita 🤗 Thank you!!

Yeah, she's Mrs.GrabbyHands even in an Alternate Universe 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Aradh_27

The second and last installment of chapter five will be up soon.

Since there were no takers for the last round, I'll provide the answer to my question. The scene referenced was the Diwali one with Chakor finding the pit and the sunflower seeds.

In case anyone wants the sneak peak of the next chapter (which I'm hoping y'all will 'cos this one ends on a cliffhanger 😆), answer this question-

A certain scene, a milestone in Suraj and Chakor's journey from a December ep that had us all going crazy has been re-written in this chapter. What am I referring to?

This is open to all 😊

Do hit the like button and leave a comment if you are enjoying the read! Would love to hear some guesses about who's behind it all as well!


hey...tum humare liye ro rahe hai...and the run and hug in the warehouse.
also aanken pod denge bit :)

loved all the little references...the palthu shikari kutha's, the grave of sunflowers, the photos in jacket.
Love this Suraj and Chakor - Aradhana - if only the CVs can take some cues from your writing.
Read through it all in a stretch. Will wait for the next installment.


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Posted: 8 years ago
My choices for who is behind the shooter - Ranjana, her dad, Vivaan, Ragini, KN...in that order...will wait for more clues.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ipkrr


hey...tum humare liye ro rahe hai...and the run and hug in the warehouse.
also aanken pod denge bit :)

loved all the little references...the palthu shikari kutha's, the grave of sunflowers, the photos in jacket.
Love this Suraj and Chakor - Aradhana - if only the CVs can take some cues from your writing.
Read through it all in a stretch. Will wait for the next installment.



Priya, you're absolutely right...and you even picked up on the Dubai guy reference, but a little late...sorryyy 😕 There will be a next time though, if I ever get the time, peace and quiet to continue the story 😆

So glad you liked the story and this version of the characters😳 Knew you'd get all the references...you missed out on one though...the date ring any bells? 😆

As I said before, maybe a while...hoping I'll be able to get it done before I begin internship because the next chapter will feature a scene I think (and hope) everyone will love!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ipkrr

My choices for who is behind the shooter - Ranjana, her dad, Vivaan, Ragini, KN...in that order...will wait for more clues.


I'm obviously not gonna say anything now...but keep the guesses coming!

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