SuKor SS: The Name of the Game (Discontinued.)

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(Formerly titled A Man After Midnight.)

This is based on an idea I came up with during a chat session with the amazing Fia (fia21).

There is some mature content in the fic (only implied, nothing too explicit).

So read on, if you do not aspire to be a member of the Mahaanta Squad (i.e. Chakor-Vivaan-Imli, credit goes to Fia for coining the term).

The fic is set in an AU (alternate universe) wherein Chakor stayed back with Bhagya and Arjun in Lucknow and everyone is two years older.

Chapter Index:

Part one: A Man After Midnight (Page 1)

Part two: Knowing Me, Knowing You (Page 5)

Part three: Does Your Mother Know? (Page 6)

Part four: I Have a Dream (Page 8)

Part five: Ring, Ring (Page 14)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Comments=love, so please be generous with them 😊. (No bashing of any characters/writer please 😆).

Liked what you just read? If so, then do check out my other fics!


My Suraj-Chakor centric mystery SS (currently in progress)

My OS series- As mushy as it gets! 😛

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aradhna, it was amazing. Loved it. Gosh if only it was a bit like this in the show and not full of all the Mahaanta!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Namita_

Aradhna, it was amazing. Loved it. Gosh if only it was a bit like this in the show and not full of all the Mahaanta!!!


Glad you liked it, Nami 😃 I know! They just over-do it with the mahaanta at times 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aruuu! That was so amazing! Loved it!

Chakor was quite bold and witty here, loved her.

And that prick Rakesh, good thing she kicked him out!

I felt bad for her, her dreams were shattered but it's fine as Rakesh turned out to be a a**hole.😆

And SuKor are takkar ke, even in an alternative universe!

Suraj saved her, and he knew it was Chakor! He almost called her Chakor, but saved himself on time😆

The dialogue regarding gun and raincoat had me cracking up😆

And Chakor invited him in? Wow! And Baahon main chale aao was playing 🤣Really set the mood hmmm...

Chakor initiated the kiss and took him to the bed, just can't believe! But I guess she was prepared, with the birth-control pill and all🤣

You didn't tell how was the hanky-panky? Superb? Amazing? Explosive? Did they see stars?☺️

And next morning, bomb phoot gaya Chakor ke sar pe, Aditya toh Suraj nikla!

Ab ho gayi Chakor Suraj ki aur Suraj Chakor ka😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I'll say it again. This is fantastic 👏

It would have been a sight to behold had something like this actually happened in the show. But I guess one night stands are reserved for the ravishing Imli devi only 🤢 . The Morality Police would have gotten an epileptic fit though 😆

Chakor needs to be this feisty in the show as well. I loved how your Chakor wasn't tied down by any inhibitions because the story wouldn't have moved forward in the direction you wanted or made any sense had she slept with a stranger if she was the president of the Mahaanta Squad.

Suraj, always the cunning, manipulative, handsome devil that he is. I can just imagine how satisfied he must have felt after accomplishing the task of getting into Chakor's bed by the way he greeted her the morning after. The element of surprise you included by making them change their identities in front of each other was really smart. Made the whole story a lot more entertaining.

I really hope you continue this into a TS. I know you'll do a great job with it. But only if you feel like it and have the time. No pressure!

Once again, loved this story. I love all your stories actually. You're spoiling me 😳😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: fia21

I'll say it again. This is fantastic 👏

It would have been a sight to behold had something like this actually happened in the show. But I guess one night stands are reserved for the ravishing Imli devi only 🤢 . The Morality Police would have gotten an epileptic fit though 😆

Chakor needs to be this feisty in the show as well. I loved how your Chakor wasn't tied down by any inhibitions because the story wouldn't have moved forward in the direction you wanted or made any sense had she slept with a stranger if she was the president of the Mahaanta Squad.

Suraj, always the cunning, manipulative, handsome devil that he is. I can just imagine how satisfied he must have felt after accomplishing the task of getting into Chakor's bed by the way he greeted her the morning after. The element of surprise you included by making them change their identities in front of each other was really smart. Made the whole story a lot more entertaining.

I really hope you continue this into a TS. I know you'll do a great job with it. But only if you feel like it and have the time. No pressure!

Once again, loved this story. I love all your stories actually. You're spoiling me 😳😆


Aww thanks, Fia ❤️

The stuff in bold is hilarious 😆 We hate Imli even more than TejNa 😈

I'l admit Chakor is very OOC. She probably wouldn't have done any of it even if she had married Vivaan in the show. But then again, Vivaan himself would've thought cheek pulling as suitable foreplay, I guess.

Welll, his coldness at the end wasn't for the reason you're thinking. If I do write a sequel to this, you'll find out what was going through his mind.

Nah, you're spoiling me with all your adulation. Hopefully, I'll be able to return the favour soon 😈
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aradh_27


Aww thanks, Fia ❤️

The stuff in bold is hilarious 😆 We hate Imli even more than TejNa 😈

I'l admit Chakor is very OOC. She probably wouldn't have done any of it even if she had married Vivaan in the show. But then again, Vivaan himself would've thought cheek pulling as suitable foreplay, I guess.

Welll, his coldness at the end wasn't for the reason you're thinking. If I do write a sequel to this, you'll find out what was going through his mind.

Nah, you're spoiling me with all your adulation. Hopefully, I'll be able to return the favour soon 😈



@Bold: 🤣🤣

He would have loved the milk drinking part in the beginning though 😆

Oooh suspense. I'm liking it already 😉 . Honestly, a lot of scenarios were running through my mind so I haven't exactly decided on what I think was his motive behind all this. But he was so caring and tender towards her when he asked her if she was sure she wanted her first time to be with him. That makes me think something else entirely was going on in his mind.

Damn it now I'm even more curious as to what happens next. Why did you have to end it on a cliffhanger you cruel woman? 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: fia21


@Bold: 🤣🤣

He would have loved the milk drinking part in the beginning though 😆

Oooh suspense. I'm liking it already 😉 . Honestly, a lot of scenarios were running through my mind so I haven't exactly decided on what I think was his motive behind all this. But he was so caring and tender towards her when he asked her if she was sure she wanted her first time to be with him. That makes me think something else entirely was going on in his mind.

Damn it now I'm even more curious as to what happens next. Why did you have to end it on a cliffhanger you cruel woman? 😛


@bold Yes he probably would've wanted the pre-suhaag raat ritual every time 😆

It's nothing complicated, so don't over think it. The real reason may end up being a disappointment. But I left it open-ended deliberately so I can change the original plot if I come up with something better 😈

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