SuKor SS: The Name of the Game (Discontinued.)

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gibbu

@gibbu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#131

So the mystery continues to deepen... the predator wants to kill at specified time n location... N Suraj was called daddyyy???

great update !

Loved the Sukor connect- the cockroach n babyroom seq, n Chakor moving a step away from her feel8ngs of lust

Seems like

we have no dearth of accomplished fiction authors on forum, (special mention to one amomg u whoz an IF-Rockerz who posted atleast thrice on this page )

... my own sad version of mystery ;(

Great job !

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#132

ok lame question!

errr aradhana..

are we to pm you the answer to your question or post it directly here?😆.

gibbu.
🤗.
i think i cracked your mystery. *preening like a peacock*
thankh ku...

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Aradh_27

@Aradh_27

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#133

Post it here, Nimmi 😆 Katheriene and Rajshree already got it right. Since I hadn't specified it was limited to the fastest person like the last time, I'll let it slide 😛

Thanks to all who commented! Will reply soon!

And yes, Gibbu, she is amazing <3

Edited by Aradh_27 - 8 years ago

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Aradh_27

@Aradh_27

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: katheriene
Interesting update👏
Loved the moments of sukor😊
Sukor part with the baby was adorable😊
So there is still mystery about the papers😲
Loved how suraj thrashed rakesh😆
The trap was for suraj, let's see how chakor saves her
The child calling suraj daddy seems like imli's son
The scene was from the episode where ragni planned to kill suraj & vivan saves him, I am still catching up with the previous episodes & not reached there
Waiting for next

Thanks a lot Katheriene!! Yep that's the right answer, so you can expect the sneak peek in your inbox, might be a while before I write though, so apologies in advance 😆

That's a good guess...it will all be revealed in the next part, so I won't say more!

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Aradh_27

@Aradh_27

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: Banjaaran.

i loved it Aradhana🤗

you will rock it mate. i love puzzle pieces. i hate guessing though. if i guess it right.. i'll be underwhelmed. so i take it one update at a time. and be surprised at the end. and i am sure you will shock us.

bestest wishes for the further story.
the journey is being kick ass so far. more milestones to come.yeahh!

you are free to completely take over my inbox sweetheart. i so love you for the way you love our Angel.🤗
truly touched.
love ya bas.

Same feelings on mysteries in general. But this one is so far away from the climax and the puzzle is less than a quarter assembled anyway, so if anyone's able to guess the ending at this stage, I will utaarofy aarti. 😆

I feel the thread should be more lively though, especially since it's a mystery, otherwise not much motivation for moi to pen this mammoth tale.

You're being a sweetheart by commenting so much here.

Love you back! 🤗

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Aradh_27

@Aradh_27

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: Banjaaran.

awww..
big waali jhappis 'tigger to pooh' style.🤗.

Angel, kitten, maverick, bozo and co... and Viper stayed with you😆?

i just so love your love for Angel.
and love you ofcourse.

That's just such a cute visual 😳

I've left a list of my favorites on the Angel. thread. But yes, Viper will stay with me...in my nightmares. I just wanted to convey what a creep Rakesh was and "slimy snake" popped into my head. What to do? 😛

Not commenting on your res'd comment so that you can unres. it sometime.

Let's keep spamming each other's threads like this so that I stand a chance to lose this Goldie pee color! 😆

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Aradh_27

@Aradh_27

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: geetkumar
Hi Aradhna,
The story is absolutely gripping. It's like a complete masala film. And I am absolutely enjoying it.

Hey, Geet!

Glad to hear from you and thanks a ton!

Masala film is what I think of it myself 😆 So thank you 😃

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Aradh_27

@Aradh_27

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: nycgal
My apologies, Aradhna!!🤔
I did read the story and was excited I got the reference that I went into PM mode..😆
You know how much I love your writing and this one is stellar as well..beauiful beautiful beautiful..

I CANNOT wait for the next update..

No problem, Rajshree 😆

Thank you thank you thank you! 😃

The answer you PMed me was correct-o, so keep an eye on your inbox!

I have two winners here, so the contest is closed...will make an exception for you Nimmi, since you already res'd 😈

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Aradh_27

@Aradh_27

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: gibbu
So the mystery continues to deepen... the predator wants to kill at specified time n location... N Suraj was called daddyyy???
great update !
Loved the Sukor connect- the cockroach n babyroom seq, n Chakor moving a step away from her feel8ngs of lust

Seems like
we have no dearth of accomplished fiction authors on forum, (special mention to one amomg u whoz an IF-Rockerz who posted atleast thrice on this page )
... my own sad version of mystery ;(

Great job !

Hey Gibbu!

Thanks for your comment and I'm happy I'm able to keep your interest level up 😃

Yep and there's a reason why...the specifics AND why I'm making him say it out loud...part of it (why the haveli and why on that date and time) I've hinted towards, the rest will be revealed in the next bit!

Hahaha so glad you mentioned cockroach in your comment. And thank you for liking my version of SuKor 😃😃

Our Nimmi is one of a kind, all right 😳 And that was a super sweet way of saying it!

Cheers!

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Riddhima

@Khushi_Dillse

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#140

You are really really wonderful writer...Outstanding update...

matalb kya chahiye ek kahani main...drama, plotting, romance, action, mystery, thrill everything is here...your every update for me like roller coaster ride...still mystery continue kya hai wo peppers...And for me more shocking is that child called suraj daddy...??? 😲 like really or suraj ne bhi kitni casually liya...Suraj has child...okay now chakor also know about this...per kya wohi imli ka bacha hai...may be coz your earlier update I was read when chakor said suraj give her lift imli's face brighten up, pata nahi iss oe chakor ka kya reaction hoga...But now suraj is in danger and chakor solved puzzle about surajmukhi and she would be rescue him...

My favourite part was Suraj with baby... this part was so emotional and best part...poor suraj jo use nahi mila wo chahta wo uski niece ko mile...even chakor also cry...love sukor moments and my action hero suraj achha sabak sikhaya us cockroach ko...

Bichadte waqt mere saare aib ginaye usney...,

Sochte hain jab mile the tab kon sa hunnar tha hum main...!!!

Edited by Khushi_Dillse - 8 years ago