MERE BROTHER KI DULHAN-SUKOR FF epilogue page 14 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Suraj ko ice cream chahiye haha so cute! And jealous SuKor are so adorable! Update soon!
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ENJOY CHAPTER 7

Recap
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"Put your hands off my husband", said Chakor gritting her teeth.
"Oh really, Suraj can't resist my charm and he not having any problem with me so why do you?" Said Riya smirking.
"Because the person whom you are touching is my husband with whom I have taken 7 vows in which one vow was to protect my husband from every evil eye and you are the most evil person. So back off unless I will shoot you and my husband knows well how good can I shoot", said Chakor.
"Correct, my biwi...oops.. correction...MRS. CHAKOR SURAJ RAJVANSHI is an amazing shooter. And she can shoot you too Riya", Suraj said and put his head on Chakor's shoulder.
"So do you get it or not. Stay away from my husband. Got it?" Chakor said to Riya and Riya backed out.
Seeing Chakor's this side, everyone was amazed.
Chakor caught Suraj's hand and took him with her but Suraj pulled her with him and Chakor landed on his chest.
"Biwi, I have to confess something. I am very very sorry. I have hurted you a lot. But I promise I won't hurt you ever. I have hurted you a lot. I am sorry", Suraj said holding his hands together.
"Suraj, let's go to our room. Come", Chakor said but Suraj nodded his head in no.
"Biwi, I want to eat icecream, please", said Suraj.

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"Icecream, are you mad Suraj. At this hour of time, you want to eat icecream", Chakor asked and Suraj nodded his head like a small child.
"Fine, let's go then, " said Chakor and asked about the car keys from Sheeku.
Chakor took the car keys and a drunk Suraj with her towards the car. She made Suraj sat on the passenger seat and she herself sat on the driver's seat.
After 40 minutes of driving, Chakor and Suraj reached the icecream parlour.
"Which flavour?", asked Chakor.
"Biwi, are you so much desperate for me? Very bad. We can continue this in our room, inside the car it will be very comfortable", Suraj said giggling .
It took a minute for Chakor to understand what Suraj was implying.
"Cheee, never in my dreams. Duffer, I am asking about icecream's flavour, not that", said Chakor.
"Chocolate with choco chips", said Suraj.
"Well, that's my fav. too", said Chakor in her mind.
Chakor went out of the jeep and went inside the icecream parlour for buying icecream.
There were three men who were ogling at Chakor and Suraj saw them.
"O hello madam ji, we also want icecream", a guy with sneered face said.
"Aye haye, kabhi hame bhi khila do icecream vo bhi apne komal haatho se", Another man said.
Chakor was totally pissed off but she didn't said anything. She quietly took the icecream and went out of the parlour, and went towards her car. The 3 men too followed her. Chakor gave the icecream to Suraj and went towards the driver's seat. One man came and hold Chakor's hand. She immediately turned and slapped that guy .
"Kutte kamine, ladki dekhi nahi ke laar tapkana shuru kar diya. Saalo, castrate kar dungi sabko", Chakor said angrily and the 3 men ran to save their lives.
Then she sat inside the car and drove.
"Biwi meri biwi, kya ladti ho tum, jhakkas, ekdum lady bheem ho tum", said Suraj .
"Bakwas band karo aur chup chap icecream khao", Chakor snapped to Suraj.
Then both returned to Rajvanshi Mansion. Everyone was sleeping except Ragini, imli & Vivaan.
The trio were waiting for Chakor and Suraj to arrive.
As soon they came, Imli went forward to help Suraj but he stopped her showing his palm. He kept his hands on Chakor's waist and told her to took him to their room.
Chakor silently took him to their room and guided him to their bed. Chakor made him lie on the bed and turned to leave but Suraj holded her hand , " BIWI, tum jo ye gair mardo se has has ke baatein karti ho na, mujhe bilkul acha nahi lagta. Tum meri ho sirf meri.
Koi bhi Lallu Lalit tumhe PJ suna ke, tumhe hasa ke mujhse door nahi kar sakta. TUM MERI HO SIRF MERI. TUM MERI HO."

Chakor was both shocked and stunned. But she also felt something ticklish inside her stomach. She was confused about her feelings. Her mind retorted her heart. Her heart told about her newly developed feeling but her mind was not agreeing to her heart. This feeling was different and new. This possessiveness of Suraj's made her felt something new. She didn't developed this feeling even with Vivaan. With thinking all about this, she slept.

On the other hand, Ragini was continously getting phone calls. She tiptoed out of her house and took her car and went out. After some time, she reached a place where a person was there with a bike. Ragini went out of the car and hugged that person.
"I missed you so much", said Ragini.
"Lier, if you would have missed me , you wouldn't have been dancing with Lalit", that person said.
"Offo, he is bhai's friend. That's it. Chalo ab gussa mat ho, sorry", Said Ragini holding her ears.
"Hmmm...pehle 3 magical words to bolo".
"Aata Majhi Satakli", Ragini said laughing.
"Ragini..."
"Okay, Okay I love you Adi", Ragini said blushing hard.
"Haye, I love you too Ragi", said Adi.
"Acha Adi, what do you think, about Chakor and Suraj? " Ragini asked Aditya.
"I don't know Ragi, what is happening actually. It is so confusing. Chakor loves Vivaan and is married to Suraj and Imli loves Suraj but she is married to Vivaan. Everything is messes up", said Aditya.
"You are saying it because you didn't see what happened today", Said Ragini.
"I was present in the party Ragini."
"No, not in the party. Today morning, I saw Suraj bhai and Chakor on each other looking each other continously, then at evening in the garden, I think this is the fate. Chakor loved Vivaan but her life changed overnight. Now she is tied in a inseparable bond with Suraj bhai.She will definitely change him, she will bring the real Suraj in front of the world", Ragini said looking at the sky.
"And I will always be there. For you", aditya said looking at Ragini. And then Ragini embraced herself into him.

The next morning Suraj woke up with a hangover, he groaned with pain and opened his eyes, as soon he open his eyes, he saw a glass of lime juice with few tablets. He rose his head and saw an angry Chakor.
Suraj silently took the tablets and the glass of lime juice from her. He gulped the tablets and lime juice quickly in fear. Then Chakor went out of the room and Suraj shook his head in disbelief.
"Junglee Billi. Chalo Suraj Babu, ready ho jao varna Junglee Billi shikar kar legi tumhara", he said to himself and laughed.
After 15 minutes , Suraj came down towards dining hall. Vivaan , Imli, Ragini were already there and Chakor was serving food to Imli. Suraj came and asked for tandoori chicken but instead a bowl of salad and glass of cucumber juice was presented before him.
"Yeh kya hai, hum ye sab nahi khayenge, bakri nahi hai hum so ye ghaas fus khaaye", Suraj said scrunching up his nose.
" khana toh tumhe yahi padega, kal nashe mein jo harkat ki hai tumne, uski saza hai ye, chup chap jo mila hai vo kaho", Chakor scolded him.
"Sher bhooka reh lega par ghaas se dosti nahi karega" , Suraj said.
"Thik hai, jo marzi aaye vo karo", Chakor angrily said and Suraj left from there.

Suraj came back into his room and searched for his phone. Chakor too followed him.
Finally, after searching a lot, he succeeded.
He tried calling Shikhu but of no use, his phone balance was zero.
"Damn, how did balance is zero."
"Ahaan! Patidev, did you forget? Yesterday, you gave me a saree to wear. I didn't knew how to wear a saree , so I watched video tutorial in your mobile using internet." Chakor said smirking.
"Mad woman, you used 300 rupees for watching a video. O god! How come I married this stupid girl", Suraj said.
"Ditto", Chakor said smirking at him.
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Thanks a lot guys for support.
Love you all.
Ragini's lover is none other than Aditya.
First I thought to make this story longer, but now I have decided to keep it 10-12 shots only.
I have lots of Ideas roaming in my mind for Sukor.
Anyone wants to see the obsessive possessive side of Suraj, if yes, do tell me then I will publish my 2nd story too.
Thank you.

Edited by Jeenisha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Great update! Continue soon, waiting!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Just read all the epis , ...seriously you are truly talented ...loved your dailouges :- three magical words , aata majhi satakli 🤣 ,
Sher bhukha so jaega par ghas phus se dosti ni karega ,damn ...i will surely use this 😆

Plz do continue. Love your ff
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
I was waiting for this ...it's awesome. ..thank u dear..plz update soon ...and I will be very glad if u write another sukor story...I'm waiting ggg...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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greate cute update. loveing these careing posseve suraj so much. waiting for next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks a lot guys for support.
thankyou @sanyaeterna ,@vinlora , @princess2791 ,@sanju15k.

@vinlora i will soon update my new story as soon as i complete this one.

@sanju15k thanks a lot,well this talent comes from watching bollywood and tollywood movies.

@princess2791 soon suraj's truth will be revealed that why is he acting so possessive but this is nothing,my next story will be obsessive mad suraj for chakor.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
I loved the update. Please continue soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
wow! loved the update !!! waiting for more😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
awesome upt
drunk suraj was so hilarious
more than possessive suraj i want to see a possessive chakor
bcoz we all know how suraj will be possessive but to see chakor like that will be super fun...its just a suggestoin
waiting for nxt part
cont soon

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