MERE BROTHER KI DULHAN-SUKOR FF epilogue page 14 - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Hey Jeenisha,
Read your FF at one go.. Awesome writing.. 😳👏 We have so many things common in our sukor story... We expect the same from sukor it seems 😆The saree, ice cream... 😉😛 Loved it.. Continue soon.. 😃

P.S : Update your index.. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

So interesting! Imli was lying, I have a feeling that she's lying in the show as well. Jo bhi hai, this was very nice!! Update soon, and one point, plz edit the title everytime you update, so that we know that you have posted a new chapter.

If u don't know how to, I will tell you. Just go to the first page to your post, there is an EDIT POST option below the post. Click that and edit the topic, just add UPDATED CHAPTER x after YEH DILLAGI - A SUKOR FF, and then click UPDATE POST.


glad you liked the chapter and thanks for your suggestion. i will surely do it in future.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: princess2791

interesting and dhamakedar twist. finally kn is changing; imali's truth comes out now i am waiting for suraj's change. waiting for next update.



thanks.
and yes kn is changing and suraj will soon too change.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
important note
hello sukorians.
actually, I am thinking about changing my story's name from yeh dillagi to mere brother ki dulhan as I have decided to end my story in a different way.
whole story was full of tashan between sukor so I want to end my story like this.
hence, I decided to change my story's name. what say?

soon I will update a sukor vm and teaser for my 2nd story and an os is on the way.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: Jeenisha

important note
hello sukorians.
actually, I am thinking about changing my story's name from yeh dillagi to mere brother ki dulhan as I have decided to end my story in a different way.
whole story was full of tashan between sukor so I want to end my story like this.
hence, I decided to change my story's name. what say?

soon I will update a sukor vm and teaser for my 2nd story and an os is on the way.


Okk no problem😆

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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
no problem. waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jeenisha

important note
hello sukorians.
actually, I am thinking about changing my story's name from yeh dillagi to mere brother ki dulhan as I have decided to end my story in a different way.
whole story was full of tashan between sukor so I want to end my story like this.
hence, I decided to change my story's name. what say?

soon I will update a sukor vm and teaser for my 2nd story and an os is on the way.


Tooo much to come.. Yeay !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb upt
finally imli's truth is out
loved the upt
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jeenisha

important note
hello sukorians.
actually, I am thinking about changing my story's name from yeh dillagi to mere brother ki dulhan as I have decided to end my story in a different way.
whole story was full of tashan between sukor so I want to end my story like this.
hence, I decided to change my story's name. what say?

soon I will update a sukor vm and teaser for my 2nd story and an os is on the way.

sahi h ... 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 9
Recap
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"why are you blaming her Chakor" , said Vivaan.
"why are you blaming her. She loves Suraj and that's why she did this but she is not like you who cheated your love. by proving Imli's doings you will not be proved as innocent. you were,you are and you will be a cheater", said Vivaan and Chakor was shocked.
first time in her life,she doubted about her decision.
"did I loved a wrong man who didn't even trusts me", asked Chakor to herself.
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Chakor felt her world spinning. her head was burning in pain.
she was about to fall down whe Suraj caught her.
"doctor, please check her", said Suraj panicking.
The doctor which Chakor brought came into action and checked chakor.
"Probably, she is stressing a lot recently and so she fainted " , the doctor said.
"another drama", Vivaan mumbled which didn't went unheard by Suraj. He shot a glance at Vivaan and glared at him.
"shut up, just shut up every one. This girl, which has done so much for you all , today has become evil for you.
Vivaan because of this girl you are out of your drugs and you are blaming her of cheating you.
Imli , this girl had agreed to our terms and she lost her marathon match just for you and what did you did,you blamed her for snatching your love? it's love ,it's just your infatuation and nothing else. do you even know what is love? no you don't ",Said Suraj shouting at Vivaan and Imli .
"Chakor, please please wake up. Chakor look, I am the biggest villain in your life,right? Then come on,fight with me. I can bear your tantrums but not these . Please wake up", suraj said almost crying.
and soon,chakor slowly regained her sense. seeing her awake, suraj put her in a bone crushing hug.
"stupid girl, do you even realise what you have done. I was so worried about you. if anything would have happened to you , then ..." suraj said but Chakor cut her off.
"suraj I am fine. I am perfectly fine",said Chakor and broke the hug.
"seems like Chakor is alright now,so suraj pack up your things and move to the stable.the place where you belong" said KN with a stern face.
Suraj looked at him and said with a blank face and said," sure I will go but before that I would like to show you all something ",said Suraj and asked everyone to follow them . Chakor was unable to walk and hence, Suraj picked her up and moved out of the room. Chakor saw Vivaan and Imli giving her cold stares so said ," suraj put me down,every one is looking at us", Chakor said shyly.
"you are not well and want to walk . wow,what a smart woman you are ",suraj said.
"I am not woman, I am girl",chakor said huffing.
"beautiful stupid woman", suraj said.
Chakor 's cheeks flushed when Suraj said her beautiful.
her anger melted when Suraj said beautiful to her.
But she still kept a stern face and didn't said anything.
Suraj brought chakor outside the haveli where the whole basti people were there.and three people were lying on ground who were badly bruised.
Chakor immediately recognised those persons. They were those who misbehaved with Chakor last night.
Suraj saw confused peoples around him.
He said , " I know everyone is confuse who are they and why they are beaten up so badly. I will tell everyone. These dogs, tried to misbehave with my wife yesterday, and I was drunk but I noted all of them".
then Suraj looked at those guys and kicked each of them.
"what do you all think,you will misbehave with my wife and I will leave you? I was drunk but that doesn't mean that I was not paying attention , my eyes were 24*7 on my wife." suraj said to them and started beating them badly.
He was continously beating them and in order ,his knuckles even got hurt.
seeing his new avatar, Chakor was scared of him for the first time in her life. His face was hard as stone and his knuckles were white which were now bleeding. Still she mustered up and went up to him. she kept her hand on his left arm and he immediately stopped . Suraj turned and looked at Chakor and she told him to leave them. Suraj once again glanced at them and then left them all.
<<fast forward >>
suraj was packing his stuff as KN told him to move out of the house. soon,chakor entered the room. Suraj saw but continued packing.
He said , "look,take care of yourself and keep eating your medicines and don't stress a lot".
He was about to say more but Chakor started crying. Suraj immediately went to her and asked,"Chakor, what happened now?why are you crying? "
"Vivaan ",said Chakor.
hearing Vivaan 's name , Suraj 's heart sank a little.
'what is happening with you Suraj, it has been only 3 days since you got married and losing yourself to her', suraj 's mind said.
'ya but have lost yourself to her since the day you saw her,the day when she entered the haveli and called you bhaiyaa,you were irked. don't you',his heart retorted .
Suraj blocked his thoughts that were emerging in his mind and heart.
"what...what happened to Vivaan? "asked Suraj.
"I went to him and tried explaining myself and he... He told me to prove my love for him . and he... He told me... He told me to divorce you ", said Chakor crying.
"and what did you said ", asked Suraj fearing that his thoughts may turn into reality.
"I said him I can't & then he said I am a cheater, even mai baapu aren't listening to me , they are angry with Imli but they aren't even looking at me." Chakor said.
"you can leave me, divorce me and you are free", suraj said.
Chakor suddenly looked at him and found him staring at floor.
"I won't divorce you", said Chakor which made suraj look at her.
"what", asked Suraj as he couldn't believe his ears.
"I said I won't divorce you,it is because of you only", said Chakor.
"because of me ? how ", asked Suraj tilting his head to one side.
"how can I trust you that you will take care of yourself ? moreover, you have teased me a lot, so now it's payback time. I am chakor", said Chakor but Suraj ' s heart sank a little hearing Chakor but the next words of her made him the happiest man on earth.
"I am chakor, chakor suraj rajvanshi and I won't leave you so easily. There are lots and lots of torture for you." said Chakor smiling .
"ahaan! Chakor Suraj Rajvanshi ", asked Suraj cocking his eyebrows and now it was Chakor' s turn to get embarrassed.

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That's it for today.
anyone want to know suraj 's POV? ?
I have been watching Udaan lately very intensely so I have cooked up a nice story and nice end.
till then
bye.

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