MERE BROTHER KI DULHAN-SUKOR FF epilogue page 14 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow nice suraj sitting her beside lovely romance between sukor and he filled sindhoor on head...bur waitting for the precap drunk suraj

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sailuja

Wow nice suraj sitting her beside lovely romance between sukor and he filled sindhoor on head...bur waitting for the precap drunk suraj


actually i got this idea from sadda haq season 1.
well many people are saying that chakor did not believe in this marriage crap thing,if yes,then why does she is wearing mangalsutra and sindoor?????
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Wow!!! Love it. Such a cute story!!! Please update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
superb updates
loved all the 5 parts
read in a go
more than vikor i think sukor has more chemistry
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Here comes Chapter6

Recap
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Chakor was staring herself at the mirror but seeing Suraj, she became still. Suraj came forward seeing Chakor's reflection in mirror.
He kept his chin on Chakor's shoulder and said," Biwi, tum toh kayamat lag rahi ho par kuch toh kami hai iss solah sringar mein"

"Huh, kya bol rahe ho? Sab toh perfect hai", Chakor said.

Suraj took the vermillion/sindoor and put it on Chakor's head(maang)

"Ab lag rahi ho Mrs.Suraj Rajvanshi", said Suraj.

He knew that there would be many men in the party so he didn't want anyone staring at her beautiful wife. By putting sindoor on her head, he felt as if she was his.
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Suraj looked at Chakor and said, " come, let's go down. The party has started."

Chakor nodded and followed him.
They both reached the stairs and the spotlight fell on them.
Suraj looked at the party and saw each and every men staring at Chakor and Chakor was feeling uncomfortable under their gazes.
Suraj kept his hand on Chakor's waist and smiled at him.
Chakor looked at him and smiled looking at him.
They both came down and were looking the perfect couple.
Suraj took Chakor with him and introduced Chakor each and every guest as his wife.

Soon, a girl came and she hugged Suraj




"Hey, Suraj how are you", she said in sugary voice but it sounded s**trry to Chakor.
Chakor snorted looking at her.

"Hey, Riya,Riya Somani.right,how are you?" Suraj said and hugged her again.
"I am good Suraj but I am angry, you got married and didn't even informed me", she said pouting.
"Aww i am sorry babes", said Suraj.
"Atleast I am better than her", said Riya.
"And I am best than you because I am not clingy like you", said Chakor and she went away from there.

"Hello beautiful", Chakor heard a voice and turned to look at the person.
Her eyes stopped on the face which was extremely handsome, he was fair with a charm and black jet hairs.




"Hey, do I know you?" Asked Chakor with a smile.
That person chuckled and said," no,bit i know you. Marathon Ace Runner 501, Chakor. I am Lalit,Lalit Trivedi. I was friends with Suraj and Riya when we studies together in Boston. I too came here on the day of your marriage's sangeet."
"Oh,I am sorry but I could'nt recognise you", said Chakor apologetically.
"No no,it's not a problem", said Lalit.
Chakor founded a good friend in Lalit and soon,they were comfortable with each other. His lame jokes made Chakor laugh which she forgotten to do in past 2 days.
"Okay,now tell me how do cut the roads?",asked Lalit to Chakor.
"Ummm...", Chakor pretended to think but miserably failed.
"It's simple,by laughing",said lalit.
"How?", chakor asked.
"Because haste haste cut jaaye raste...", said Lalit.
"Shutup,this was the lamest joke ever",said Chakor and punched Lalit.
Both Chakor and Lalit were enjoying each other's company but there was one person who was disturbed by their talks, none other than Suraj Babu.
Riya was continously chatting nonsense tp Suraj but his eyes were fixed on Chakor and Lalit.
He was about interrupt them but before that Imli came and took Chakor with them.
After half an hour , Chakor returned and she was looking happy, smile was visible on her face.
"You should be like this Chakor. Happy , smiling look tension is lowering down by your smile", said Lalit as he approached her.

"Ahaan! So are you a doctor Mr. Pandit?", asked Chakor.
"Arrey Nahi Nahi", said Lalit.
"Arrey Haan, Haan", said Chakor.
"Guys, ye haan naa karna band karo and come to the dance floor", Ragini said and pulled Chakor and Lalit.
Chakor was about to say no but then she saw Suraj with Riya.
In anger, Chakor held Lalit's hand and took him to the dance floor.
They both danced together on many songs such as
Phirr Mohabbat
Abhi Abhi
With each paragraph of a song, the partners were changed.
And this time the partners were Chakor Suraj .

Betahasha tu yaad aata hai
Jaane kya hona hai tere mere darmiyaan
Mujhse hi mujhko tu churata hai
Jaane kya hona hai tere mere darmiyaan
Ishqe di lat tadpaave
Dil na lage jab dil lag jaave
Ishqe di lat tadpaave
Dil na lage jab dil lag jaave

Kyun chaand se ho jode umeede
Ik doosre se aa roshni le
Kyun hum alag yun lete hain saanse
Ik sans mein hi aa dono jee le
Aise mile phir na ho juda
Ishqe di lat tadpaave
Dil na lage jab dil lag jaave
Ishqe di lat tadpaave
Dil na lage jab dil lag jaave
Beghar thhe saare sapne humare
Aake mila hain tu aashiyan sa
Jaayenge kaise hum door tujh se
Tu saath chalta hai aasmaan sa
Hain pyaar kaisa jadoo bhara
Ishqe di lat tadpave
Dil na lage jab dil lag jaave (x2)
Betahasha tu yaad aata hai
Jaane kya hona hai tere mere darmiyaan
Mujhse hi mujhko tu churata hai
Jaane kya hona hai tere mere darmiyaan
Ishqe di lat tadpaave
Dil na lage jab dil lag jaave (x2)

The song ended and Suraj and Chakor were in each other's arms.
Their trance were broken by the hootings of the people.
Soon Chakor parted away and left the dance floor.

<<Fast Forward > >
Chakor was talking with the guests present over there with Lalit around her and Suraj was...well what he could do. Just stare at his beautiful wife and drink.
Soon, Chakor heard some noises. She turned her head and saw Suraj full wasted on the bar counter and Riya beside her. She was trying to get close to him and he was pushing her away.
This angered Chakor and she went towards them.
"Put your hands off my husband", said Chakor gritting her teeth.
"Oh really, Suraj can't resist my charm and he not having any problem with me so why do you?" Said Riya smirking.
"Because the person whom you are touching is my husband with whom I have taken 7 vows in which one vow was to protect my husband from every evil eye and you are the most evil person. So back off unless I will shoot you and my husband knows well how good can I shoot", said Chakor.
"Correct, my biwi...oops.. correction...MRS. CHAKOR SURAJ RAJVANSHI is an amazing shooter. And she can shoot you too Riya", Suraj said and put his head on Chakor's shoulder.
"So do you get it or not. Stay away from my husband. Got it?" Chakor said to Riya and Riya backed out.
Seeing Chakor's this side, everyone was amazed.
Chakor caught Suraj's hand and took him with her but Suraj pulled her with him and Chakor landed on his chest.
"Biwi, I have to confess something. I am very very sorry. I have hurted you a lot. But I promise I won't hurt you ever. I have hurted you a lot. I am sorry", Suraj said holding his hands together.
"Suraj, let's go to our room. Come", Chakor said but Suraj nodded his head in no.
"Biwi, I want to eat icecream, please", said Suraj.

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Another update!
Thank you for all your support.
I am very happy that you all liked my story.
Okay , readers I have a confusion.
Bolna song was for VIKOR , can you suggest me a song for SUKOR so that I could use in my fan fiction.

By the way the role of RIYA SOMANI is played by SRITAMA MUKHERJEE
and the role of LALIT PANDIT is played by ANUJ SACHDEVA.

Thank you once again.

PRECAP-" BIWI, tum jo ye gair mardo se has has ke baatein karti ho na, mujhe bilkul acha nahi lagta. Tum meri ho sirf meri.
Koi bhi Lallu Lalit tumhe PJ suna ke, tumhe hasa ke mujhse door nahi kar sakta.


Edited by Jeenisha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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jealous passive sukor for each other their dance and thwn drank suraj confesaing his feeling hyee so beautiful. excellent update. waiting for next. please update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: princess2791

jealous passive sukor for each other their dance and thwn drank suraj confesaing his feeling hyee so beautiful. excellent update. waiting for next. please update soon.



thank you. I really want Suraj to get possessive for Chakor in the show. he will but not so soon so I am updating it in my book.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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loving this side of suraj
wish to see this on screen too
waiting for nxt part
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Possessive sukor...hmmm ..interesting. ...loved ur story a lot...when ur updating next part...plz update as soon as possible. ...and plzzz plz make it lengthy one...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
wow excellent love blossom between sukor interesting waiting for next update 👍🏼

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