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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Phlo

Ajj to Meri chandi aayi hai Kya mast mast updates padhne ko mil rahi hai rekhu di aur tune dono ne Kamal Kar Diya kitna mazza aaya mujhein smiley31smiley31

Dono chapters kitne aachein the pragyu it's awesome smiley42smiley42malhar ne kallu ke liye punishment Tak le li Bina kuch kahein yaar he is so sweet aur rajat kitna acha friend hai smiley20smiley20sahi kiya mallu ne badhiya smiley32smiley32aisein ladkon ke saath aisa hi hona chahiye bilkul sahi hua smiley32smiley32kallu ki mummy ne usseinacha khasa suna Diya like us mother's smiley36smiley36phir bhi kallu gayi ussein kitni chid ho rahi thi sanjana seesmiley37smiley37kallu akeli gayi chidkein par gir gayi ussein bachane ke liye malhar bhi kud Gaya smiley36smiley36ussien swimming aati bhi nahi thi smiley37par kallu ne bacha liya ussein bechari kitna dar gayi thi ...mallu ne last stroke khel diya keh Diya ki vo ussein...sanjana ka proposal accept karne se Mana Kar dein....haaaye Kya story hai proper school lovestory


Thank you very much Vanshu 💖💖💖


Tujhe story pasand aayi, bas mera likhna safal ho gaya :)

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Woow pragya, no words to say. Both the chapters are awesome just awesome. I really love malhar and rajat friendship.

It's just awesome, nothing more to say

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Posted: 3 years ago
#23

Pragya this is so cute..

Read chapters 1 and 2 together now.

Kallu aur Mallu class 11 ke students..

Such a different take, but 1997 based story.

Please don't say this would be your last FF. I enjoy reading your work because they are nothing related to the show.

Take your time but do write more. I'm sure you will get your inspirations.

Loved that carrom game..

The boys all standing in anticipation to see Luna waali sanjana..

Malhar teasing Kallu that she can't even ride a cycle properly.. 🤣

Kallu ka jalna.. 😆

And the best part is Malhar jo Kallu aur Rajat ko darana chahta tha... Woh khud dar ke maare ultiyan karne laga.. 🤣


I'm really sorry I couldn't read it yesterday.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: sathwi_99

Woow pragya, no words to say. Both the chapters are awesome just awesome. I really love malhar and rajat friendship.

It's just awesome, nothing more to say


Thanks a lot, Swathi 💞

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: rekha_crm

Pragya this is so cute..

Read chapters 1 and 2 together now.

Kallu aur Mallu class 11 ke students..

Such a different take, but 1997 based story.

Please don't say this would be your last FF. I enjoy reading your work because they are nothing related to the show.

Take your time but do write more. I'm sure you will get your inspirations.

Loved that carrom game..

The boys all standing in anticipation to see Luna waali sanjana..

Malhar teasing Kallu that she can't even ride a cycle properly.. 🤣

Kallu ka jalna.. 😆

And the best part is Malhar jo Kallu aur Rajat ko darana chahta tha... Woh khud dar ke maare ultiyan karne laga.. 🤣


I'm really sorry I couldn't read it yesterday.


Thank you so much Rekha 💕💕💕

I'm so glad you liked it.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thanks a lot Praku 💖

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I really have no words to express what a joy it was to read.

Finished reading up to now.

Loved that friendship between Rajat and Malhar..

Rajat saved him from embarrassing himself in the dance.

Malhar was super annoyed to see someone making fun of Kalyani and beat the heck out of the guy... But when tables turned on Malhar Rajat helped his friend though he didn't know what it was about...

This boys classroom fight was so natural..

Malhar is such a gem, he didn't put Kalyani's name in front and accepted the punishment meted out. Here too Principal ka diya punishment bhi Rajat ne share kiya..

So they've all gone on picnic..

Sanjana has proposed Malhar..

Kallu ko koi problem nahi hui..

Kalyani's boat capsized and Oh.. Poor Malhar jumped in to save Kalyani.

But it was him who needed the saving. kallu saved him and she cried thinking what could have happened.

Absolutely loved the last scene, where Malhar wants Kalyani to ask him to deny the proposal..

He only likes Kalyani..

Hope Kallu bhi jaldi samaj jaye..


I don't know how you get the energy to write such quick updates but they are absolutely fantastic and thank you for writing it..

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Posted: 3 years ago
#28

Just lovely yaar

Kya hi bolu typical 90s vibe aa rahi he

Antenna ka kissa toh har ghar ka he kya hi bole


And movie dekhne ka andaaz poor malhar lene ke dene pad gaya

And then I am just loving this please continue ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: rekha_crm

I really have no words to express what a joy it was to read.

Finished reading up to now.

Loved that friendship between Rajat and Malhar..

Rajat saved him from embarrassing himself in the dance.

Malhar was super annoyed to see someone making fun of Kalyani and beat the heck out of the guy... But when tables turned on Malhar Rajat helped his friend though he didn't know what it was about...

This boys classroom fight was so natural..

Malhar is such a gem, he didn't put Kalyani's name in front and accepted the punishment meted out. Here too Principal ka diya punishment bhi Rajat ne share kiya..

So they've all gone on picnic..

Sanjana has proposed Malhar..

Kallu ko koi problem nahi hui..

Kalyani's boat capsized and Oh.. Poor Malhar jumped in to save Kalyani.

But it was him who needed the saving. kallu saved him and she cried thinking what could have happened.

Absolutely loved the last scene, where Malhar wants Kalyani to ask him to deny the proposal..

He only likes Kalyani..

Hope Kallu bhi jaldi samaj jaye..


I don't know how you get the energy to write such quick updates but they are absolutely fantastic and thank you for writing it..


Thank you so much Rekha 💕💕💕💕


Your feedback really means a lot.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: GAYATHRINAYAR

Just lovely yaar

Kya hi bolu typical 90s vibe aa rahi he

Antenna ka kissa toh har ghar ka he kya hi bole


And movie dekhne ka andaaz poor malhar lene ke dene pad gaya

And then I am just loving this please continue ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️


Thank you so much Gayu ❣️❣️❣️

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