Alvida 1997

So maybe this is my last FF, to Priyu ji aapki farmaish par ye kahaani hamne Jabalpur ke oopar likhi h. To I know aap is forum par abhi nahi ho, magar jab bhi aap aaogi to this story is waiting for you.

19 July 1997 Shaam 4:45 Jabalpur

Carrom ka khel romanchak mod par hai aur blue Tshirt pehne ek lamba ladka baar baar ghadi dekhe jaa raha hai. Do ladke aur ek ladki. Teeno 11th class ke students hain.

Malhar: "Kallu, jaldi se apni chance chal na. Dekho, paanch baje jaa rahe hain."

Kallu, iski height par mat jaiye, dikhne me bhale hi ye class 7th ki student lage, lekin iske sayaanepan ke aage 112 saal ki daadi ko bhi inferiority complex ho jaye.

Kallu: Ticket hai na tumhare paas?

Malhar ne apne maathe par angootha firate huye poochha: Kahaan ki ticket? Aaj subah se tumhare paagalpan ke dauron ka quota poora nahin hua hai jo is samay fir daure parne lage tumhe?

Kallu: Nahin, mujhe laga paanch baje tumhari koi train hai jo chooti jaa rahi hai

Malhar ne fir apni gardan ghadi ki or ghumayi tabhi Kallu ne Rajat ko chup rehne ka ishara karte huye striker se nishaana lagaya aur gulaabi rang ki Rani goti jo ki carrom hole se bahut door thi, use apne haathon se uthaakar carrom hole mein rakh di.

Jaise hi Malhar ne Rani goti ko carrom hole mein dekha, vo chaunkte huye bola, "Ye kaise yahaan aayi? Ye to itni door thi. Tumne cheating kari hai na Kallu?"

Kallu ne kandhe uchkakar kaha, "Ab kisi ka saara dhyaan ghadi mein hi laga rahega to doosre to game poore concentration se khelenge hi na."

"Accha," Ab bas Malhar ke kaanon se dhuaan nikalna baaki reh gaya tha. Mohit ne kaale rang ki Raja vali goti uthayi aur Raani vale carrom hole me hi daal di, aur bola, "lo main jeet gaya game." Aur board par bachi saari gotiyaan vo carrom holes mein daalne laga.

Kallu kucch der to chup rahi, fir Malhar par cheekhi, "Apni ye badtameeziyaan to mere saamne kabhi dikhana mat." Kehkar vo carrom board par chadhkar Malhar ki taraf aayi aur use zor ka dhakka diya.

Mohit uthkar baitha aur bola, "Zyada hi haath nahin chalne lage hain tumhare, Kallu?" Kehkar usne Kallu ka haath peeche se mod diya.

"Rajat mujhe bachao..."

"Agar is nautanki ko tumne bachaya to meri tumhari dosti khatam, tumhe coffee bite ki kasam."

Rajat muskurakar bola, "Paanch baj gaye, Malhar. Jaldi jao varna Luna nikal jayegi."

Malhar bhaagta hua cchhat par gaya. Uske peeche Sonu. Fir Rajat.

"Yaar Luna ko dekhne ham dono aate hain, ye samajh mein aata hai, is Sonu ko Luna ko dekhkar kya milta hai?" Malhar ne Rajat se kaha.

"Main to roz yahi samajhne ki koshish karti hoon ki tum dono ko Luna mein kya dikhta hai? Theek thaak ho to dikhti hai. Kon si Aishwarya ya Sushmita ki tarah sundar hai vo? Usse kahin sundar to main hoon."

Malhar ne Kallu ki nakal utarte huye muh bigaadkar kaha, "Usse sundar to main hoon." Fir thoda gambheer hokar bola, "Pehli baat to Sanjana ko Luna chalaani aati hai. Aur to aur ek din maine use uski dost ke papa ki car chalate huye bhi dekha tha bilkul Dilli Bombay ki ladkiyon ki tarah. Aur tum to bina balancing wheels ke cycle bhi nahi chala sakti."

"Haan...haan...Apni Luna mein bithakar tumhe America le jayengi Sanjana madam," Kallu ne muh bichkakar kaha.

"Shh..." Malhar ne chup rehne ka ishara karte huye kaha. Aur nikli baingani rang ka naye fashion vala salwar suit pehenkar khule baalon ko lehraate huye Sanjana. Uski Luna ke shor se Mohit ke dil ki dhadkanein badhi ho na badhi hon, Kallu zaroor jal bhun rahi thi. Sanjana ki Luna jaise slow motion mein Kallu ki gali se nikal rahi thi aur Kallu ka man kar raha tha ki oopar se vo uski Luna par baalti bhar paani daal de. Sanjana koi buri ho aisa bhi nahin tha, Kallu se to vo hamesha acche se hi baat karti thi, sundar thi, padhne mein bhi hoshiyaar, ghar bahar sab kamon mein tez magar Kalluu ko vo footi aankh nahin suhaati thi. Luna darshan ka karyakram kitni der chala kisi ko pata nahin, magar Malhar ne chuppi todte huye apna galaa saaf kiya aur bola, "To Rajat aur Kalyani, kal Sunday hai aur Mummy Mama ke yahaan jaa rahi hain to..."

"To?" Rajat aur Kallu ne ek saath kaha. Kallu ko jab bhi Malhar uske asli naam se bulata tha, Kallu ko kucch ajeeb sa lagta tha.

"Maine video parlour se Video tape liya hai...Angrezi picture ka. To tum dono apna homework aaj hi poora kar lena, aur fir agla show mere ghar par subah theek gyaarah baje."

Rajat aur Kallu jab Malhar ke ghar aaye to ghar me ghup andhera tha. Aas-paas haathon se cheezein tatolkar Kallu jaise taise ek plastic kursi par baithi, kucch tootne ki aawaz aayi.

"Kya hai ye?" Dar ke maare Kallu chillayi.

Tabhi Malhar ki aawaz jaane kahaan se aayi, "Tum chips par baith gayi. Pata hai kal hi mujhe tuition padhaane ke paise mile the aur usse maine Uncle Chips aur Fanta ki bottles khareedi thin ham sabke liye."

"To mujhe kya pata tha? Normal log table par khaane ki cheezein rakhte hain, kursiyon par nahin."

"Malhar!" Rajat ne dheeme se kaha.

"Hmm..."

"Light kyon nahin jal rahi? Mere ghar mein to batti aa rahi hai..."

"Are vo, chalo tum log picture dekho," Malhar jhenpte huye hasne laga.

Kallu aur Rajat ne ek doosre ki taraf dekha fir Malhar ki taraf halanki us andhere mein kucch bhi dikh nahin raha tha.

Malhar ne sambhalkar jisse vo andhere mein gir naa jaye, VCR ki or gaya aur usme tape ko insert kiya, tabhi bijli kadakne ki aawaz aayi.

"Baarish hone lagi kya?" Kallu ne khidki ki taraf dekhkar kaha.

"Kallu, TV se aawaz aa rahi hai," Rajat bola.

Aur TV par kaale background mein nakhoonon se khurcha jaa raha tha- Shaitaan ki beti.

Dono Malhar ke jaal mein itni aasani se fas jayenge, ye to Malhar ko bhi nahin pata tha. Ab jaise jaise hi picture mein daraawne scene aayenge, dar ke maare Kallu aur Rajat zor zor se chillayenge aur Malhar, saal bhar unhe uski yaad dilaakar unka mazaak banayega. Video parlour vale bhaiyya se specially ye bolkar ki use sabse daraawni picture chahiye, ye wali picture li thi. Video parlour vaale bhaiyya ne kaha bhi ki beta koi is picture ko aadhe ghante se zyada nahin dekh paata, par Malhar kisi cheez se nahin darta tha. Aaj vo Kallu ko dikha dega ki vo sabse strong hai...

Aur aadhe ghante baad:

Malhar bathroom mein ulti par ulti kare jaa raha tha. Kallu ek haath se Malhar ki peeth sehla rahi thi aur ek haath se uske maathe par parne vaale baalon ko hata rahi thi.

Tabhi Rajat ne lights on ki aur kitchen se Malhar ke liye Paani ka glass la hi raha tha ki usne Kallu ko kehte huye suna, "Ab theek lag raha hai na tumhe." Aur Kallu dheeme dheeme Malhar ke baalon par haath fer rahi thi. Sach poocho to is samay Rajat ko dono is samay bilkul gudde-gudiya ki tarah lag rahe the, sundar-salone aur saari duniya se bekhabar...Chalo ab Rajat ko apne dil ki baat chhupaane ke liye zyada mehnat nahi karni hogi. Rajat ne dheere se paani ka glass zameen par aise rakha ki Kallu ko vo dikh jaye aur ek udaas muskan ke saath khidki ki ot mein khada ho gaya.

"Jab itna dar lagta hai to aisi picture ka video tape laye hi kyon?" Malhar sir jhukaye baitha tha aur Kallu use daante jaa rahi thi. "Poori picture mein tum dar ke kaaran rote chillate rahe aur fir bhi man nahi bhara to ulti karne lage."

"Scene dekha tha tumne? Usme heroine ke neele aankhon vale dost ke gale ke andar se Zameen se nikle haath ne uska dil, kaleja, poora digestive aur respiratory system nikaal liya tha. Chhi...raat ko kaise soungaa main?"

"Vaise tum to picture ko kaafi enjoy kar rahi thi," Rajat ne muskurate huye Kallu se poocha.

"Haan, to aisi movies matlab horror movies pasand hain mujhe," Kallu jhenpte huye boli."

"Tabhi chudail ki tarah din bhar ham sabka khoon choosti rehti ho. Bhooton ko to bhootiya picture hi acchi lagegi na," Malhar ne ulaahna diya.

"Ab ek shabd aur bola na tumne, Malhar," Kallu daant peeste huye boli, "To tumhare sapne mein vo picture vali shaitaan ki beti aaye na aaye, main zaroor aaungi tumhara gala dabaane."

"Vo to tum vaise bhi aati ho?"

"Kya bola tumne?"

"Arey, mera matlab roj mere saath sapnon mein tum chudailon vaali harkatein karne aati ho."

"Tumko to main..."

Aur Rajat kab unhe cchorr kar apne ghar chala gaya, dono ko pata nahi laga.

Ohhh pragyu kitni pyaari aur cute si story hai full 1997 Vali feeling kahan se likhti hai tu itna acha such a good story this is 🤗🤗

Bilkul uss era main poocha deti hai to humein sacchi 😳👍🏼 dono chapter kitne aachein the wowww 😍😍 kallu seventh standard main hai aur mallu 11 main Kya story hai Bhai mazza aagaya childhood lovestory Soo cutttttteeekallu malhar ke liyein jealous ho jati hai uff😆😆carom main cheating karkein hara Diya kallu chid ke maarein kaise jawab de rahi thi 🤣vo uss sanjana see jaal gayi 🤣🤣🤣kya tha vo scene aur ussien pasand nahi ki mallu ussein uskein poorein naam Se milayein awww our cutipie kallu dadiamama ki tarah knowledge rakhti hai to pakka mallu ussein uss naam Se kehkar chidata hoga main daavein ke saath keh sakti hoo ye sab bacchon ne apne bachpan main kissi na kisi see pakka Suna hi hoga 😜😜

Mallu bada ussein picture dikhane vala that khud dar Gaya aur ulti bhi ho gayi 😆aww my cute mallu kallu ko Ulta vo horror movie pasand aayi 🤣🤣rajat is adoring them mallu ke sapne main kallu ati hai ohhh 😳😳kallu kitni caring hai hamari how she took care of himboth are in their own world fighting and loving each other aaye haaye Kya achi updates mili mujhien waahhh mazza aagaya 😚😚😍😍😘😘😍😍

Abb to mujhein ye Bata ki tu humein kaha jaa rahi hai chodkar ki tu aajkein baad koi story nahi likhegi this is not fair pargyu tu humein chodkar jana chathi hai aur main Jo teri saari favorite stories like rahi hoo uska kaya you are leaving your stories which makes mee happy 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 pragyu main bura maan gayi Mai jaaa rahi hoo bass Saab jaa rahein chod chodkar this is not fair guys main abb aayi aur tum sab jaa rahein hoo 😭😢😢😢😤😤😤

Originally posted by: Phlo

Ohhh pragyu kitni pyaari aur cute si story hai full 1997 Vali feeling kahan se likhti hai tu itna acha such a good story this is 🤗🤗

Bilkul uss era main poocha deti hai to humein sacchi 😳👍🏼 dono chapter kitne aachein the wowww 😍😍 kallu seventh standard main hai aur mallu 11 main Kya story hai Bhai mazza aagaya childhood lovestory Soo cutttttteeekallu malhar ke liyein jealous ho jati hai uff😆😆carom main cheating karkein hara Diya kallu chid ke maarein kaise jawab de rahi thi 🤣vo uss sanjana see jaal gayi 🤣🤣🤣kya tha vo scene aur ussien pasand nahi ki mallu ussein uskein poorein naam Se milayein awww our cutipie kallu dadiamama ki tarah knowledge rakhti hai to pakka mallu ussein uss naam Se kehkar chidata hoga main daavein ke saath keh sakti hoo ye sab bacchon ne apne bachpan main kissi na kisi see pakka Suna hi hoga 😜😜

Mallu bada ussein picture dikhane vala that khud dar Gaya aur ulti bhi ho gayi 😆aww my cute mallu kallu ko Ulta vo horror movie pasand aayi 🤣🤣rajat is adoring them mallu ke sapne main kallu ati hai ohhh 😳😳kallu kitni caring hai hamari how she took care of himboth are in their own world fighting and loving each other aaye haaye Kya achi updates mili mujhien waahhh mazza aagaya 😚😚😍😍😘😘😍😍

Abb to mujhein ye Bata ki tu humein kaha jaa rahi hai chodkar ki tu aajkein baad koi story nahi likhegi this is not fair pargyu tu humein chodkar jana chathi hai aur main Jo teri saari favorite stories like rahi hoo uska kaya you are leaving your stories which makes mee happy 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 pragyu main bura maan gayi Mai jaaa rahi hoo bass Saab jaa rahein chod chodkar this is not fair guys main abb aayi aur tum sab jaa rahein hoo 😭😢😢😢😤😤😤

Arrey Vanshu, teri stories padhne to roz aati rahoongi pakka. Sach mein office me itna jhagda tension tha ki bas tere FFs se hi man halka hota tha. Kallu Mallu dono eleventh standard me h bas Kallu dekhne me chhoti lagti h due to having baby face. Pata office me sab chutti lekar baithe hain and mujhe roz raat ko nau saadhe nau baje ghar lautna par raha h. Saari FFs do do minute ke blocks mein padhti hoon. Bas cheezein thodi stable hone ka wait hai...sabse bada negative to ye hai ab koi future tracks ka bhi scope nahi h THR ka ki usse inspiration mile. Hopefully Poorva and Sehban ke new shows jaldi jaldi aayein...

Woww pragya... Such a cute childhood love story. I loved the feeling of that era.

Kallu kitni jealous ho rahi hai sanjana se, it's cute.

Both the chapters are super cute

Ohhooo rajjo likes kallu, it's a triangle aa. Bt kallu ko mallu pasand hai.

I just want a cute love story not a sad ending.

Originally posted by: Autumn09

Arrey Vanshu, teri stories padhne to roz aati rahoongi pakka. Kallu Mallu dono eleventh standard me h bas Kallu dekhne me chhoti lagti h due to having baby face. Pata office me sab chutti lekar baithe hain and mujhe roz raat ko nau saadhe nau baje ghar lautna par raha h. Saari FFs do do minute ke blocks mein padhti hoon. Bas cheezein thodi stable hone ka wait hai...sabse bada negative to ye hai ab koi future tracks ka bhi scope nahi h THR ka ki usse inspiration mile. Hopefully Poorva and Sehban ke new shows jaldi jaldi aayein...

Haan yaar abb koi inspiration mili hi nahi rahi hoo aagein kuch likh sakoon abb to baass poorane episodes dekh dekhe hi kaam chalaana pad raha hai

I hope sab kisi achein show main vapas aayein jaldi par don't leave us I will miss you smajhi kahi mat chodkein Jana tu humein 🥺🥺🤗🤗 tu jaldi jaldi apna kaam finish kar

Originally posted by: sathwi_99

Woww pragya... Such a cute childhood love story. I loved the feeling of that era.

Kallu kitni jealous ho rahi hai sanjana se, it's cute.

Both the chapters are super cute

Ohhooo rajjo likes kallu, it's a triangle aa. Bt kallu ko mallu pasand hai.

I just want a cute love story not a sad ending.

Thank you Swathi 💞 Love triangle to hai but with a twist 😜

Originally posted by: Phlo004

acha theek hai teri baat main samajh gayi par tu aate rehna aur take care baby thodi cheezein stable ho jaayien par haan main bata rahi hoo pls stories likhaana mat chodana teri stories mujehin bohot pasand aati hai

Haan yaar abb koi inspiration mili hi nahi rahi hoo aagein kuch likh sakoon abb to baass poorane episodes dekh dekhe hi kaam chalaana pad raha hai

I hope sab kisi achein show main vapas aayein jaldi par don't leave us I will miss you smajhi kahi mat chodkein Jana tu humein 🥺🥺🤗🤗 tu jaldi jaldi apna kaam finish kar

Chhor ke jaane ki to main soch bhi nahin sakti...kabhi nahin...apni Kallu urf Vanshu Rani se pitna thodi na hai. Vo to Atom Bomb Rane ji ka lihaaj kar jaati hoon, varna tujhe to main apne saath bhaga le jaoon.

Originally posted by: Autumn09

Chhor ke jaane ki to main soch bhi nahin sakti...kabhi nahin...apni Kallu urf Vanshu Rani se pitna thodi na hai. Vo to Atom Bomb Rane ji ka lihaaj kar jaati hoon, varna tujhe to main apne saath bhaga le jaoon.

Wow pragu.....teri stories hoti hi kuch alag hai....kitna beautifully describe krti hai sb kuch......i hope ki tu forum chodd ke na jaye