kalma ff:- LO SAFAR SHURU HO GYA (chapter 6 updated 15-08-2021) - Page 6

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Posted: 4 years ago
#51

Full high voltage drama chl rha hai ahiliya niwas mein toh🔥😛.

Nice update it was👍❤️.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Autumn09

Mast chapter tha Prakriti. Loved how chill Atharv is 😜 Sach me serial ki shaan hai ye ladka. Aparna to gayi.

Thank you pragya...glad you liked it

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Phlo004

It was awesome praku 🤩🤩

Kalyani theek hokar ghar aa gyi 😺

Malhar ne uski kitni care ki 😻😻

He has started realising something for her ,the doctors word leave a great impact on him

Kalyani cute jealousy

Malhar holding her all time pyaar haaye 😍😍

I don't know aatya ka kya hoga but she also doesn't have any place to live and her bitterness is there because what she has gone through Kalyani parents to usskein saath kya hona chahiye I don't know par I know tumne kuch acha hi socha hoga

The chapter is really good praku 😃😃

Thank you vanshu....mujhe laga ye chapter jyada kisi ko pasand nhi aayega isliye.....itna time lagya update krne m...varna ye part already drafts m saved tha

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Posted: 4 years ago
#54

Wow Prakriti..

Superb update..

Malharji feeling for Kallu..

Sabse best was Atharv answer to Sampu. Teri Aai bohot chikchik karti hai.. Chali gayi toh hume bhi aaram milega.. 🤣

Phek do Aatya ko bahar..

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Posted: 4 years ago
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nice update prakriti... loved how malhar himself pondering his thoughts. Aparna toh ab gayi ghar se, kitna satathi hai kalyani ko. now I'm excited to see their journey towards love.
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Posted: 3 years ago
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CHAPTER-6

Kalyani somehow convinced malhar and the family members to give aparna a chance to rectify her mistake.....they didn't want to but knowing how stubborn she is everyone gave upto her.....malhar was disappointed with her as she has given the vow of her to him which made him finally gave up..... everyone goes to their respective rooms....and anupriya gave a strict warning to kalyani to take care of herself and let her know if she wanted some help


At Kalma's room


She was resting on the bed and he was.....

Malhar- kalyani tumhara dimag kharab ho gya hai kya!!! Tum apni....apni jaan gawaa skti thi or tumhe abhi bhi inki padi hai jinhe tumhare iss haallat se koi fark nhi pdta.....kuch ho jata tumhe to kya krta main tumhare bina.....hmm bolo....

Kalyani didn't understand what she was supposed to say....but his last lines made her felt like she holds a special place in his heart

Kalyani- please aap shaant ho jaiye!!!! Main .....

Malhar- shaant ho jau main......shaant ho jau....itna sb hone ke baad bhi.....janti ho na kaha se aa rhi ho tum vo bhi kiski vajah se,....

He came to her and holding her hands said......

Malhar- please kalyani.....mt kro esa zindagi pichle mahino m itne dard or dhokhe de chuki hai.....or himmat nhi bachi hai mujhme......main tut jaunga kalyani!!!!


She never saw him this much broken even when he came home drunk on 26th jan.....she could not hold more she just hugged him and lightly patted his back....he didn't knew how to react but this was comforting and soothing him.....he never felt this with sampada.,... He was about to reciprocate to her hug.....but she lightly untangle her.....

Kalyani- malharji.....i am so sorry.... i am really sorry.....main kbhi esa nhi chahti thi.....bas ek chance malharji,....main janti ho jo bhi hua bilkul acha nhi hua par sirf ek chance malharji....main janti hu aatya kbhi nhi sudhrengi.....fi

Malhar- fir kyu kalyani.....kyu apni jaan ko khatre m dhakel rhi ho.....

Kalyani- sirf ek baar malharji.....bas ek baar agar agli baar aatya kuch bhi esa krti hai to....main nhi rokungi aapko main kbhi nhi rokungi.....i promise pinky wala.....


Malhar laughed on her last word which were relaxing to kalyani too.....when suddenly her shoulder pained.....

Kalyani- aahhh!!!!

Malhar- kya hua!!! Thik ho na???

Kalyani- haa vo bas shayad thoda support disbalance ho gya hoga isliye.....

Malhar- ek minute....

He adjusted the pillow as per her comfort and ordered her to rest till yhe maid was preparing the lunch.....

Pushka bai- malhar sahab!!!! Khana m kya banana hai???

Malhar- aammmm.....

Kalyani- mera na bohot man kr rha hai ki....

Malhar- tumse pucha kisi ne.....nhi na....chup baith ke aaram kro....

Kalyani- arey par.....

He glared her and his looks made her go sushhh

Malhar- abhi ke liye aap karela ka juice bana dijiye.....fir dekhte hai baad m

Pushka bai- ho sahab!!!!

Kalyani- what!!!!! Ye kya bol diya aapne??? Hosh m hai na aapn....main or karela ka juice.....kbhi nhi...yuck.....kalyani and karele ka juice can never go together.....

Malhar- kalyani and karela ka juice have to go together ....vo bhi abhi....samjhi tum

Kalyani- main karela ke juice nhi piyungi.....ye kya peene ko keh rhe hai aap....

Malhar- agar ek shabd or kaha....

Kalyani- sorry!!!!

Saying this she kept a finger on her mouth which looked cute to malhar....and he himself smiled.....

After a while......pushka bai came with the green juice in a glass which made kalyanj go ewww!!!!! Malhar too didn't like it but for her he have to pretend that its good.....


Malhar- there you go!!!! Dekho kalyani kitna acha hai....kitna natural hai jaldi se pilo for dawai bhi khani hai.....

Kalyani- acha or ye.....achaa!!!! Ek baar aap kyu nhi peeke dekhte....

Malhar- tum bed par ho ya main!!!!

Kalyani- filhal ke liye to hum dono bed pe hai....

Malhar- kalyani dekho faltu baat ke liye time nhi hai.....jaldi se piyo usko....

Saying this he hands over the glass to her and she looked it with disgusting looks which made him go laugh like a crazy ....when ....


Moksh- gli....gu...aaa....giluki....

Malhar- dekh moksh....ab tu hi samjha teri kalyani ko.....

Kalyani- usse kya shikayat kr rhe hai meri aap....pillu bhi bada hoke yhi kahega ki kitna ganda hota hai ye....hunnhh!!!!

Malhar- abhi ke liye nautanki ho gyi ho to pilo.....


With great difficulty she gulps it.... closing her nose.....Malmoksh enjoyed the scenario.....

Malhar POV- kya ldki hai ye.....ise to bappa bhi nhi sambhal paate honge.....itne nakhre.....ladkiyo ko samjhna ...ufff...jo bhi hai malhar hai to teri hi na.....poori ki poori....only yours

When kalyani's voice broke his POV.....

Kalyani- yuck!!!!! Itna kadva.....

Malhar- ho gya na....ab ye lo dawai....ise khaa ke so jana....okk

Kalyani- par moksh use dudh....

Malhar- use main dudh garam krke pila dunga....or fir sula bhi dunga....pehle tum to so jao.....

He gave her med and she ate it with water.....and made her pillows comfortable which shouldn't cause her any pain.....after this he made moksh drink the milk....and focused on his PS work files as commissioner himself asked him to lead on it


At AS 's room

Anupriya was passing through her room when she saw AS tensed and roaming her and there......she knocked on her room ann she asked her to come in.....

Anupriya- kya hua aau saheb....aap itni pareshaan kyu hai??? Koi baat hai kya???

AS- kya btaye tumhe anupriya.....tumhari beti humare kbhi samjh nhi aa skti.....itna sb kuch hone ke baavjood bhi usne kyu roka use.....aparna ne use.... Use najaayez kaha....humne kitni baar kaha....kitna dukhta hoga use....fir bhi sirf humare or rao saheb ke liye rok liya aparna ko tumhari beti ne.....kya kre kuch samjh nhi aa rha hai......sach btaye to hume uske iss faisle se bilkul khushi nhi hai.....

Anupriya- aapne to khud hi dekha na aau saheb....kisi ki baat nhi sun rhi hai.....use ab bhi yhi lagta hai ki aparna tai badal jayengi....unhe apni galti ka ehsaas ho gya hoga....

AS- par esa nhi hai Anupriya....jitna ache se hum aparna ko jante hai utna koi nhi jaanta....hum jante hai ki aparna ne abhi bhi apni galti se koi sabak nhi liya hoga..... Hum daave se keh skte hai....

Anupriya- choddiye na aausaheb!!!! Ek mauka dene m kya jata hai..... Unke dimag m kya chal rha hai koi nhi janta....par iss bar kalyani ko koi chot nhi pohoncha skti vo iss baar malhar uske saath hai.... Hume ghabrane ke bajay kalyani ke saath hona chahiye....

AS- sahi keh rhi ho tum.....

Anupriya- acha aau saheb main abhi jaati hu.....goda or nal ko dudh dena hai na.....

AS- ha ha.....dedo....hum bhi sarriyo ka kaarobar dekh kr aate hai....kahi kaarigaro ko kisi cheez ki zarurat to nhi hai.....

Anupriya- jii!!!!

Saying this both the ladies went for theor respective works.....pallavi was spying on them......and had been listening to all their talks

Pallavi to herself- deva......ye aparna tai ke liye to ab bohot badi musibat khadi ho gyi hai.....unhe jaake btau ya nhi....nhi nhi baba main nhi btaungi... agar aau saheb ko pta chala na to bina fees liye meri class laga dengi vo bhi kharach.....ho nhi to.....mujhe kya......


At Samtharva's room


Atharv- ye kalyani kuch to chaal chal rhi hai....

Sampada- kaisi chaal???

Atharv- pta nhi par ye ladki ne teri aai ko roka kyu.....ise bhi na bina mtlb m musibat paalne ka bohot shauk hai na....

Sampada- ( holding his collar) kya mtlb hai tumhara....haa....meri aai musibat hai bolo.....

Atharv- ae chodd re mere ko.....kya har baar meri collar pakad leti hai.....kitni mehengi shirt hai janti nhi hai kya tu...

Sampada- vo sb choddo...tumne meri aai ko musibat kyu kaha....haa....

Atharv- aye sampu.....musibat ko musibat nhi kahunga to kya kahunga....maa beti dono yedi hai....tere ko teri aai ki itni parvaah hai to usi ke saath bhaag jati na.....mere saath kyu hai tu...jaa....

Sampada- tum to chahte hi yhi hi ki main chali jau taki tum uss mugdha ke saath aish kro hai n.....

Atharv- aye.....uska naam itna unchi aawaz m mt lo.....deewaro ke bhi kaan hote hai.....or main tujhe chodd ke kyu jaunga....tu to meri sampu hai na....

Saying this he hugs her from back.....she gets irritated......

Sampada- tum kbhi samjh hi nhi aate ho mujhe.....kbhi behki behki baate krte ho or kbhi romantic ho jaate ho....ho kya jaata hai tumhe.....

Atharv- mere sampu ka pyar mujhe badal deta hai.....

Listening this sampada hugs him.....atharv said all this to calm her as he knows she would create a fuss about it.....


At kalma's room

Malhar was doing his some PS work on laptop suddenly he remembers doctor's word that it was more than a accident.....

Malhar POV- suicide!!!!! Kalyani kahi sach me kuch esa hi to nhi krne ja rhi thi....sunsaan jagah pe....jise itna strong samjha jise kisi ki koi baat se koi fark pdta tha vo andar se itni kamzor hai ....or mujhe ye pta bhi nhi ..... Koi to hoga jo kalyani ko ache se jaante hoga koi to hoga jisse kalyani ne apne har dard bayaa kiye honge..... Or ye sb usne maai ko bhi nhi btaya.....sampada or kalyani kaafi ek saath rehte the.....shayad use......kahir jo bhi ho jo kuch bhi hua hai kalyani ke saath vo use kbhi nhi bhulaayegi.... Iske dar ko bhagana hoga mujhe.....


He said looking at her where she was sleeping on thebed due to medicine effect.....


What will he do to overcome her fear???

Will aparna turn good or as usual create trouble for them???


HOW WAS IT??

PLEASE GIVE YOUR REVIEWS


Note- a small update....as i was wondering ki kahi ye lock na ho jaye..... don't worry agli update will be to your expectations ☺️☺️☺️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#57

It was awesome update praku 😻😻😻

It's mixture of all emotions and it's a really good update too read 🤗🤗

Kalyani ne aakhirkar sabko manakein rok hi liya aparna ko bechari kitni achi Hain hamari Kalyani par all are pissed off with her and it's right think ussein aparna ne kitna dukh Diya Chalo dekhte Hain Kya hota hai aagein 👍🏼👍🏼

Kalma scene was so cute 😳😳gussa bhi karte hai parwah bhi karte hai issein mujhein ek gaana yaad aaya

Kabhi neem neem...kabhi shehed shehed ...mora piya mora piya ...

Kalyani kein Saiyyaan pe ye lines bilkul fit baithti Hain 😆😆 karele ka juice pila Diya and his inner monologue tedhi hai par Meri hai 😳👍🏼

Aausaheb and anupriya are worrying about kalyani health 😒😒pallu 🤣🤣

Malhar no doctor kibaat sujhi kahin malhar sampada sein jaanene kein liyein ussein milega to nahi aur kalyani unn dono ko galat samjhegi 😳

Par overall good update🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#58

The update is both funny and emotional prakriti.

I loved kalma conversation and karela juice.

AS and anupriya worry about kalyani is natural. Even malhar is pissed about that.

Malhar pondering on doctor words, can't wait to know what he does.

Plss keep posting regularly.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#59

Loved it🤩.

Thanks for the update ❤️.

And belated happy independence day🇮🇳🙏❤️.

Edited by Asha_Bisht - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#60

Nice update Praku..

Karele ka juice..


🤣


Malhar caring for Kallu

Atharv calling Aparna musibat.. 🤣

SamTharva... Kabhi nahi sudhrenge.

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