kalma ff:- LO SAFAR SHURU HO GYA (chapter 6 updated 15-08-2021) - Page 4

Originally posted by: PRAKRITI_12

The track is after malhar was proved innocent in sneha's fake molestation case.

Iske baad maine apni story bnayi hai....please comment and tell how is it.

Kalyani- (talking to pillu) yaar pillu koi itna bada kadam kaise utha skta hai koi apna career puri zindagi barbaad krne ko taiyar kaise ho gya....tere baba bohot ache hai pillu kaash agar vo sneha bhaagi nhi hoti n to ye bhi pta chal jata ki sampada or atharv ka isme haath tha ya nhi....par tere baba ne mujhe call krke kyu nhi btaya ki vha sb thik hai daatne ke liye to turnt phone kr dete ....

Pushka bai- tai....

Kalyani- pushka bai aap abhi ...ghar ka saara kaam to ho gya hai na?

Pushka bai- haa tai main bas jaa h rhi thi ki aapko malhar dada ke baare m kehte suna to kamre m aa gyi. Aap police station jaakar dekh kyu nhi leti main moksh baba ko dudh pilaakar sula dungi or aparna tai ke pass de dungi....

Kalyani- nhi nhi main moksh ko aatya ke pass nhi chodd skti vo use sampda ko de dengi

Pushka bai- aap fikar mt kriye main moksh baba ko apne pass rakhlunngi jb tak aap nhi aati....

Kalyani - thik hai fir main jaati hu..... Or kuch bhi problem ho to please mujhe call kriyega...

SHE WAS ABOUT TO LEAVE WHEN MALHAR ENTERED

Kalyani turned to go but she saw malhar entering the room...

Kalyani- malhar ji aa gye aap

Malhar- haa kalyani....tum itne atarangi tarike apnati ho to ghar ke alawa jail thodi na jaunga....(HE SAID IT WITH A SMILE)

Pushka bai- tai main chalti hu

Kalyani- ha ha

Kalyani- vaise malhar ji aapne mujhe btaya kyu nhi ki PS m kya ho rha hai pta hai main kitna dar gyi thi ki mera msg commissioner sir ne dekha hoga ya nhi

Malhar- relax kalyani sb thik ho chuka or tumne subah se to kuch khayan hi nhi hoga apne pagalpan ke chakkar me

Kalyani- haa vo uss sneha k chakkar m sb bhul gyi...

MALHAR POV - kyun kalyani kyu sochti ho mere baare m itna tumhari koi galti na hote hue bhi tumhare saath itna kuch kiya maine or tum ho ki ......

Kalyani- kahan kho gye???

Malhar- kahi nhi...ye lo

Kalyani- burgers( she jumped joyfully) malharji aapko yaad tha

Malhar- kyu nhi hoga kalyani patni ho tum meri....

SHE WAS TOUCHED BY HIS WORDS...SHE WAS ABOUT TO SAY SOMETHING BUT GOT INTERRUPTED

In the hall

Atharv - sampu ...sampu...

Everyone including Kalma came out of their room to the hall

Sampada- kya hua kyu tbse chilla rhe ho

Atharv- tumhe pta bhi hai ki.....meanwhile he saw kalma standing in part of their house

Kalyani- kya hua atharv malharji ko jail bhejna ka plan Fail ho gya kya....with this she giggle along with anupriya...

Sampada- tum bhi kuch bhi krlo Kalyani tumse or malhar se to main moksh ki custody cheen kr hi rahungi....

Kalyani- krlo krko ye bhi try kr lo tum bhi kya yaad rakhogi...

Aparna- ae ladki chup bilkul mere naati par sirf malhar or sampada ka hak hai tum hoti kon ho mere daamad ko apna pati kehne wali hmmm.

Anupriya- taai bas kriye or kya kya kehna reh gya hai sbne dekha hai ki malhar kalyani ne bhagwaan ko sakhsi maankar ye shaadi ki hai kisi bhi haalat m hui ho par dono ne ek dusre ko apna jeevansaathi maana hai....

Aausaheb also taunted her ....

Aparna- main nhi maanti iss shadi ko.

Malhar- aapke maanne nhi Manne se kuch nhi hota aai shadi to hui hai....KALYANI WAS HAPPY SEEING TAKING STAND FOR HER...

Aparna-ye NAJAIZ LADKI mere daamad ki patni nhi ho skti.....

All were shocked listening aparna's words kalyani was hurt to the core tears started flowing from her eyes no one has said this word after her marriage malhar could not see her like this he goes towards her to console but before he could pronounce her name SHE RAN OUT OF THE HALL TO THE MAIN GATE OF AN

Malhar Anupriya Rao shaeb AS- kalyani kalyani ruko...

Anupriya- Malhar vo abhi kisi ki nhi sunegi thodi der akela rehna do thodi der baad khud hi ghar vapas aa jayegi. Or taai agar meri beti ko kuch hua na to main bhul jaungi ki aapa meri taai hai.....

Aparna was smirking standing ther along with Samtharva

Malhar- maai par.....

Anupriya- bharosa kro malhar vo aa jayegi....

Malhar was convinced...

Atharva- (in a low tone) ae sampu kya mast drama dekhne ko mila hai re baba....

Both sampada and atharv laughed silently...

At 11pm in ahilya niwas.... everyone was worried for kalyani

Aausaheb- parmeshwara 11 baj gye or kalyani ko gye hue 12 ghante hone wale hai pta nhi kahan gyi hogi...

Raosaheb- ahilya fikr mt kro aa jayegi....

Malhar- ( on phone call) kuch pta chala...

Pawar- nhi sir...

Malhar- dimaag kharab ho gya hai kya sbka.ek kaam bhi nhi hota tum logo se mujhe nhi pta agle 30 min m uski information chaiye mujhe....

Anupriya- bappa please meri beti ko sahi salaamat ghar pohoncha do bas....malhar kuch pta chala

Malhar- nahi maai....usne to aaj vrat bhi rakha tha kuch nhi khaya usne subah se....

Aausaheb- parmeshwara ye ab aparna ki vajah se ho rha hai kbhi to apna muh sahi vakt par khola kro...

Aparna- par aau saheb...

AS - poornaviram..

On the empty road coverd with trees in a darkness...

Kalyani to herself - sahi kehti hai aatya main najaiz hu....saari musibat ki jad main hi hu with this she started crying vigourously...

A truck with almost full speed was coming towards her THE truck horned but she was lost in her thoughts AND....THE NEX MOMENT SHE WAS UNCONSCIOUS ON THE ROAD WITH THE OOZING BLOOD

WHAT WILL HAPPEN NOW????

WILL MALHAR GET TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED TO HER BELOVED KALYANI....

WILL SHE SURVIVE ???

PLEASE TELL HOW WAS IT AND SHOULD I CONTINUE THIS????

PLEASE GIVE YOUR REVIEW

Such a great start Prakriti. Sorry thoda late ho gayi aane me. And the ending was 😮😮😮

But I've full Bharosa on Kallu ke Malharji bacha hi lenge use vo

It’s awesome Prakriti

Kitna mast likha hai tumne..

You have written it very well

Sare character k kya dialogue diye hai

Ek dum mast 👍🏼

Interesting and entertaining 👏

Waiting for next update

very nice prakriti...Ur writing style is simple but effective Lee it up.Purane din had aagaye.waiting for next chapter.

Prakriti is was such an emotional update..

Malhar is so worried about his wife and and wants to hear her bak bak.... Mujhe sabse jyada yehi pasand aaya.. 😍😍

And Aao Saheb consoling Malhar, that was beautiful too.. ❤️

Vivek trying to stop Anu from burning her hands...

Sampada scolding her mother.. 😆

Aparna ka dream.. 🤣i hope Malhar use aur bhi sunaye...for the crap she says to others..

SamTharv about to kiss and Pallavi's reaction.. 😆

Pallavi ne declare kar diya ki SamTharv besharam hai.. 😆

Aur last me.. Kallu ko blood loss hua hai.. And bloodbank doesn't have her group.. 😭😭

Shayad Anu ka group same hoga..

Loved the update Prakriti..

Once again I'm sorry, I couldn't respond to your Pm yesterday.. 😢

And you have stopped nicely as a cliff hanger..

CHAPTER - 4

Doctor- and we have very less time....dekhiye hum log apni taraf se puri koshish kr rhe hai....aap bhi pta kriye agar unke blood group se koi donor match krta hai to.....

Saying this he left from there.....

Malhar- ab hum kya krenge aapa....hum m se sirf aapka or Aausaheb ka match krta hai blood group kalyani ka....or aap log de nhi skte.....

Palak- malhar sir....mere blood group O negative hai...i am a universal donor.....main de skti hu....( I searched this blood group thing from internet.....O negative are blood donors jb kalyani ne shera ko khoon dene ko kaha tha tb bhi usne o negative hi kaha tha shayad🤔)

Malhar- palak are you okay with it??? Ft

Palak- yes sir...kalyani meri best friend hai....uske liye itna to obviously kr skti hu...you don't worry aap doctor ko jake inform kr dijiye...

Malhar- thank you neha thank you so much...main abhi aaya....

Malhar goes to inform doctor.....

Doctor- that's great.... let's start the procedure now....

Malhar- doctor...kalyani thik to ho jayegi na....????

Doctor- relax ACP sir....ab donor mil chuka hai to ab unhe kuch nhi higa she'll be fine...or vaise bhi jb aap unse itna pyar krte hai to unhe kuch kaise ho skta hai.....

Doctor leaves while patting malhar's shoulder....and malhar gets into the thinking

Malhar- pyaar??? M..muj...mujhe??? Par mai.....main bhi kya soch rha hu..,.abhi kalyani ki health m focus krna chahiye.....

Palak goes with doctor to give her blood to kalyani......after half an hour she came out of the room with doctor.....

Malhar- tum thik ho n????

Palak- yes sir...i am fine.....AND SHE GOES TO HER FRIENDS.....ALL BUSY IN THEIR CHIT CHATS

Doctor- ACP rane humne kalyani ko bottle chadha di hai....she is better now.....thodi der m unko hosh aa jayega....aap sb tb usse mil skte hai.....or kal morning m hum unhe discharge kr denge....and she can home.

Doctor leaves saying this.....neha palak and ritwik goes to Malhar....

Ritwik- ok sir...ab hum bhi nikalte hai...kaafi late ho gya hai....mom dad pareshan ho rhe ho ge....

Neha- haa sir....or kalyani ko jb hosh aa jaye aap hume msg kr dijiyega....hum chalte hai....

Malhar- okk then....dhyan se jana or palak tum ghar jake kuch healthy kha lena....okk

Palak- sure sir....bye....

Malhar smiled and the trio left from there.

Malhar- aausaheb....aap or aapa ghar chale jaiye....main hoo yaha....vivek chacha aap bhi chale jaiye...

RS- par malhar tum akele....

Malhar- main sambhal lunga aapa....vivek chacha aap maai ko bula laiye....

VIVEK WAS ABOUT TO LEFT WHEN HE SAW ANUPRIYA COMING THERE

Anu- kya hua...kalyani ko hosh aaya kya...vo kalyani ke doston ne bataya ki hse hosh aane wala hai....

AS- haa Anupriya kalyani ab thik hai use hosh aane wala hai....

Anu- bappa ka lakh lakh shukar hai....

AS- anupriya humare saath ghar chalo...malhar hai kalyani ke pass or dekho tumhara haath bhi jal gya hai tumhare zidd ke chakkr mein....

Anu- par aausaeheb main ese kaise ja sktu hu.....kal

Malhar- haa maai aapko jana chaiye or moksh bhi uthne wala hoga or please aap aaj raat use apne pass hi sula lijiyega....

Anu- haa malhar tum fikr mt kro main moksh ka khayal rakhungi....tum kalyani ke pass hi rehna thik hai...

Malhar- aap nischint hokar jaiye maai .....or kalyani kl subah ghar aa jayegi....

As- thik hai malhar hum chalte hai fir....apna or kalyani ka dhyan rakhna...hmmm

Malhar nodded and with this Colored Texteveryone left for AN

A nurse came and informed malhar that kalyani has gained consicousness

Malhar felt like someone was offering him his life....

Malhar- kya...kalyani ko hosh aa gya

Nurse- ji...aap unse mil skte hai....

Malhar- thank you.

Malhar goes to the room....he sees kalyani lying on the bed with bandage on her head and hand....he felt like someone pinched his heart....

Malhar POV- tumhe esa dekh ke ek ajib sa dard ho rha hai seene mein....ye mere saath tb hua tha jb shayad maine apni behen or baba ko khoya tha or aaj fir se....

Kalyani saw malhar standing ther...she thought now he would scold her so she lowered her eyes....

Malhar came to kalyani and take out the stool from under the bed and lovingly holds her hand....kalyani turned her head to Malhar making an innocent face...

Malhar politely said

Malhar- bohot zyada nhi so liya tumne aaj hmm???

Kalyani- ma...malhar ji vo....

Malhar- bohot neend aa rhi thi na tumhe.... Ho gyi neend puri???

Kalyani-vo....pillu kaisa hai....doodh pila diya tha na aapne use jyada garam to nhi kiya tha na....or jb vo ....

Malhar- bas kalyani bas....moksh thik hai maai hai uske pass or doodh pi liya tha usne...or maine sbko ghar bhej diya hai tumhari chinta m kisi ne kuch nhi khaya hai subah se....

Kalyani felt bad knowing that due to her family members suffered

Kalyani- i am sorry malharji....mujhe pta hai mujhe ese nhi jana chahiye tha par ....main v...vo...

Malhar- kalyani kiski baat ko seriously liya tha tumne.....aatya ki....

Kalyani- (sadly said) aatya ne jo bhi kaha tha to sach hi....koi nhi badal skta hai ise ki mai.....

Malhar- chup bilkul....ekdum chup socha tha ki tumhe daatonga nhi par tum baatein bhi kaisi kr rhi ho.....aatya ne ye kaha vo ka....

Kalyani- ek minute.....aap unhe kyu aatya bula rhe hai....aap to unhe

Malhar- (calmly said) kalyani....tumhe pta hai meri patni kon hai???

Kalyani in anger tone said

Kalyani- mujhe kya pta.....

Malhar was enjoying seeing kalyani in this mood....his intention was this only....he didn't want that kalyani should talk about what happened in morning....

Malhar- mujhe laga shayad tumhe pta hoga...

Kalyani- mujhe nhi pta and faking angerness she turned her face to other side

Malhar- pta hai kalyani....bohot chik chik krti hai....ise daato na gussa hoke chali jati hai..... par jo bhi ho...hai to meri hi patni na....MRS. KALYANI MALHAR RANE....

(He said this while gently touching her hands)

Kalyani- acha.....main chik chik krti hu...(dand they both laughed together).vaise malhar ji aapne jawab nhi diya ki aap aatya ko aatya kyu bulane lage....

Malhar- tum unhe aatya hi bulati ho na ya fir aai bulati ho??? Zahir si baat hai kalyani vo tumhari jo lagti hai vhi meri bhi lagengi na....

Kalyani- haa par....

Malhar- sshhh....aaram kro tum kl subah ghar jana hai na...kl discharge ho jaogi tum....par kalyani ye accident....kaise....

Kalyani- mujhe jyada kuch yaad nhi hai par jb main raaste m thi tb ek truck aaya tha or tb hi....

Malhar- dhyan kaha tha tumhara or itni raat ho gyi thi tumhe apne se nhi laga ki ab ghar jana chaiye or agar neha palak or ritwik nhi aate to....

Kalyani- vo log....

Malhar narrated whole story how he got information of her.....and palak donated her blood to her

Kalyani- malharji....3 baj gye hai....neend nhi aa rhi aapko...

Malhar- ye sahi hai khud neend uda ke baithi ho or puch rhi ho ki neend nhi aa rhi

Kalyani- i am sorry malharji.....meri vajah se....

Malhar- kb tak khud ko doshi maanogi....tumhari koi galti nhi thi....tum aaram kro....

Kalyani- or aap??

Malhar- main yahin sofa pr hu kuch chaiye ho to bta dena....pls....or vaise bhi ghar jake bohot jaruri kaam bhi krna hai...

Kalyani- konsa kaam????

Malhar- tum so jao.....

Kalyani closed her eyes and malhar lovingly caressed her hairs.....she was soon asleep

AT AHILHA NIWAS

Sampada- atharv mujhe bohot chinta ho rhi hai kl jab malhar aayega tb pta nhi kya hoga

Atharv- are sampu tu ky....(but he got interrupted by someone.)

Chinta to hogi hi na (AS)

Sampada- aau saheb aap....

AS- aparna...aparna...

Aparna- ji aausaheb...aap log aa gye....or kalyani kaha or malhar....

AS - ab kyu itne sawal puch rhi ho uss bechari ko chot pohochate hue jara bhi fikr nhi thi to ab kyu...haa...jawab do....

Aparna- aausaheb...

AS- poornaviram!!!!!...apna saaman baandh lo kyu ki kal jab malhar ghar vapas aayega na tb sbse pehle tumhe hi ghar ke bahar nikalega....

Anupriya- taai aapne itna kuch kaha meri beti ko or aapko lagta hai ki malhar aapko ese hi jaane dega...

Pallavi and vivek were smirking and sampada was boiling in anger....she could not take it more so she shouted....

Sampada- maai!!!!! Malhar kyu nikalega meri aai ko ghar se bahar...haa....vo h...

Anupriya- iss ghar ka maalik...bhul gyi ho to yaad dila du ye ghar malhar ka hai samjhi tum....

Sampada- aazoba...aap kuch kahiye na....

RS- dil ki baat sunna chahogi ya dimaag ki....

Sampada- kya mtlb???

RS - mtlb ye ki mera dil kehta hai ki aparna ne kalyani ke saath jo kiya bohot galat kiya....or saza bhi mil i chahiye or dimag kehta hai ki malhar ko aparna ko ghar se bahar nikal dena chahiye....

All of them at AN were shocked.....

Aparna- aapa ye aap kya keh rhe hai...main beti hu aapki.....

AS- beti hu nhi....thi...

Aparna- aausaheb.....

AS- aaj ki raat hai bas tumhare pass kyu ki malhar ka gussa sb jante hai or kl vo kya krega vo uske alava koi nhi janta...andaaza bhi hai tumhe ki kalyani kitne dard se guzri hogi....arey yaha tak ki humne bhi use sorf ek hi baar ye shabd kaha hai vo bhi tb jab tumhari beti ne humari poti par jhoota ilzaam lagaya or hum bhi bevkoof sampada ki baat m aa gya....

Sampada- aausaheb main bhi aap hi ki poti hu....

AS- tumhe lagta hai ki jo kuch bhi tumne iss parivar ke saath kiya uske baad hum tumse rishta rakhna chahenge....galat fehmi se baahr niklo sampada....

Pallavi and vivek was enjoying the drama....

Vivek- pallavi....

Pallavi- hmm....

Vivek- kya mast drama dekhne ko mil rha hai na...

Pallavi- ho....main to kehti hu ki naya tv kharidne ki jarurat h nhi hai ...jb ghar pe itna acha manoranjan chal rha ho to....

Sampada- koi zarurat bhi nhi hai....mere liye mera atharv kaafi hai or hum dono bohot khush hai ek dusre ke saath....hai na atharva...

Atharva- arey haa meri sampu....

AS and RS got irritated and retired to their room to sleep..... every one including aparna also goes to their respective rooms....

AT HOSPITAL

Kalyani was sleeping....and malhar was awake....

Malhar POV- aaj pure din m tumhe ese aaram sesote hue dekhkar dil ko ek alag hi sukoon mil rha hai....kya haalat ho gyi hai tumhari....kbhi nhi socha tha ki main jise itna tang krta tha itna pareshan krta hai...bewajah daatata tha vo dil se itni tooti hai....bahar tum ese jatati thi ki tumhe koi fark hi nhi pdta tha or main....hmm...jo ho gya use main badal nhi skta kalyani pr jo hone wala hai use shayad badal sakta hu...

Kl ka din kisi ke liye acha nhi hone wala hai...

With this his eyes got heavy and he fall asleep....

HOW WAS THE CHAPTER???

WHAT WILL MALHAR DO THE NEXT DAY???

WILL APARNA BE THROWN OUT OF THE HOUSE???

PLEASE GIVE YOUR REVIEWS AND SOME SUGGESTIONS TOO IF YOU WANT....

Haaye it was such a nice and cute chapter praku..🤗💔

Neha ne kallu ko blood diya liking their friendship 😊mallu ne sabko ghar aaram karne bhej diya he is such a nice man who always care about everyone whether they just betrayed him yahan for a change Deshmukh khandan ke kuch log ache hai👍🏼 pallu aur vivek sirf majhe lene ke liye hai as usual 😆😆doctor ne mallu ko pyaar ka gyaan diya mallu hichkicha gaya pyaar ke naam se

Kallu ko hosh aa gaya ussien laga usske saiyaan usko daatenge 😆lekin vo to ussein bohot pyaar karte hai ussein dekhke kitne emotional ho gayein Malharji ko apni family ke khone jaisa drad hua ussein aise dekhkar this was such a good thong he now slowly started to consider in her family

Malharji ne pyaar se baat ki lekin kallu ne aatya ki baat laakein unhein gussa dila diya he is enjoying her jealousy 😆😆

Kalyani Malhar rane hayye

Malhar ne kallu ko pyaar se sula diya vahan aausaheb aur rausaheb ne acha suanya aataya ko sahi hai😡😡 ye sampu aur athu ka alag hi drama chalata rehta hai dekho aatya kya hota hai tumhare saath aage hamara mallu tumhein chodega nahi tumne uski kallu ko kitna hurt kiya 😈😈

Mallu ke dimag main kuch to chal raha hai kal phatega atom bomb sabpein apni biwi ke liye

Overall it was wonderful chapter with all things in proper amount 😳😳

Originally posted by: Phlo004

Haaye it was such a nice and cute chapter praku..🤗💔

Neha ne kallu ko blood diya liking their friendship 😊mallu ne sabko ghar aaram karne bhej diya he is such a nice man who always care about everyone whether they just betrayed him yahan for a change Deshmukh khandan ke kuch log ache hai👍🏼 pallu aur vivek sirf majhe lene ke liye hai as usual 😆😆doctor ne mallu ko pyaar ka gyaan diya mallu hichkicha gaya pyaar ke naam se

Kallu ko hosh aa gaya ussien laga usske saiyaan usko daatenge 😆lekin vo to ussein bohot pyaar karte hai ussein dekhke kitne emotional ho gayein Malharji ko apni family ke khone jaisa drad hua ussein aise dekhkar this was such a good thong he now slowly started to consider in her family

Malharji ne pyaar se baat ki lekin kallu ne aatya ki baat laakein unhein gussa dila diya he is enjoying her jealousy 😆😆

Kalyani Malhar rane hayye

Malhar ne kallu ko pyaar se sula diya vahan aausaheb aur rausaheb ne acha suanya aataya ko sahi hai😡😡 ye sampu aur athu ka alag hi drama chalata rehta hai dekho aatya kya hota hai tumhare saath aage hamara mallu tumhein chodega nahi tumne uski kallu ko kitna hurt kiya 😈😈

Mallu ke dimag main kuch to chal raha hai kal phatega atom bomb sabpein apni biwi ke liye

Overall it was wonderful chapter with all things in proper amount 😳😳

Glad you liked tha chapter vanshu...

Tumhara chapter bhi kaafi acha hai....

Update is good prakriti.

Kalyani malhar rane, I loved it. Malhar calling aparna aatya and him teasing kalyani to divert her mind. His care for kalyani 🥰

Malhar ke dimag mein kuch toh chal raha hai🤔.

Post the next update soon.

Wonderful

Yaar sorry padne mei thode late hoagya

I just loved it a lot

Malhar ka dimaag mei saroor kuch he

Abb kiska bari ke atya ka toh ticket katt gayi

Loves to read your work please continue ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️👌❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Amazing Prakriti...

Bohot acha update tha..

Kalyani is out of danger, her friend Palak donated blood.. 👍🏼

Doctors words made Malhar introspect himself.. 😊

Malharji ne saare members ko ghar bhej diya and he will be beside his Kallu..

Kallu was scared he might scold her😆 but Malharji ki care and concern dikhi use..

I'm happy AS and RS gave a piece of their mind to Aparna and Sampada..

Pallavi aur Vivek ka dialogue was quite funny 😆

Malharji Aparna ko utake fekenge bahar..

Loved it..