kalma ff:- LO SAFAR SHURU HO GYA (chapter 6 updated 15-08-2021)

Promo

Sampada- malhar tumhe meri baat pe yakin nhi hota to khud kalyani se pucho

Kalyani- bakwas band kro apni samjhi tum

Sampada- mujhe chup krke kya sabit krna chahti ho tum hmm bolo

Malhar- ek shabd or kaha na sampada tumne to tumhe andaaza bhi nhi hai ki main kya krunga

What was it?? What does sampada said that made Malhar this much angry??

Please tell should I continue this???

Originally posted by: PRAKRITI_12

Promo

Sampada- malhar tumhe meri baat pe yakin nhi hota to khud kalyani se pucho

Kalyani- bakwas band kro apni samjhi tum

Sampada- mujhe chup krke kya sabit krna chahti ho tum hmm bolo

Malhar- ek shabd or kaha na sampada tumne to tumhe andaaza bhi nhi hai ki main kya krunga

What was it?? What does sampada said that made Malhar this much angry??

Please tell should I continue this???

Pls continue it👍👍

Let's see what this chudail said Malhar

Interesting promo..

Please do Continue Prakriti.

The track is after malhar was proved innocent in sneha's fake molestation case.

Iske baad maine apni story bnayi hai....please comment and tell how is it.

Kalyani- (talking to pillu) yaar pillu koi itna bada kadam kaise utha skta hai koi apna career puri zindagi barbaad krne ko taiyar kaise ho gya....tere baba bohot ache hai pillu kaash agar vo sneha bhaagi nhi hoti n to ye bhi pta chal jata ki sampada or atharv ka isme haath tha ya nhi....par tere baba ne mujhe call krke kyu nhi btaya ki vha sb thik hai daatne ke liye to turnt phone kr dete ....

Pushka bai- tai....

Kalyani- pushka bai aap abhi ...ghar ka saara kaam to ho gya hai na?

Pushka bai- haa tai main bas jaa h rhi thi ki aapko malhar dada ke baare m kehte suna to kamre m aa gyi. Aap police station jaakar dekh kyu nhi leti main moksh baba ko dudh pilaakar sula dungi or aparna tai ke pass de dungi....

Kalyani- nhi nhi main moksh ko aatya ke pass nhi chodd skti vo use sampda ko de dengi

Pushka bai- aap fikar mt kriye main moksh baba ko apne pass rakhlunngi jb tak aap nhi aati....

Kalyani - thik hai fir main jaati hu..... Or kuch bhi problem ho to please mujhe call kriyega...

SHE WAS ABOUT TO LEAVE WHEN MALHAR ENTERED

Kalyani turned to go but she saw malhar entering the room...

Kalyani- malhar ji aa gye aap

Malhar- haa kalyani....tum itne atarangi tarike apnati ho to ghar ke alawa jail thodi na jaunga....(HE SAID IT WITH A SMILE)

Pushka bai- tai main chalti hu

Kalyani- ha ha

Kalyani- vaise malhar ji aapne mujhe btaya kyu nhi ki PS m kya ho rha hai pta hai main kitna dar gyi thi ki mera msg commissioner sir ne dekha hoga ya nhi

Malhar- relax kalyani sb thik ho chuka or tumne subah se to kuch khayan hi nhi hoga apne pagalpan ke chakkar me

Kalyani- haa vo uss sneha k chakkar m sb bhul gyi...

MALHAR POV - kyun kalyani kyu sochti ho mere baare m itna tumhari koi galti na hote hue bhi tumhare saath itna kuch kiya maine or tum ho ki ......

Kalyani- kahan kho gye???

Malhar- kahi nhi...ye lo

Kalyani- burgers( she jumped joyfully) malharji aapko yaad tha

Malhar- kyu nhi hoga kalyani patni ho tum meri....

SHE WAS TOUCHED BY HIS WORDS...SHE WAS ABOUT TO SAY SOMETHING BUT GOT INTERRUPTED

In the hall

Atharv - sampu ...sampu...

Everyone including Kalma came out of their room to the hall

Sampada- kya hua kyu tbse chilla rhe ho

Atharv- tumhe pta bhi hai ki.....meanwhile he saw kalma standing in part of their house

Kalyani- kya hua atharv malharji ko jail bhejna ka plan Fail ho gya kya....with this she giggle along with anupriya...

Sampada- tum bhi kuch bhi krlo Kalyani tumse or malhar se to main moksh ki custody cheen kr hi rahungi....

Kalyani- krlo krko ye bhi try kr lo tum bhi kya yaad rakhogi...

Aparna- ae ladki chup bilkul mere naati par sirf malhar or sampada ka hak hai tum hoti kon ho mere daamad ko apna pati kehne wali hmmm.

Anupriya- taai bas kriye or kya kya kehna reh gya hai sbne dekha hai ki malhar kalyani ne bhagwaan ko sakhsi maankar ye shaadi ki hai kisi bhi haalat m hui ho par dono ne ek dusre ko apna jeevansaathi maana hai....

Aausaheb also taunted her ....

Aparna- main nhi maanti iss shadi ko.

Malhar- aapke maanne nhi Manne se kuch nhi hota aai shadi to hui hai....KALYANI WAS HAPPY SEEING TAKING STAND FOR HER...

Aparna-ye NAJAIZ LADKI mere daamad ki patni nhi ho skti.....

All were shocked listening aparna's words kalyani was hurt to the core tears started flowing from her eyes no one has said this word after her marriage malhar could not see her like this he goes towards her to console but before he could pronounce her name SHE RAN OUT OF THE HALL TO THE MAIN GATE OF AN

Malhar Anupriya Rao shaeb AS- kalyani kalyani ruko...

Anupriya- Malhar vo abhi kisi ki nhi sunegi thodi der akela rehna do thodi der baad khud hi ghar vapas aa jayegi. Or taai agar meri beti ko kuch hua na to main bhul jaungi ki aapa meri taai hai.....

Aparna was smirking standing ther along with Samtharva

Malhar- maai par.....

Anupriya- bharosa kro malhar vo aa jayegi....

Malhar was convinced...

Atharva- (in a low tone) ae sampu kya mast drama dekhne ko mila hai re baba....

Both sampada and atharv laughed silently...

At 11pm in ahilya niwas.... everyone was worried for kalyani

Aausaheb- parmeshwara 11 baj gye or kalyani ko gye hue 12 ghante hone wale hai pta nhi kahan gyi hogi...

Raosaheb- ahilya fikr mt kro aa jayegi....

Malhar- ( on phone call) kuch pta chala...

Pawar- nhi sir...

Malhar- dimaag kharab ho gya hai kya sbka.ek kaam bhi nhi hota tum logo se mujhe nhi pta agle 30 min m uski information chaiye mujhe....

Anupriya- bappa please meri beti ko sahi salaamat ghar pohoncha do bas....malhar kuch pta chala

Malhar- nahi maai....usne to aaj vrat bhi rakha tha kuch nhi khaya usne subah se....

Aausaheb- parmeshwara ye ab aparna ki vajah se ho rha hai kbhi to apna muh sahi vakt par khola kro...

Aparna- par aau saheb...

AS - poornaviram..

On the empty road coverd with trees in a darkness...

Kalyani to herself - sahi kehti hai aatya main najaiz hu....saari musibat ki jad main hi hu with this she started crying vigourously...

A truck with almost full speed was coming towards her THE truck horned but she was lost in her thoughts AND....THE NEX MOMENT SHE WAS UNCONSCIOUS ON THE ROAD WITH THE OOZING BLOOD

WHAT WILL HAPPEN NOW????

WILL MALHAR GET TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED TO HER BELOVED KALYANI....

WILL SHE SURVIVE ???

PLEASE TELL HOW WAS IT AND SHOULD I CONTINUE THIS????

PLEASE GIVE YOUR REVIEW

Wow what a beautiful start keep going ❤❤

Omg

Yaar sare writer ko cliffhangers kyom pasand he

Sab aise points mei chapter end kardete he ki humare curiousity bade

And yes be responsible writer jaldi aggli chapter shuru karo

Kallu ko kya huva janna he mujhe

Loved the update keep writing

Wow Prakriti

What a wonderful start..

Totally loved it..

Poor Kallu..

Malharji bacha lenge Kallu ko...

Praku abhi poori read karke aaram se comment karoongi

Hey prakriti

Welcome to writers brigade 🙏🏼

Beautiful and interesting update…

Season 1 ki yaadein taaza kardi tumne

Do continue 👍🏼

S1 was the best, indeed!

Although I hated how anyone would taunt Kalyani for her parents' actions and call her illegitimate, as if kids have a say in such things and choose to be born out of wedlock.

Since learning of the truth between her parents and Anu, she had only tried to make it up to the latter, still people wouldn't shut up about the matter and use it to hurt.