kalma ff:- LO SAFAR SHURU HO GYA (chapter 6 updated 15-08-2021) - Page 5

Awesome update Prakriti 👏

It’s very entertaining

Sare characters ke dialogues ek dum mast hai..👌
The way they are in the show..

😆😆

Malharji apni kallu ki kitni fikar hai..

Mrs. Kalyani Malhar Rane

Gusse wale Malharji

I enjoyed reading it..

I’m excited to know kya hone wala hai..

Originally posted by: sathwi_99

Update is good prakriti.

Kalyani malhar rane, I loved it. Malhar calling aparna aatya and him teasing kalyani to divert her mind. His care for kalyani 🥰

Malhar ke dimag mein kuch toh chal raha hai🤔.

Post the next update soon.

Thank you jara....jaldi update kr dungi

Originally posted by: rekha_crm

Amazing Prakriti...

Bohot acha update tha..

Kalyani is out of danger, her friend Palak donated blood.. 👍🏼

Doctors words made Malhar introspect himself.. 😊

Malharji ne saare members ko ghar bhej diya and he will be beside his Kallu..

Kallu was scared he might scold her😆 but Malharji ki care and concern dikhi use..

I'm happy AS and RS gave a piece of their mind to Aparna and Sampada..

Pallavi aur Vivek ka dialogue was quite funny 😆

Malharji Aparna ko utake fekenge bahar..

Loved it..

Thank you di...lets see what happens next

Originally posted by: GAYATHRINAYAR

Wonderful

Yaar sorry padne mei thode late hoagya

I just loved it a lot

Malhar ka dimaag mei saroor kuch he

Abb kiska bari ke atya ka toh ticket katt gayi

Loves to read your work please continue ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️👌❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Thanks gayu....youre right kuch to chal rha hai mallu ke dimag m

Wow beautiful 😍😍 please try to update today so excited 😍❤

CHAPTER -5

Around 6:30 AM....malhar waked up first and turned his eyes to see his kalyani sleeping....and silently goes to her keeping in mind not to disturb her and kisses her forehead....

Malhar POV- ye hone kya laga hai mujhe....jisse badle ki aag m shaadi ki thi maine kl usi ke accident ki khabar sunke jaan nikal gyi thi meri....dil m ek alag sa dard...kalyani ka har dard ab main mehsoos krne laga hu use samjhne laga hu....

Saying this he reminces the words that doctor said....AAP APNI PATNI SE ITNA PYAR JO KRTE HAI UNHE KUCH KAISE HO SKTA HAI....With this he saw kalyani slowly opening her eyes and she tried to get up from the bed

Malhar- kalyani ruko....main help krta hu....he helped her to sit

Kalyani- pa.... pani

Kalyani- ruko....main deta hu.....

HE POUR THE WATER INTO GLASS FROM THE JUG AND GIVE IT TO HER....AND MALHAR WAS LOST IN HER.....WHEN SHE INTERRUPTED

Kalyani- kya hua malharji...ese kyu dekh rhe hai....

Malhar- dekh rha hu....ma....main ye soch rha tha....ki kitni bevkuf ho tum....dimag nhi hai n bilkul bhi....

Kalyani- hawwww....how rude malharji....aap....

A nurse came into the room and said to malhar

Nurse- MR.rane.....doctor aapse milna chahte hai....or mujhe kalyani ko discharge krne se pehle ek baar examine krne ko kaha hai

Malhar- yeah sure....main dekh ke aata hu kalyani...

Kalyani- haa malharji....

Nurse started to check her....

At doctor's cabin

Doctor- ACP rane!!!! Aaiye na....please have a seat

Malhar- sure!!!! Aapko kuch baat krni thi????

Doctor- jii!!!

Malhar- kahiye na please.....

Doctor- dekhiye....mr.rane....baat ye hai ki accident kaafi tragic tha....agar ek minute ki deri or hoti to....she could have gone into the coma or may be we would not be able ....to save her....by God's grace she doesn't have any internal bleeding....you were on time.....

Listening this malhar's anger was boiling towards aparna...nobody except him knows what will happen today

Doctor- ACP rane???? You there???

Malhar- ji doctor...

Doctor- dekhiye ghabrane wale koi baat nhi hai....she is out of danger now it's just that bas aapko unka pura khayal rakhna hoga until she gets recover completely....and it will take 6-7 days

Malhar- don't worry doctor....main pura khayal rakhunga uska....

Doctor- jii.....and one more thing....iss baat ka bhi dhyan rakhiyega ki unhe koi bhi hurtful cheezein na kahi jaaye.....kyu ki ye mujhe accident kam...suicide attempt jyada laga....its just my opinion because kl jb mrs.rane ke friends ne hume information di thi thi to unhone btaya ki vo koi sunsaan jagah thi or raat ke time hi to trucks ko permission hoti hai....right

Malhar - right.....you don't worry main uska dhyan rakhunga... Main chalta hu.....

Doctor- yeah sure!!! Reception pe kuch formalities hai aap puri kr dijiye use and she can go home with you....

Malhar- thank you doctor....

And he came out of the cabin and was lost in his thoughts

Malhar POV- suicide attempt!!!!! Par kalyani ne to kaha tha ki.....jo bhi ho....aatya aapne meri kalyani ke saath acha nhi kiya...

He goes into the kalyani's room....nurse had done with her check up....

Malhar- is she fine???

Nurse- yes.....aap le ja skte hai inhe apne saath....vaise sir bura na maane to ek baat kahu??

Malhar- yeah sure

Nurse- main na....aapki bohot badi fan hu....aap jiss tarah se gundo ki dhulaai krte hai na...mera dil aap par aa jata hai....aap bohot hot hai

Kalyani was shocked listening this and was burning in jealousy ....malhar looked towards her and enjoyed her face expression and silently giggled....

Nurse- if you don't mind...can i take one selfie with you...

Malhar- yeah sure...1 kya 100 lijiye....

Nurse tooked selfie with her and malhar enjoyed seeing her in this state....

Malhar- chalein kalyani????

Kalyani- ji....chalte hai....

Malhar laughed seeing her

Kalyani- itni hasi kyu aa rhi hai

Malhar- kuch nhi....chalo....

At Ahilya Niwas

AS- anupriya!!!! Anupriya!!!!!

Anupriya- ji aaosaheb... bulaya aapne....

AS- haa....kaha thi tum???

Anupriya- aaosaheb vo bappa ke saamne diya jala rhi thi

AS- chalo thik hai....kalyani malhar bhi aate hi honge....

Aparna and sampada were fuming in anger seeing AS caring for them so much....AS looking towards them said...

AS- aparna....jitna dekhna hai dekh lo....kyu ki koi nhi janta n malhar jb ghar aayega tb kya hoga....isliye humare saath saath iss ghar ko bhi dekh lena shayad ye aakhiri din ho tumhara....sampada....apni aap ke liye bandhobast kr liya hai na tumne....

Sampada- aaosaheb...meri aai iss ghar se kahi nhi jaeygi samjhi aap

Anupriya- sampada....khabardaar agar aaosaheb se dobara iss lehze m baat ki to...

Sampada angrily turned her face....ON THE WAY TO HOME....malhar keeped talking continuously .....and made kalyani talk too so she doesn't think about what happened yesterday which lead to this circumstances

Kalyani POV- ye malharji ko kya ho gya hai....aaj itna kyu bol rhe hai....vaise to subah se leke raat tak itna kam bolte hai ki socho hi mat....or aaj...

Her pov got broke when malhar said

Malhar- kya soch rhi ho....

Kalyani- ha....kuch nhi....

Malhar POV- yhi soch rhi ho na ki jo insan itna kam bolta hai vo aaj itna kyu bol rha hai...bohot der krdi maine tumhe samjhne ki kalyani....itne time se tumhe iss baat ki saza diye ja rha tha jo tumne ki hi nhi....pta nhi kbhi maaf bhi krogi tum mujhe ya nhi....par ab jo bhi hai.....aatya ke liye ab acha nhi hoga....tumhe dard dene wale ko sbse pehle ab mujhse guzarna hoga...tum par ab aanch nhi aane dunga main kalyani....vaada hai mera tumse....

At ahilya niwas

Sampada- atharv agar malhar ne aai ko ghar se nikal diya to....

Atharv- arey tu chill maar re sampu...teri aai vaise bhi bohot chikchik krti hai....nikal dega to humare liye acha hi hoga

Sampada- pagal ho gye ho tum atharv kuch bhi bakte rehte ho....

Saying this she moved out of the room and in the hall AS saw kalma standing at the main gate.....she was happy and called everyone but noticed that kalyani was too weak to stand on herself she has bandage on her head....malhar was holding kalyani....

AS- raosaheb anupriya vivek pallavi.....jaldi bahar aao sab....kalyani or malhar aa gye hai...

Everyone came to the hall including samtharva and the reluctant aparna

Anupriya (seeing the state of kalyani)- kal....kalyani

Kalyani lowered her eyes.... thinking she and everyone would shout on her because of her stupidity....malhar's eyes were searching aparna who was standing behind the pillar....samtharva got shocked because she looked really weak....

Sampada- ye kalyani itni kamzor lag rhi hai n....

Atharv- sampu ghayal hai vo or kuch khaya bhi to nhi hai n usne....drama khoob dekne ko milega....

Pallavi- nal ke baba....malhar ki aankhon mein gussa saaf jhalak rha hai....

Vivek- haa pallavi....dekho ab kya hota hai....

Pallavi- jo hoga so hoga....ye aparn taai kahi mujhe bich m na le aaye bas....

Vivek- pallavi bas kro.....varna abhi aaosaheb chillane lagengi...

AS- kalyani....y....ye kya haalat bna li tumne beta....

Anupriya- kalyani...ek baar hum sbka hi soch leti...agar nhi to moksh.....

Kalyani- aai.....i am sor.... sorry...please maaf krdo mujhe

RS- kalyani.....goda or tum iss ghar ki betiyaan ho.....or kis aurat ki baat ko dil pe liya tha tumne.....ise jise khud sahi or galat ki pehchan nhi hai....

Kalyani- aazoba....please mujhe maaf kr dijye....main aage se kbhi esa nhi krungi...promise

AS- tum esa kuch kr bhi nhi paogi kalyani kyu ki iss baar hum tumhari taange tod denge....samjhi na tum

All laughed a bit on aausaheb's talk to neutralize the tensed environment at the ahilya niwas....aparna came forward from behind the pillar....

Aparna- kalyani kalyani mujhe maaf kr do maine galti ki hai mujhe maaf kr do....

KALYANI DIDN'T REALISE THAT WHY APARNA SUDDENLY CAME AND STARTED TO APOLOGISE LIKE THIS...

Aparna- kalyani tum sun rhi ho na???

Kalyani- haa aatya m.....

Aparna- bappa ka lakh lakh shukar hai ki tumne maaf kr diya varna malhar to aaj ghar se hi nikal deta

Everyone realised that why aparna changed so much all of sudden....malhar smirked standing there and goes to her....

Malhar- kise bevkuf bna rhi hain aap khud ko ya hum sbko....

Aparna- ye tum kya keh rhe ho malhar...mujhe apni galti ka ehsaas hai...ma....

Malhar- umeed hai ki aapne apna saaman baandh liya hoga ....agar nhi kiya to main pushka bai se keh deta hu...vo kr degi....

Kalyani was shocked to see this behaviour towards aparna....he never talk like this to AS also when he was about to throw them out.....sampada was fuming in anger ....atharv pallavi and vivek as usual were enjoying the scenario....

Sampada- has kya rhe ho atharv....kuch kaho na malhar ko vo aai ko ghar se nikal dega.....

Atharv- ae sampu....chill maar ke drama enjoy krna....

Sampada- tumse kuch nhi hoga....mujhe hi kuch krna hoga.....

Sampada goes and confronts malhar....she says....

Sampada- malhar tu.....

Malhar- tumhara naam aparna Deshmukh hai???....nhi n to chup chap khadi rho....he said roaringly

Kalyani- malharji....ek ba....

Malhar- mujhe kuch nhi sunna hai kalyani....or tum abhi tak yhi ho main room tak leke chalta hu...ghar ka kachra to baad m bhi bahar nikala ja sakta hai...he said eyeing towards aparna...

AS- ha malhar....kalyani ko aaram ki zarurat hai.....

Kalyani- malharji....please....mt kriye esa....jo bhi hai aatya hai to aausaheb or aazoba ki beti hi na....vo humare saamne mazboot hai malharji...andar ss unhe acha nhi lag rha hai....

RS- nhi kalyani....hum aparna ki dramebaazi tbse dekh rhe hai jbse tumhai or malhar ki shaadi hui hai...lekin kal to hadd hi ho gyi....

AS- haa kalyani...mt roko malhar ko....

Kalyani- ye aap kya keh rhi hai.....aausaheb.....aai tum kuch bolo na....

Anupriya- meri beti ko jo dard dene ki koshish krega....main uske paksh m kuch nhi kahungi....

Kalyani- malharji.....ek baar thande dimag se sochiye....aatya je jane se koi khush nhi hoga....

Malhar- tumhe andaaza bhi hai kya bol rhi ho tum....iss haalat m tum kiski vajah se ho....inhi ki vajah se na....kalyani i could ve lost you.....

They both have tears in their eyes.....malhar was holding her hand forgetting that they are in front of everyone when sampada's words interrupted the.....

Sampada- malhar tum koi nhi hote ho meri aai ko ghar se nikalne wale.....

Malhar- bhul gyi ho to yaad dila du ki main iss ghar ka owner hu....his words made her more furious....

Sampada- esa bhi kya ho gya malhar.....aai ne sach hi to kaha tha kalyani ke liye.....or kisi ne sahi hi kaha hai sacha humesha kadva....

Malhar- basss!!!!! Ek shabd or nhi......

Kalyani was lost in him....and was just standing behing him holding his hand.....so she doesn't get imbalance

Sampada- acha.....jb kalyani raat ko 2-2 baje tak ghar aati hai.....kbhi usse pucha tumne ki itni raat ko konsi awaragardi krke andar aati haj bhar ke....hmmm

Kalyani- bakwas band kro apni .....samjhi tum....

Sampada- mujhe chup kr ke kya haasil kr logi kalyani tum.....haa...jawab do....

Malhar- ek shabd or kaha na sampada to uska anjaam acha nhi hoga.....

Sampada got scared seeing him in this much of anger.....kalyani's tears were about to flow.....atharv pulled sampada and whispered

Atharva- kya hai sampu.....teri aai itni bhi achi nhi hai....jo krne hai uss hawaldaar ko krne de na....

Sampada - chup kro tum.....samjhe...khud to khade hoke tamasha dekh rhe ho.... main haath pe haath rakh ke nhi baith skti samjhe tum

Atharv- offo sampu baby......

Sampada- band kro.....pagal insan kahi ke.....

Pallavi- deva.....kb tamasha khatam hoga....roz roz ka ho chuka hai....

Vivek- choddo na pallavi....hume kya....bas tum aaram se maze lo....

They both giggled.....

Malhar- aatya aap abhi bhi yhi hai.....

Kalyani- malhar ji....please ek last chance de dijiye unhe...agar vo fir kbhi esa krengi to main nhi rokungi aapko....promise.....

Will kalyani be able to convince malhar????

HOW WAS THE CHAPTER???

PLEASE GIVE YOUR REVIEWS ON THIS

Mast chapter tha Prakriti. Loved how chill Atharv is 😜 Sach me serial ki shaan hai ye ladka. Aparna to gayi.

mei tohkeh rahi hu convince mat karo jaane do athya ko 🤣

It was awesome praku 🤩🤩

Kalyani theek hokar ghar aa gyi 😺

Malhar ne uski kitni care ki 😻😻

He has started realising something for her ,the doctors word leave a great impact on him

Kalyani cute jealousy

Malhar holding her all time pyaar haaye 😍😍

I don't know aatya ka kya hoga but she also doesn't have any place to live and her bitterness is there because what she has gone through Kalyani parents to usskein saath kya hona chahiye I don't know par I know tumne kuch acha hi socha hoga

The chapter is really good praku 😃😃

Wow yaar Prakriti

It’s amazing👏👏

Kallu ka suicide attempt 😢😢😢

Malharji should take care of her ki wo aage se aisa na kare…

Nurse ki selfie wala part..

Malharji enjoying the sight of jealous kallu 😆

Samtharv ka to kya hi kahe..

Ek ko drama karne se fursat nahi aur ek ko maje lene se..

Malharji ka gussa dekhkar maja aa gya..

Aatya ko achha sunaya sabhi ne par humari kallu baby ka dil bahut bada hai..

I really enjoyed reading it..