FF:HOW YUVI UNITE prt 62 updated on pg44 30/11/09 - Page 8

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Posted: 16 years ago
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i love you sotry but im getting tooo despressed can uu please kill bhrati too andd make YUVI togerther but prob in the hosue like neels mom hating virnda trying to get her introble or other prob this siiiss tooo sad im cryinnggg mann...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I loved the dupatta scene! It was so sweet and the temple scene was simply amazing. Reminded me of that scene from Veer-Zaara, where Shah Rukh comes...it was too sweet. My favorite part was that scene where the two are just thinking out loud. I loved how you made them finish each other's sentences...could totally picture that happening in the show. I must say yaar, you are really good at showing their emotions. PLZZZZZZZZZZZ UPDATE SOON!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#73
so bharti is gone and we still dont know abt the reason of her sickness...
u must hv thot something for tht..

isnt vrinda too brave to handle all these when she thinks bharti will b hving baby with yug!... and still both r praying for eachothers happiness..

still not getting hint how yuvi will unite and eagerly waiting for tht to happen..

and thts not boring at all..even tht wasnt much painful.. in fact i totally respect vrinda's stand.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i'm so happy bharti is not here to disturb yuvi.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Hun why u r saying that this is boring..I enjoyed it thoroughly..Gud job you have done by sending Bharti to his fathers place..Thankx for letting YUVI on their owm..GR8!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey dear very well done atleast bharti left yud for 10 days well luved the dupatta scene and also that darbar one........ very well done....... hunny i will be eagerly waiting for ur next part.........

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Posted: 16 years ago
#77
@sadaf, and zeeta, thankyou so much for liking it, but personally i found it boring, so i thought you guys would too. i think its because i didnt pput as much detail as i wanted....but short of time, and so many were asking me to update...so really sorry.
@persii, oh sweety plz dont be depressed, you have to go thru bad times to get to the good times....and somehow they will unite, as for killing bharti, umm, you'll just have to wait and see hun (i keep changing my mind).
initially i was gonna end it after they united, but a few memebers have asked me to go further and carry on after they are together.....have some ideas but still contemplating !
@neetu, im glad u liked the duppatta scene, but cant take credit for that, i stole it from hum hogaye aap ke, (hey, come on, ekta steals from films doesnt she😉 ) and the templs scene, again great minds, coz i was visualising sharukh for that aswel, i just wish i had put more detail in to it tho. and thankyou.....youre the only one that comented on them finishing each others scentences. i will try to upfdate soon, but dont want to rush it, then again, dont really have the time not to rush it either !
@farzana and sweetouch, thankyou again, and yeah, everyone is glad to see the back of bharti arent they, but will she really be away for that long??? well you'll have to wait and see.
@anjali, no im not revealing whats wrong with bharti yet, and i had thought of something, but now i'm not so sure😕. im glad u and the rest didnt find it boring (i honestly thought u would) and regarding vrinda, youre asking if she's being too brave. well the way i see it, she is constantly having a tug of war with herself. she hates yug for what he did, she is jealous of his new life, but at the same time she cant help but love him, and she knows that this is the way its gonna be, so she is trying to accept it and get on by pretending to be his freind. and no.....them being united is still a little far off yet, so plz just bear with me ok.
Edited by shab83 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Shabs,
OMG I was taking a revision break and started reading your fan fic, i was only planning on reading one or two parts but I ended up reading the whole thing till your last update. They are amazing OMG, I was in so much shock, (Good happy shock) *leaving me speechless*
I have loved every part of it even the fact Yug is married to Bharti, all i could think of reading this was Kuja acting to this, they would amazing and hoping this was the actual TSPLS storyline!
My favourite scene so far has been the one in the closet with all the confessions and the today when they went on lunch reading it i could actually feel the akwardness, they were feeling and I feltl so sorry for Vrinda, who thinks Bharti is pregnant aww, she still loves Yug so much.
Your writing is amazing and i just wanted to continue reading this, i want to see YuVi unite, i wish I had readed it later once they had re-united I can't live with the suspence!
Great work!
Nikita
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i liked the update! i am so glad bharti is out of the way for 10 days so hopefully yuvi open up their feelings to each other soon. please update soon! i loved the dupata scene and during lunch i could actually picture yug eating like a cute child with his sleeves rolled up. very cute.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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@nikita, hun thankyou so much for your lovely coment😳😳 but really, you actually like the fact that yug is married???????.......okkkaaaaaayyyyyyyy😕😕😕 and you really want this to be the actuall story line????? hun plz diont say that......i dont want yug married, i know i wrote it, but i dont want that happening in the show. (and yes i know that's really hypocritical, but when i first started this i felt really low, and thought that ekta would definatly take this route..so why not make sure it has a happy outcome, but now, seeing the drama, i cant bear it) i want yuvi united without another unfortunate marriage. having said that im really really happy to see that ur enjoying it, and are willing to stick around for the next bits. thankyou so much for praisning my writing.....because as an avid reader, i know for a fact thats its not great, but your coments really help me. by the way "vrinda THINKS bharti is pregnant" who said she isnt really ????
well i guess you will just have to wait and see.

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