FF:HOW YUVI UNITE prt 62 updated on pg44 30/11/09 - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
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dont b 😕 tho i never like the fact yug married to bharati and all these misunderstandings between yuvi, i m still in love with ur ff. poor vrinda and poor bharati, is she dying?!!
like to read all details so tk ur time dear, i know yuvi will unite and thts enuf for me.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey hun why havent you updated the next part yet waiting to read it yaar please update soon😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow hun! actually i read all your scenes for the fan fiction today from start to what it is so far and it's SO good! it's so emotional- it made me cry! and writings that can make people cry are very powerfully written. so please from now on never call your self a bad writer. ekta uses actors on television to make the audience feel emotional but you have just used words here to express the strong love between yuvi which sheds a lot of pain.
please update the next part though soon! i really want yug and vrinda to somehow feel that their love is not one sided.
again reading your fan fiction i can say with confidence that if ekta decided to reuinte yuvi she will surely follow like the ideas you have here. i just hope the painful track ends soon on the drama though.

well good luck with your writing and i am waiting to read the next update.
thanks again for a great fan fiction hun!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@ neetu, off course im not gonna kill you for saying you feel sorry for bharti......infact it was kinda my intension to make you guys feel like that. look i dont really like or feel sorry for ragbir either, but ekta is trying her level best to win sympathy votes for him...and some people do like him and feel sorry for him, so i thought i would try and do the same for bhartis charachter aswel. thnx for ur honest comment hunn, and thnx for comenting on my FF. 😃 it means a lot that a great writer like you is reading my FF!
@sabz1968, no i really really wouldnt mind ekta coppying this at all, as long as she stuck to it and united yuvi. but if she was to come on here, i would prefer her to copy anjali's prediction (wich is on page 2 of this topic). even i didnt want yug married !
@zeeta, thnx hunn for keepin readin, it means a lot😳 !
@sadaf, im glad u liked it😃 and im sorry it was short, but im really lost for time these days.....cant promise, but will try to make the next update longer.
@isra, i dont know whether to hope for ekta to go in same direction or not (you never know when she can change her mind in the middle of things), but if she makes the ending same as mine then thats great! all i want is yuvis love to always stay strong and for them to unite !
@purplepal,thnx for liking it😃 and yes they will unite, but there is still a rocky road ahead!
@anjali, what about poor yug?? lol, i know, but yeah poor vrinda and poor bharti. and i dont know if i want her dead or not yet, i did at first, but now im thinking maybe i could use a different track.....im kinda stuck, which is another reason why i havent updated yet ! but im sure it will just come to me as im writing.
@binky.....wow, im so happy u really like it, im not being modest but really wasnt expecting this😳....thnx so much sweety. and yes i will try and update later on today, but slightly 😕 about what direction to take with bharti, and also just have loads of other crap to do. so plz bear with me.
@swerav, your coment made me😭, it really made me happy. thnx for taking the time to read and coment! and now im really worried. this FF has got such a good response, and has started of well, im just scared i dont mess it up. i hope u guys continue to like it aswel. im glad you said that about ekta, for once lets hope we are right. i want them united so badly.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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yeh dekkhe to ekta ko akkal aaye to accha hai.. is hi ko follow karne ke liye bataao ekta ko... lolz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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shab 83 no thanks for me lolz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: isra4ever

shab 83 no thanks for me lolz

omg omg omg........so sorry yaar ghalti ho gayi yaar................jaanu im so sorry...didnt realise................plz dont be offended.......omg plz plz plz dont be angry.
off course thankyou thankyou thankyou......plz dont think wrong of me, yaar i can be such a clutz........
THANKYOU😃😃😃,
ITS BECAUSE YOU GUYS TAKE THE TIME TO READ AND LEAVE COMENTS, THAT i CONTINUE.......EVERY SINGLE COMENT MAKES ME HAPPY.
didnt realise, agen sorry !
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 25

Monday morning

Vrinda is doing her delivery rounds in the office, she was trying her level best not to run out of things to do…..god knows how she had got through yesterday, all day trying to keep her mind off yug and their little encounters. This past weekend she had felt like she had been tossed in a hurricane.

The next file was marked for bharti, what could vrinda do, there was no escape, this was how life would be from now on….she had to learn to live with the fact that she would constantly see bharti and yug, I mean they all worked in the same place, how long would she be able to avoid them. She had to get on with it, no matter how much life rubbed it in her face, no matter how constantly she was reminded of the fact that yug's future was with someone else not her, she just had to deal with it !

So she went to give bharti her file. Vrinda knocked on the door, but there was no reply, she's probably not here yet, she thought , and so just opened the door. inside bharti was sitting in her chair, elbows on desk and holding her head. Vrinda found her self feeling worried for her, which was quite unexpected.

"what's the matter bharti? Are you not feeling well? "

"no…I don't know what's wrong…….these head aches wont go away, they're not that painful….just really annoying……and now I keep feeling sick aswel…….I've vomited twice since this morning…….but I've got an appointment for tomorrow…so that's something"

vrinda was listening carefully to bharti's words. She was no expert…..but she knew enough. When a married woman normally said she was having head aches and feeling sick, it normally came down to being one thing. Pregnant ! Vrindas emotions were rollicking. she looked at bharti and thought, that this woman was gonna have the baby of the man she loved. Vrinda went up to bharti and stroked her hair. "youre gonna be fine, don't worry " she said

"am I ?" replied bharti

"off course you are" vrinda tried to convince her.

Bharti looked up at vrindas face.

"omg…look I've made you worried now, I'm sorry, don't worry about me, I know…I'll be fine, ok don't start crying now…coz you'll set me off aswel"

Bharti could see the tension in vrindas eyes, Vrinda realised and quickly brought on a smile to cover it up.

Awe bless, her thought bharti, she is such a good friend for caring.

Vrinda patted her on the back, told her not to worry to much, and said she had to leave to deliver the rest of the files, bharti nodded, and vrinda left.

Later on vrinda is still doing errands but old memories managed to find their way into her mind.

Part 26

Vrinda remembers:

Vrinda has just finished putting all the washed clothes on washing line. When suddenly a few of the village children Came running, they must have between the age of 4 and 7. They were playing catch. first they started to run circles around vrinda, (normally she didn't mind, but today she was really tired, and had a lot of work still left to do) She told them to go play somewhere else. But they weren't listening, to busy trying not to be caught. Then they started to pull on the washed clothes.

"Stop pulling the clothes", vrinda shouted, "ive just washed them, if they fall on the floor, and-"

But before she could finish her sentence, their actions did. The children were so exited in their game, that all their tugging on the clothes had brought the whole washing line down.

Vrinda screamed" I told you not to do that…didn't I…..but NO…..you never listen……wait till I tell your mums, im gonna make sure they give you a beating…..come here you little" she said as she tried to garb one of the little ones…but they were just too fast for her…and managed to escape.

Vrinda was so frustrated, she had spent all morning washing these clothes, and now they needed to be washed again. Before she could curse, she heard a bolt of loud laughter. There was only one person who laughed like that and she knew who it was.

She turned around to see yug having fits, he was laughing so hard that he was half bent over and his hands were on his stomach.

Vrinda got angry. Her wok load had just doubled, and he was finding this funny!

She walked up to him and said "why are you laughing?…..don't laugh……………stop laughing" she demanded, but this just made him chuckle even more.

that's it….she cudnt take this any more….best thing was just to ignore him. She turned around, and went to pick up all the clothes off the floor.

Yug had realised maybe he had gone too far….but it was just so funny. He stopped, and and went to go and help her pick up the clothes. Vrinda saw he was trying to be helpful but she was angry. She grabbed the shirt out of his hand and and took the pile of dirty laundry to the other side of the yard for washing.

Yug followed, not taking his eyes off her face, she looked so beautiful when she was glowing with anger.

"Why have you come here now?….to gloat some more…..just go away and laugh some more why don't you"

Yug didn't answer, he was still lost in her.

"my work has just increased, and you are happy. Do you like seeing me working all the time, off course you must, you allways go on about how your wife should know all the works of the house…"

But before she could continue yug put his finger on her lips.

"just shush for gods sake…..allways getting the wrong end of the stick aren't you" he pointed out.

"I wasn't laughing because you have do do all the washing all over again…..I was just admiring the way you handled those kids…..or maybe I should say the way you didn't handle them" another small chuckle managed to find its way out. But yug serioused up before vrinda shouted again

" I was just wondering vrinda, how are you gonna handle our kids?" he continued

"what?" she wasn't expecting him to come out with that.

"I mean are you gonna shout at them like that aswel?" yug said with a cute smirk on his face.

But before she could tell him off for saying it, she found herself arguing the point.

"off course I wont, I wont let our kids become that naughty in the first place"

Yug loved the way she said "our" kids and not "my" kids. He was enjoying this, so decided to carry on

"really, so your gonna be a strict mum then are you. Well ok then, you be the strict one…and I'll be the fun loving one that spoils them"

"hey that's not fair" vrinda had become lost in this future scenario. She cud just imagine herself running around after the kids, while yug came with his big smile and managed to settle them down with his treats.

Yug came closer to her, his closeness snapped her out of her daydreaming.

"what are you thinking?" his voice was so quiet and sensual. Vrinda looked back at him and, she cud feel her cheeks burning up, she knew she must be blushing. Yug saw her flushed cheeks and this made him more happy. Vrinda was dreaming his dream.

"ok lets forget who's gonna be strict and who will be the spoil sport, I just want to know, how many kids should we plan to have?"

Vrinda found herself more embarrassed.

"um what about 6, it's a nice round even number, don't you think.?" vrinda was shocked, she couldnt answer. With no rsponse from vrinda yug continued

"ok not 6.….right we'll make it 8 then" still no rseponse "fine………….. if you say so, 10" vrinda couldn't believe what he was saying……did he actually want 10 kids?? Vrinda couldn't help but feel scared still nothing managed to come out of her mouth.

"you are dead set on having a whole dozen arent you vrinda, I don't know, but if you insist"

"yug….what are you saying….you really want 12 children?" vrinda turned around, she couldn't handle the preasure any more.

yug let out a laugh. He pulled her face towards his, "no vrinda, I only want what you want, I don't mind how many kids I have…..as long as I have them with you….that's all that matters"

Vrinda's face lit up with happiness. Yug was such a great romancer, he would be a great husband to her, and an even greater father to their children. Vrinda wanted to hug him so badly that moment, she moved closer as did he. but just then another familiar voice came from inside. It was chachi, she was calling vrinda to help her with something. Vrinda gave yug a loving smile before she went inside.

Yug watched her hurry away. When she left, yug turned around and looked up at the sky. "I was joking about the dozen kids……….don't take that seriously…2 maybe 3 will do me fine, ok god" and he walked off.

Vrinda had come back outside to pick up something when she had overheard yug talking to god. She laughed to herself, he was such a joker, but his thoughts were just like hers"

Back to the present.

Vrinda wipes her tears away, and thinks to herself that that's all they are…..just memories. Yug's life is with bharti, he was her husband, and soon he would be the father of her kids. that's just what fate had planned. No matter what, she wanted yug happy. She tried to imagine him with his first born in his arms. Other things may have changed…but the fact that he would be a great father….that would never change. Vrinda got on with the rest of her work.

Next day, bharti and yug go to the doctor. The doctor gives bharti the basic examination. Then starts with the questions…do you eat well? Do you sleep well? Do you think about something too much? Is there something that worries you?

Bharti's answer to all of the above was no. but both bharti and yug knew that the answer to the last 2 questions was false. yug felt so guilty, he knew that bharti was worried about their relationship, and he knew that she was allways thinking about it. Was he responsible for her being unwell? This made yug feel sick to the stomach. He was such a bad person. He hated himself right now.

The doctor continued "well as far I can see, there doesn't seem to be anything wrong, but we will still do some tests, just to be on the safe side"

"tests?" asked bharti

"yes, but don't worry, should be fine, and we will have the results in a week or 10 days time" "um ok"

The doctor took bharti's blood in several little bottles for various tests, and then there was an oral swab test too. Yug and bharti got up to leave, but before they did, the doctor said "oh just one more thing, I cant believe I forgot to ask this, but your symptoms, is there any chance you may be pregnant?"

Yug and bharti's hearts jumped, they froze. First they looked at each other and then back at the doctor.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow that memory part was too good yaar just loved😃😃 it even though I dont like the fact that Yug is married I really like your FF its really good👏 I hope one day the truth will come out of bhartis mouth that would shock Vrinda like nothing😊
hope you update soon hun now i'm addicted to these FF and i cant live without them 😃 god you should have seen the smile on my face when I saw that you had updated😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow that woz great!! the memory bit woz amazing!!😃😃 i hope yuvi r united really soon!! buh bye.xx

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