FF: Rishty dilon kay.(part 14 page11)updated. - Page 5

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Posted: 16 years ago
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^Neetu hun! Neil and Pooja can NEVER be a couple...they are COUSINS!!! LOL! Pooja's mum, Radhika and Neil's mum, Gayatri (the negative one) are sisters!!! LMAO!!!
Teji, Pooja, Yug and Neil are all cousins! Radhika's brother is Yug's dad-Sumeer, and Gayatri, Sumeer and Radhika are siblings. All are VA's children.
And that was a really sweet part sweetouch_98! College part was the best!😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: k_luv

^Neetu hun! Neil and Pooja can NEVER be a couple...they are COUSINS!!! LOL! Pooja's mum, Radhika and Neil's mum, Gayatri (the negative one) are sisters!!! LMAO!!!

Teji, Pooja, Yug and Neil are all cousins! Radhika's brother is Yug's dad-Sumeer, and Gayatri, Sumeer and Radhika are siblings. All are VA's children.
And that was a really sweet part sweetouch_98! College part was the best!😊

lol...OH MY GOD...I TOTALLY FORGOT😆😲🤪
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Posted: 16 years ago
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lovely update. nice to all the pairs actually getting together.
i know you have said that neel and puja cudnt get together in show coz they were cuzins, but i allways wanted sharad and geetika, and neel and puja together, besides having yuvi together also.
so its nice to see you are doing this in ur FF.
do update soon hun, and plz make them longer (if you dont mind)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#44
very cute part hun... liked the way vrinda wanna meet yug and also like neel-puja and college as well.

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Posted: 16 years ago
#45
that was really good... awww pooja and neel... shoooo shweeeet!!!!!!
please update soon!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46
Thank U all yr for liking the update and Really i had always a wish that Neel and puja as a couple.
@ Shab thanx yr for theadvice yr i will try to make them longer.............
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Posted: 16 years ago
#47
Well guys moving towards the next part. I hope u guys will enjoy it and sorry yr for any mistakes.
PART 8
Vrinda is shockingly looking to yug: APP............
Pooja: do You know him Vrinda?
Vrinda: Han mein in se Ghithika ki engagment mein mili thi.
Pooja: ohh mein tou bhool gai thi k yeh tou sharad k best frnd hain well vrinda aj mein tumhara introduction apny bhai se karwa rahi hon. Yug is my cousin and Yug Vrinda is Neel's sister.
Yug: Nice meeting u again madam.
Vrinda: nice meeting u too sir.
All of the four laughs at this statement.
"Hey wat a surprise yr Yug aur Vrinda hamary college mein........." Ghithika gladly hugs Vrinda." aur yeh kiya tum log kab se lawn mein khary ho lets go somewhere else." so, all of the five sets towards canteen.
at canteen Vrinda sits in front of Yug on the table so that she can easily have a look at him while Yug keeping in mind that Vrinda is gonna woe him he avoids any eye contact wid her while Vrinda she badly wants him to notice her but in vain.
Yug: Neel Tum tou thek thak insan ho phir Puja mein tum ne aisa kiya dekha k tum us k liy pagal ho rahy ho well i will help u guys out but i feel Pooja ne hi tumhe force kiya hoga Pyar karny k liy hunnnnn
Yug gives funny gestures to Puja while puja looks sternly towards him wid angry warnings in her eyes.
Puja: bhaiyya yeh ap kiya kah rahy hain aisi koi bat nahi hai.
Neel: yr pasand tou mein ne kiya tha laikn agar Puja mujhe pasand karti tou bhi kabhi kuch na kahti tum janty nahi in larkiyon ko apny pyar ka izhar yeh pehly kabhi nahi kartin yeh kam hum larkiyon ko hi karna parta hai.
Yug: why??????? Jab koi larki kisi ko pasand kary she should say its not only guys duty.
Vrinda: yeah its not only guys duty but i think this step should bhi taken by boys.
Yug: But why???????/
Vrinda: acha nahi lagta na k aik larki larky ko propose kary.
Yug: oohhoo it means har mar khany wala kam larka kary.
Vrinda: Matlab????????
Yug: Pyar larki kary tou koi problem nahi par propose karna problem hai. Larka pyar bhi kary ga propose bhi kary ga aur agar larki na many aur usy ghussa ajay tou us ki mar bhi khay ga its not fair.
Vrinda: kuch bhi ho propose larky ko karna chahiy.
Ghithika looking at the situation gets alarmed about the future consequence and ask both of them.
"Ary Yeh tum dono kiya topic ly k beth gay ho kaun propose kary ga kaunnahi choro yr"
Yug: nahi aj tou faisla ho K rahy ga. Vrinda ko meri bat manni pary gi.
Vrinda: mein q manno tumhari bat. Aur tumhe kiya lagta hai tumhary is lecture se impress ho jaon gi aur tum mery dil mein jaga bana lo gy. well MR. Yug let me tell u yeh sub kar k tum kabhi mery dil mein jaga nahi bana sakty.
Yug: ohhhhh madam ap ko yeh kis ne kaha k mein ap Kay dil mein jaga banana chahta hon aisa sochna bhi mat q k bad mein takleef tumhe hi hogi.
And wid thisYug and Vrinda leaves the place while rest of the three are astonishly looking at them.
After leaving College Yug meets Sharad to tell him the story. He is quite happy at the way he showed an attittude to Vrinda.
Sharad frowning: Yug tum.......... pagal ho gai ho. Come on yr larki se koi aisy bat karta hai.
Yug: yr u know she likes me dekhna usy boht takleef ho rahi hogi iss wakt.
Sharad: tum se yeh kis ne kaha k she likes u.
Yug: yr the way she was looking at me in the party and today in the college its clear that she likes me.
Sharad: okkkk tumhe us k dekhny se aisa lagta hai well MR. YUG agar woh 2 ghanty ki party mein pachly 2 dinno se tum se pyar karny lagi hai tou ajj ki 2 min ki larai k bat 2 second mein woh tumhe apny damagh se nikal dy gi. tumhara agar yeh attitude raha tou pori duniya mein sirf aik cheez tum se pyar kar sakti hai.
Yug:Kiya??????????
Sharad: GADHA........... tumhary is attitude pe sirf tum se koi pyar nahi kar skta Vrinda tou kiya koi larki tumhe nahi milny wali.
Yug: mujhe koi nahi sirf Vrinda chahiy.
Sharad : tou mery bhai pehly tum usy impress karo and then woh tumhe impress karny ki koshish kary gi na. Iss tarah nahi chalny wala tum yahan saiyan bany ky sapny dekhna aur dulhaniya koi aur ly jai ga.
Yug: yeah i thin you are right wat should i do now.
Sharad: simple Sorry bolna hoga.........
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Posted: 16 years ago
#48
loved it yaar. i like this naughty teasing yug a lot yug, and wow, vrinda actually came out and said that he is trying to make a place in her heart, never expected that yaar.
but it really made me laugh
i loved these lines
Pyar larki kary tou koi problem nahi par propose karna problem hai. Larka pyar bhi kary ga propose bhi kary ga aur agar larki na many aur usy ghussa ajay tou us ki mar bhi khay ga
lol,
thnx yaar, hopefully the next secenm when yug apologises will be a bit romantic. looking forward to it !
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Posted: 16 years ago
#49

I really really enjoyed this part. The conversation between Yug&Vrinda was cute. And I think he's right...why should only guys propose?I'm sure us girls can do much better, nah?😉😆

Anyhow, I'm looking forward to Yug's apology. I'm sure Vrinda won't let him win her over that easily...so, it'll be fun to see how many hoops Yug has to jump through before he wins over Vrinda.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#50
that is really good...plz update soon!!!!

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