FF: Rishty dilon kay.(part 14 page11)updated. - Page 7

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey sorry guys i hate keeping u hanging like that but actually i got busy wid my cousins engagement so was'nt able to update u guys soon sorry hun.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Well guys i will now move towards next part i hope u guys will like it.

PART 10
Vrinda: ohoo lagta hai phone rakh dia.
Yug: hun im on line Vrinda.
Vrinda: oho woh mujhe...... laga...... ap ne phone band kar dia.
Yug: i m on line well ap kuch kahna chahti thi hmmmm.
Vrinda: nahi....... han woh....
Yug: chalo pehly yeh decide kar lo han.... ya......nahi.
Vrinda: Kiya?!?!
Yug: App kah rahi ho na han nahi so.......
Vrinda: woh mein app se kahna chahti thi........ k........ ( vrinda slowly gets frustated wid the situation" idiot kuch samj hi nahi araha issy k mein kiya kahna chahti hon how can i ask him to meet") woh..... mein app se....... NEEL aur pooja k bary mein bat karna chahti thi....
Yug:ohoo (Yug expecting something e;lse gets annoyed at this) tou app iss bat k liya itna parishan ho rahi thi. mujhe laga......
Vrinda: of course Neel mera bhai hai uss k liy parishan tou hongi aur app ko kiya laga........
Yug: Nothing. Ok tou app kiya kahna chahti thi about Neel and puja. i m listening.
Vrinda: han par phone pay bat kafi lambi ho jai gi tou........
Yug: tou.......
Vrinda: (vrinda thinks to herself"Vrinda beta yeh time hai kahna hoga abhi milny ko warna Yug tou samjany wala nahi hai ya tou samaj nahi raha ya mujhe ullu bana raha hai") Tou kal mil k bat karty hain iss bary mein wat u say?
Yug who was getting mad to listen to this overjoys and without wasting any time: Han it sounds great tou kal mein phir app se puja k college k sath waly cafe mein app k wait karunga at 10 am. i think u won't have any problem wid the time hun.
Vrinda: ok done i will meet u rite there at 10.
Yug: ok then bye.
Vrinda: bye
Both of them cut the phone. yug is standing by the phone thinking wat he expected happened Vrinda wanted to meet him. " i know Vrinda tum mujh se Neel k liy nahi apny liy mil rahi ho tou dekhty hain wat is the next step i should take."
Vrinda is in her room she is overjoyed wid the feeling that tommorrow both are going to meet she can't control herself and donno wat to do" Kal mein Yug se milon gi oh God i can'tbelieve this OMG i have to decide wat should i wear." she goes towards her cupboard to check some clothes she puts all her dressess out but is unable to decide that wat she should wear" oh God aik tou aik bhi acha sa dress nahi hai mery pas ab yeh kaisy colurs hain" after searching out the whole cupboard she finally takes out a lemon green colour suit" i think this will do yeah i will wear this one"
Vrinda after putting all her stuff back in place comes towards her balcony and is thinking about Yug thier first meeting on the clif, thier dance at the party and thier little fight that took place betwwen them " yeh mujhe kiya ho raha hai why i m feeling all this why i want to meet him mujhe uss k pas rahna q acha lagta hai pata nahi in swaloon k jawab mujhe kab milin ge."
Vrinda is in her balcony when she feels someone else is also there she turns around and is shocked to find Yug.she move towards him and tries to touch him but he moves on step backward. Vrinda feels that everything even the time has came to a halt.and a song starts playing at the back. the song is from Veer zara( one of my favourite 😉)
Janam dekh lo mit gai doorian mein yahn hon yahn hon yahan. (guys i m going to start from the middle of song according to the situation.)
mein he mein ab tumhary khaylon mein hon mein jawabon mein hon main sawalon mein hon
mein tumhary har aik khawab mein hon basa mein tumhari nazar k ujalon mein hon
dekhti ho mujhe dekhti ho jahan
mein yaha hon yahan hon yahan
Vrinda loves dancing wid him (imagine SRK as Yug and Preity as vrinda) but suddenly she realizes that no one is there. She looks here and there but then smiles at herself that wat she was thinking how a guy can affect her so much. she goes towards her bed while thinking she takes her teddy bear and hugs it. she tries to sleep but is unable to she is waiting for tommorrow when she will meet yug.
Sorry guys i know its a short update but guys i m very tired and am going to sleep but i promise my next update will be longer promise.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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that was great hunny. i especially liked the bit with the song. its one of my fav songs too. in fact i wanted it in the show really badly to show vrinda remembering yug, but they never did. at least you have put it in ur FF hun. thnx !
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i loved this part and i knoe i will love the next part even more so please update soon hun😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@ Shab hey yr i always wanted some good songs for YuVi in the show then Solha baras track and this is wat i m trying to do here.
@ Binky Thanx sweetheart i will update the next part by 2morrow.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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WOW I am so gald i finally had the time to read ur fan fic, i kept on seeing it but I was always busy I never got the time, to read it.

Its really good, its so sweet and fluffy, I love all the jodi's!
i can't wait to see what happens next
do cont soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Great update hun. You really stayed true to Vrinda and Yug's character. I really liked the way how Vrinda wanted to ask him out but had to use a round-about way of doing so. While Yug was getting frustrated that she only wanted to talk about Neel&Pooja. At least, he eventually understood that Neel&Pooja were just an excuse. I also loved how you incorporated the Veer-Zaara song into this scene. Its one of my favorites!😊 I always wanted to see it in the actual show, but it never happened. I wish they would show it now...as in when Vrinda returns home to RB's home...she continues to remember Yug. They really need something like that to boost the show and to give the fans some hope. Anyhow, I can't wait to see what happens during their date😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thnks tamanna for this lovely FF.
like the song . waiting for their meeting.. do update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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it sounds really really awsum!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@ nikita thanx sweety i hope u will like the next parts too.
@ Neetu my dear i always wanted to present Vrinda as a girl of this generation but i also wanted her to be a gal as in the serial so thats wat i m trying to do. Well i always wanted some really very good songs should have been added but the creatives...... so i decided to add wat i always wanted for them well i have another song for next part hope u guys will enjoy it also its not a typical slow track as usually added for couples its a bit fast one i hope it works.
@ Anjali thanx sweetheart.
@ Shilky thanx hunny.
Edited by sweetouch_98 - 16 years ago

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