FF: Rishty dilon kay.(part 14 page11)updated. - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
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yuvi conversation was very funny.. its very good and keep it up

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Neetu2825

I really really enjoyed this part. The conversation between Yug&Vrinda was cute. And I think he's right...why should only guys propose?I'm sure us girls can do much better, nah?😉😆

Anyhow, I'm looking forward to Yug's apology. I'm sure Vrinda won't let him win her over that easily...so, it'll be fun to see how many hoops Yug has to jump through before he wins over Vrinda.

Hey sweethearti was thinking that this time Vrinda should be the one who tries to Yug win over why always Yug should run after her. But do let me know if this dosen't sound well or it seems stupid do let me know so that i can change the track.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetouch_98

Hey sweethearti was thinking that this time Vrinda should be the one who tries to Yug win over why always Yug should run after her. But do let me know if this dosen't sound well or it seems stupid do let me know so that i can change the track.

i for one think this is a brilliant idea. go for it girl. i think we have seen go after vrinda enough times. in the show, and in FF's. this would be great. finally vrinda can prove her love by doing the chasing. i mean i dont want vrinda to completly start wearing the trousers, but plz do this, i love this idea. !
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i lovedd thee scene=]
thee hindi i lovee alott, it makess mee actually imagine it on indiann tv=]
haha andd greatt aboutt howw girlss shouldd have a chancee andd put themseves on thee linee andd proposee, i meann why should guys alwayss havee thee funn😉
noww likee most otherss havee saiddd im waitingg forr YUG's apologyy, itss goingg to bee awesomee!
GREAT WORK! sweettouch & keep up your greatt work!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey guys thanx for liking this part and yr i m sorrry for not updating that much soon as i was badly stuck at my assignments. but now i will update soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Now heading on towards the next part i hope u guys will enjoy it.
PART 9
Yug: What sharad are u crazy yug aur kisi ko sorry don't u ever dare to think that ok.
Sharad: thats the only way to solve the problem my dear. Aur ho sakta hai k tumhara yeh sorry tumhari zindagi badal dy woh tumhe pasand karny lagy soch lo.
Yug: hun i guess u r right but mein uss se bat kaisy karonga.
Sharad: simple yr woh Puja ki frnd hai na puja se us ka number ly k usy call kar lena.
Yug: yeah that sounds good iss tarah jab mein ussy sorry kahunga tou ussy face bhi nahi karna pary ga thats a cool idea ok Sharad i have to go.
Sharad: ofcourse u can go.
Sharad smiles to yug and both of them hug each other and Yug leaves.
yug enters his home and finds his mom sitting in the sofa he walks towards her and sits besides her. Bindyia lovingly looks at her son. He takes her hand and puts his head in her lap.
Yug: Maa aik bat pochon ap se.
Bindiya: han poch na kia hua.
Yug: Maa aik larka hai woh aik larki ko pasand kart hai yeh bat us larki ko bhi nahi pata dono ki itni dosti bhi nahi hai. phir bhi dono k bech larai ho jati hai woh bhi aik choti bat pe tou maa ab sorry kisy bolna chahiy.
Bindiya: jo jis se pyar kart hai ussy agar larka uss larki ko pasand karta hai tou usy kahna chahiy sorry kahny se koi chot bara tou hota nahi han dosron k dil mein uss k liy izzat barh jati hai waisy tou yeh sub q poch raha hai kahin woh larka tou to nahi.
Yug: nahi maa woh mera aik frnd hai uss ki yeh problem hai iss liy waisy hi poch raha tha.
Meanwhile Vrinda is in her room she restlessly paces around her room. She seems quite tense. she holds her dupatta in her hand and is just rolling it in her fingers. she also gives a glance to the phone lying nearby her.
Vrinda thinks to herself" mujhe tou yeh samaj nahi araha k hamary bech larai kaisy ho gai aur woh bhi itni choti si bat pe i think mujhe Puja ko phone kar k yug se bat karni ho gi" she walks towards her phone picks the mouthpiece and is about to dial Yug's number but stops" Mein q ussy phone karun larai us ne start ki thi sorry bhi ussy hi bolna hoga han mein phone nahi karun gi."
Puja is in her room when Yug enters thier.she looks back and welcome her brother wid a smile.
Puja: Yug bhaiyya app?
Yug: han Puja woh tum..... se.... bat kani thi.
Puja: han tou kahiy na.
Yug: Puja aj college mein jo hua.... thek nahi hua Vrinda tou kaf upset hogi mujhe se but seriously mein nahi chahta tha k yeh sub ho seriously pata nahi mujhe kiya hogia tha.
Puja: thats ok bhaiyya.
Yug: puja mein vrinda ko sorry bolna chahta hon kiya tumhary pas us ka number hoga.
Puja: thats great han q nahi hai mein abhi dial karti hun.
Puja gets up and walks towards the phoneshe picks up the mouth piece and dials vrinda number. while on other side Vrinda " i think woh duffer tou mujhe phone karny wala nahi hai i think mujhe hee try karna hoga" she also tries to call him but the number is engaged she tries again but still no use vrinda thinks to herself" Thek hai bus mein phone hi nahi karti"
Puja: Yug bhaiyya number is still engaged.
Yug: ok just leave it......Puja just try once more.
Puja dials and this time Vrinda phone starts ringing" Bhaiyya ring ja rahi hai"
Vrinda picks up the phone.
Vrinda: hello....
Puja: hello Vrinda how are u.
Vrinda: ohhoo puja i m fine
Puja: actually yr i just wanted to say sorry for wat happened today.
Vrinda: thats ok yr waisy Tumhary yug bhaiyya ka ghussa ab kaisa hai
Puja: Ghussa tou ab uttar chuka hai he wanna speak to you.
Vrinda: ok.....
Puja gives the phone to yug and leaves
Yug: hello Vrinda.
Vrinda: han Yug.
Yug: how are you
Vrinda: i m fine.
Yug:Vrinda actually aj jo kuch bhi hua mein uss ..... k liy.........( he just closes his eyes while saying this as this is to hard for him to do.) I....... M..... SORRY. I wanted to say SORRY to you for that.
Vrinda who gets happy: thats ok Yug well sorry tou mein bhi bolna chahti hoon mein bhi kuch ziyada hyper ho gai well i m SORRY too.
Yug: thats ok.
Now both of them are silent on phone both of them don't know wat to say next while both of them wants to ask each other if they can meet but are unable to ask.
Yug: sooo.
Vrinda: sooo.
Yug: ok i will cut the phone U take care.
Vrinda: ok (but she is unwilling to cut the phone coz she thinks that he has not invited her so how can he cut the phone).
Yug: so Bye.
Vrinda: bye................... Hello yug.........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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aww, that was great hun. loved there convo.
why did ya end it there tho ?
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Posted: 16 years ago
#58
Great update, yaar.
I really liked the fact that Yug had so much trouble saying "sorry"....that is so like a guy😆.
But, I do have one complaint...why did you end it there? 😳I'm dying to know what happens next so plz plz update soon. You made us wait quite a long time for this update. Please try not to torture us with a longer waiting period this time around.😛 Anxiously awaiting your next update.😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
#59
lovelyy updatee yaar=]]
i really lovedd howw at thee endd u added thee feeling of how both havee sumthingg too sayy but cant, itss very sweet!
haha and i think neetu iss rightt! pleasee dont torture us with a longg waitingg periodd oncee moree!😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
#60
lovely update hun but i hate the fact that your leaving us hangging like this so please update soon

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