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Posted: 7 years ago
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No dear I am not saying like that. I don't like kzk. For me one who loves they have to be together at any cost. As for the consummation before marriage, if their love is pure then whether it happens before or after does not matter. If they get their soulmates then only it will happen otherwise cultured people can't open up themselves with anyone even it is arranged. One more thing we can see youngsters with knowingly or unknowingly, some times to enjoy they do such mistakes which I feel pity for them. They will sure regret for their deed later in the life. Later if both move apart under some certain circumstances and forget it then there won't be any problem . If anyone of them misuse it for their greedyness then that end with tragedy. That should not happen with anyone. But here, I remember what kanak said in tsmsp in such cases both are responsible so now onwards girls should face it bravely then nothing can happen .How good that message na. My only concern is for girls .
Here our hero is always there for his love. So Kanak will always be safe. Sorry lovely I wrote so much. I hope you understand it with my point of view. Sorry if irritated.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Uma's care for kanak how good itis❤️Nice chapter of past memories lovely..if Strong love is there nothing is wrong ,we took it in positive way only, dnt worry dear😊thanks for this chapter& waiting eagerly for nxt parts..Happy weekend:)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Lovely please post 2 chapters per a day please.. eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi lovely sorry to reply late. No dear nothing wrong in your episode as long as both are matured enough to know what they are doing. In fact for us it's a new twist. In real life though it's a slightly different path to follow especially in India for many reasons. But still here Kanum and especially Uma the person of his words and wisdom is here so nothing will happen to Kanak. I feel there is a solid reason for the break up which you will unfold in coming epis so we are looking forward for your story eagerl. Till then have a blessed weekend and enjoy with family.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi lovely I just read all the chapters at one stroke amazing dear no words to compliment your writing style love it so much yaar. Uma detective kanak behind bars Ved Dr Watson OMG I am a great lover of Sherlock Holmes novels dear and uma character like Sherlock Holmes awesome thought I vividly imagined each and every scene u wrote 😛just adore your way of narrating the script darling 😳Awww KanUm sharing same bed in flashback the scenes which we waited for in our show 😉.As far as my take on this situation if two persons are loving each other unconditionally then there are no barriers for anything yaar offcourse in our country virginity is considered as biggest social stigma but then too in this story two love birds sharing everything in life isn't it beautiful 😉and half dressed uma proposing is he wearing pyjamas ☺️😆Wah ur taking me to the different world keep it up yaar very interesting and intriguing too why they broke up 😲
Lovely after long time I used this much emoticons 😃in my post thank you buddy 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Lovely is there any problem ? We are eagerly waiting for the updates .
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Yeah waiting lovely,plz update soon 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi buddies I am back and sorry for the late update as you know that weekends are busy specially if festive season is near but I do promise that I will update 2 chapters per day to make it up. And Diva really appreciate your comment and Sami and Melody Ritchie bhavani asp99 and Hatic thank for supporting and encouraging.
Chapter 6

Ved told Uma that press is waiting for us. He was surprised and in the conference room he was flooded with questions.

Reporter : Is this an attempt to suicide ?
Uma : No it's just a food poisoning nothing else.
Reporter : what you think will she will be hanged or life sentence for this brutal murder.
Uma : court will decide it not me right now I am just investigating.
Reporter : why it's taking so long it's a open and shut case.
Uma : This case is given to me just 2 days back and right now I am just working on evidence.
Reporter : you have a good reputation but still it's taking long .
Uma : Before coming to any judgement I want to be clear nothing else.

Uma said be rest assured I will make sure culprit will get punished. He walk out of the conference room.

Uma said to ved that I want all the details not only of victim but everyone one related to this case and one more thing where is rahul's cellphone. I mean it was not in evidence. Ved said I check with local officer. Doctor called Uma and said that Kanak is conscious now. Uma said I will be back.

He goes to hospital. Kanak was sitting on bed. He said you should take rest. She said I don't know for how many days I can relax I mean I have to go back to prison some time. He put his hand on her shoulder and said relax I am here and everything will be fine. She moved her right hand to hold his hand but screamed out of pain. He asked what happened. She said on Saturday night I hurted myself I think it's paining. He moved up her sleeve and saw wound. He was worried. He asked her what happened.

She said you know how the hostel washroom is. While coming out a nail stuck on my dress and I got this wound. He said have you applied any ointment. She said when to apply on Saturday I was depressed and on Sunday I got arrested and today is Tuesday. Do you think now it matters. He said it still matters to me. He put the ointment to her and laid her back and said relax.

Something came to his mind. He gone back to her hostel room which was sealed for investigation. He checked the washroom and found a cloth piece still stuck to it. He called ved and said that once again collect all the evidence. Ved said okay.

He came there and checked the night suit. Ved said what are you checking. Uma said ved we are sure that the killer was wearing this cloth while murdering. Ved said yes I mean it's blood stains on it. Uma said than it's sure that someone else was present there as Kanak night suit was torn before the murder and this cloth is perfectly fine. So that mean someone has bought a night suit similar to her murdered rahul and changed the cloths.

Ved said you may be right but only this cloth piece will not prove her innocence we need to find out that third person if your theory is right. And one more thing you told me to find out everything next month on Kanak's birthday she will inherit her parents property and it's worth 750 crores. Uma was shocked.

Guy's please tell me how is it going as it's my first attempt of thriller and please do comment
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29
Nice dear but it is too short. At least longer one I expected .OK. You might be busy. The way you end it is really making me to think what would be the next.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow Sherlock Holme and Ved aka Dr Watson at work just brilliant waiting eagerly for the next one/ two chapters. Lovely really one more unexpected info of the inherited property of Kanak. This may be the motive of murderer waiting for our Sher to find out the truth. 👏

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