Slow Flame (16 Parts Complete) 07/01/2018 - Page 6

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Posted: 7 years ago
#51
Hai maya.
Wow, it is beautiful
Waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Kanum1

Interesting maya!!thanks for this part..

Waiting eagerly for next one😊

Thank you, I will update soon!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Geethanatarajan

Hai maya.

Wow, it is beautiful
Waiting for the next part.

Hi Geetha,
Thank you!
I will update soon!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#54
Part 9-
Uma had not heard from Kanak since he had cut her call, it had been 6 days, 3 hours and 32 minutes, not that he was counting

He had walked past numerous times but she wasnt at work and he had no idea where she lived

Then he caught a glance of Kanak sat in the coffee shop next door, she was sat with Jai.
Uma never was good at controlling his temper and stormed into the cafe

Kanak looked up at Uma
"Oh hi, long time no see"
"Can we speak outside"

Kanak nodded
Jai looked on knowingly
He had told Kanak earlier, if she wasnt going to have him, he would

Uma was someone anyone could appreciate
"Where have you been"

Kanak raised her brow
"Excuse me, you cut me off "
"Yes well"
Kanak put her finger on his lips

Uma looked down at her finger then stepped back
"Youre acting a bit obsessed Uma"
"You did all this to call me obsessed"
He asked, dumbfounded

"Why did Jai make you jealous"
Uma gritted his teeth
"Of course not "
"Good, because if anyone should be jealous it should be me"

"I dont understand"
Kanak smiled
"Jai likes you, not me"
"But he doesnt know me"

"He likes your looks"
Uma's eyes widened
"Oh"
Kanak nodded

"What are you doing tomorrow"
"Working till 4"
"Meet me here then" Kanak asked

"What do you want to do"
Kanak smiled
"I dont mind, its our first date, im so excited"

Uma shook his head "No I'm meant to ask you out for our first date"
Kanak winked
"To late, youll have to be faster next time"

Uma fanned his face
"Already decided we will go on another date, we havent even had the first, im not sure if im ready for that level of commitment "

Kanak frowned, taking his joke seriously
Uma leant down, without thinking he kissed her lips
"You look better when you smile"

Uma walked away
But Kanak did smile from then onwards, in fact she couldnt wipe the smile from her face

Do let me know what you think!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#55
You are gifted my dear Maya
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Posted: 7 years ago
#56
Wow awesome story Maya WB this uma is too bold and expressive.
Slow flame apt title for this storyline romance is subtle but too much intensity loved it so much dear Pls update it soon 👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: savithp

You are gifted my dear Maya

Aw thank you!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Divyaamurali

Wow awesome story Maya WB this uma is too bold and expressive.

Slow flame apt title for this storyline romance is subtle but too much intensity loved it so much dear Pls update it soon 👏

Aw, thank you! Im so glad you like it! I will update now!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 10-
"Oh wow hes wearing a suit" Kanak muttered to herself
He was probably the best looking man Kanak had ever set eyes on

She was so nervous and really needed to move forward to go and see him but she couldnt

Uma looked down at his watch, 12 minutes late, had she stood him up?
Then he saw her, smiling at him from afar

He didnt think it was humanly possible to actually be that beautiful
But Kanak was an enigma
And constantly proved him wrong

She was dressed in blue, it really brought out her eyes
Scratching the back of his neck he held his other hand out

Kanak took it, she gazed at how well their hands fit together
Kind of like that was where they were meant to be

"You look beautiful"
Kanak blushed
"You to"
Her eyes widened
"I mean"
Uma shook his head

"Its okay, im nervous to"
Kanak smiled at that
"So where are we going "

Uma pointed to the horse and carriage set up
Helping her up she sat down, he climbed up next to her
"I feel like some kind of princess"

You deserve to be treated like one was what he wanted to say but he just smiled
It was difficult to hide how he felt, he didnt want to scare her off
He had made that mistake before

Kanak looked down at their entwined hands
The view was amazing from here, peaceful and calm
Stopping, he jumped down
Lifting her from her waist her legs spun around as he put her down

Sitting on the blanket ready, he passed her a flask
"Tea, because I made you spill the other"
Kanak bit her lip
He had seen her looking at him

He must have thought she was crazy
Uma's lips were warm by her ear, as he spoke she could feel the hairs on the back of her neck stand up

"I was looking to"
She couldnt help the uncontrollable shiver that ran down her spine
"Uma I"
"Its okay, you dont need to speak"

Kanak leant up, pressing her lips to his
And just like that, it was home
There wasn't fireworks or fire burning within them
It was like finally finding shelter in a thunderstorm

Her hand trailed up to cup his face, he rubbed his stubble against her cheek
She laughed
Tucking her hair behind her ear, he rested his forehead against hers

"I cant get enough"
She gulped
"Me neither"
And then they were kissing, again and again and again.

Thoughts? Or anything you would like to see ? I hope you're a enjoying this so far
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Whoah what a romantic date and passionate kiss wow what a description about the kiss finding shelter in thunderstorm 😳 how poetic and romantic Maya.Kisses in ur stories creates intensity and fantasize me ☺️always. Thank u so much for making me to dream😉Amazing Maya 🤗

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