Slow Flame (16 Parts Complete) 07/01/2018

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Posted: 7 years ago
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I am back, as per request of TSMSPfan
Sorry for being away for so long, i've been so busy, anyway here is the first part of Slow Flame-

Kanak tapped her foot, looking at her watch, the queue was so long and she was going to be late returning to work.

The things Kanak did for one cup of tea, realistically she could make it at home, but she quite enjoyed the view from the coffee shop window.


Uma stood up and walked the elderly man out, "Take this twice a day and in a weeks time you will feel a lot better"
The man thanked him and made his way out

Kanak was to busy looking at Uma, when she noticed she was first in the queue
"Tea please"

Handing her the tea, she paid and made her way out of the shop
Stopping at the window next door, she peered in

Not watching what she was doing , she spilled her tea on her hand
Uma looked up as she swore and shook her hand

Uma's fingers wrapped around her wrist, pulling her inside
Kanak looked up at him in a daze, her tea long forgotten outside

Uma sat her down , putting cream on her hand she was in awe of the man sat infront of her

Uma looked up at Kanak who was still staring longingly at him
"Your hand is sorted now"

Kanak snapped out of her daze "uh, thank you"
Uma smiled
Kanak reached into her purse, Uma shook his head
"Dont worry about payment"

"Oh okay thank you, um could I maybe buy you a drink"
Uma smirked "I dont know if you can handle holding another hot drink"

Kanak blushed, looking down, looking at her watch
"Crap, I have to go to work, um you should pop down some time its Kanak Mishtaan Bhandar"

Uma laughed shaking his head at her as she ran out quickly

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Posted: 7 years ago
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wonderful maya,enjoyed reading it..
Its glad you are back😊

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kanum1

wonderful maya,enjoyed reading it..

Its glad you are back😊

Thank you! Its good to be back:)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey man why u leave us like this we want more😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Parmeen

Hey man why u leave us like this we want more😊

Sorry sorry! I will update more tomorrow I promise!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mayakhan12

Sorry sorry! I will update more tomorrow I promise!


Is ok pulling your leg 😊
U write good stories & spoil us😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Parmeen


Is ok pulling your leg 😊
U write good stories & spoil us😊

Aw, thank you! I'm updating now 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 2-
Kanak hummed a tune as she packed up the sweets
"Hello"

Kanak turned to see Uma, smiling she walked forward
"You came"
Uma nodded "hm, I couldn't miss out on an opportunity for free food"

Kanak laughed "Hey, who said it was free"
Uma leant down "A favour for a favour"

His mint breath fanning her face
Kanak pulled back "What can I get you"
"Jalebis , whats your name"

"Kanak and yours"
"Uma"

"Well Uma, here you go" she passed him the sweets on a plate, he moved around the counter to sit beside her

"So anymore accidents since this morning"
"What do you think I am, clumsy"

Kanak didn't want to tell him how many accidents she had faced just today

"Well, yes" Uma answered smugly
"Then you'd be right " Kanak laughed

Uma watched Kanak as she skillfully made her way around the shop, the smell of sweets was both sweet and mouthwatering

Kanak sat down at the chair beside him, wiping her forehead with her arm
"Hard work" Uma asked

Kanak nodded "Very, doubt someone like you could do it"

"What do you mean, someone like me"

Kanak wiggled her eyebrows "You know what I mean"
Uma leaned back "No Kanak, I really dont"

"Well, you're quite big arent you"
Uma looked offended "What do you mean, big"

"Well, big hands, arms, body etc, need I go on, I dont think you could effectively make sweets because you're not, hm, whats the word"

Kanak tapped her chin "graceful enough"
Uma stood up, banging his head on an ornament hanging down

Kanak looked away to hide her laughter
"Miss Kanak, allow me to show you that graceful is my middle name"

Kanak looked up at him, daring expression on her face

Standing up she moved swiftly past him, her arm brushing his

"Oh isnt it easy to get someone to dance to your tune" she sang mockingly as she leaned against the side, looking at him
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hai maya.
How r u dear. Long time no see.
Loved the story.
Waiting for the next part
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Geethanatarajan

Hai maya.

How r u dear. Long time no see.
Loved the story.
Waiting for the next part

Hey Geetha, im good just been very busy, how are you?
Thank you! I will update soon!

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