Uma and the female patient, Final part updated ( 15th jan) - Page 18

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Calypso05

Hi Geetha😊,

Part 18: i love the way you describe the natureā¤ļø.

Part 19: "kanak rathi, sandhya rathi's daughter was afraid of dogs."šŸ˜†

Part 20: Gayathri's delivery, it's soo moving😭

Part 21-22: you detailed nicely KanUm's feelingā¤ļø (specifically, Uma's feelingā¤ļøā¤ļø)

"ur my sunlight who vanished my darkness"ā¤ļøā¤ļø it is too beautiful !

Part 25: Kanak's love declarationā¤ļø, Kanum are very kissy-huggyšŸ˜†

Part 26: It's romantic and sensualā­ļø, it's very complicated to write an intimate scene, you wrote well without being vulgaršŸ‘, the words are prudently chosen, thank you for writing a cosummation scene in Maniratnam's stylešŸ˜†šŸ‘šŸ¼.


Overall, it was superbā­ļø, i just love the way you describe the emotion of the charactersā¤ļø.

Thank you for your realistic ffšŸ‘šŸ¼.

Hai calypso
Thank u dear.
Thank u so much for reading the story.
I am really feeling so happy that, u enjoying the story line.
Much appreciated, giving me more support
Thank u so much for the lovely comments
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Posted: 7 years ago
Final part


Uma and kanak still in the bed, the room filled with love. A cold breeze passes through their room, uma awake up from his sleep. His eyes were searching kanak, she was still in his arms, uma turns his body and faces kanak, he kisses her in the forehead.
Kanak smiles in her sleep.
Uma admires her. He cradles her with his both arms. Again he kisses her in the forehead. He smiles.
Kanak was trying to awake up from her sleep. When she opens her eyes, she sees the neck piece of uma, it was very close to her. And find herself in uma's arms, kanak looks up. She could see uma's face. He smiles at her.Little by little, she moves upwards and reaches near to uma's face.
Uma: did u sleep well.
Kanak nods her head.
Kanak: did u.
Uma: in my 30 years of life, last night was a wonderful night in my life time.
Kanak smiles, and getting shy.
Kanak: i think, we should move.
Uma signal no.
Kanak: ur friend also, waiting right.
Suddenly, uma presses a kiss in kanak's cheek.
Kanak: enough, it is getting late.
Kanak slowly, takes the thin bedsheet, and covers her body, and gets up from the bed. She takes her clothes from the bag, and goes to the bathroom.
Uma turns and hugs a pillow.
Uma and kanak were on their way yo ladno. Uma stops the car after seeing his friend. Uma gets down from the car, and collects the herbs from him. And thanked him.
Then uma comes to the car. And drives,
Kanak looks at him.
Kanak: i cannot forget this journey.
Uma smiles.
Kanak: for u.
Again uma smiles.
Kanak: u don't feel anything.
Kanak gives angry expression. And turns her face.
Uma: kanak, listen...
He makes her turn
Uma: for me, everything related to u, is very important. Especially, kerela journey, where i realized ur presence. But we both related in childhood itself.
Kanak smiles.
After a long travel, uma and kanak reached ladnoo. They spend time with their family, finally uma and kanak comes near to the shivji idol. Thanked the lord.
Kanak: thank u shivji, for bringing uma into my life.
Uma smiles and holds her hand.
Uma: i love u kanak, i love u for ever.
Kanak : i love u uma.
Uma hugs her. Kanak hugs him back. Uma lifts her in his arms, and takes her to their room.
Uma and kanak spend their life together, they faced many things in their journey but their love never reduced at all. They love each other so much.

Here the story ends, guys. I want to thank everybody, who gave encourage, love, support to complete this story. I am really grateful to u guys. For silent reader, who read my story, and supported by giving ur likes and support.Thank u so much guys.
I want to complete my story with a tamil poem, one of my favourite.

How is my mother and your mother are related?
In what manner my father and your father are related?
By which relation you and me recognized each other?
Like how the rainwater mixed with red sand can't seperated,
Likewise due to joined love, our love heart also merged









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Posted: 7 years ago
Hats off to ur narration Geethu šŸ‘Wondrous marvelous life journey of KanUm 😳you really gave us a extraordinary treat we traveled with them in their love journey. But u finished it so soon. Waiting for a new love story of kanum very soon from ušŸ¤—Uma has won his ladylove completely šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Divyaamurali

Hats off to ur narration Geethu šŸ‘Wondrous marvelous life journey of KanUm 😳you really gave us a extraordinary treat we traveled with them in their love journey. But u finished it so soon. Waiting for a new love story of kanum very soon from ušŸ¤—Uma has won his ladylove completely šŸ˜‰

Hai divya.
Thank u so much dear
For ur love and affection.
I am glad, that u enjoyed the story.
Thanks for love and support.
Without u people, i would not have completed the story.
Thank u so much dear.
Next story, i have planned. Today i will post the outline of the story. I hope, u will like my new story.

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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow...cute n simple love story with your narration made it wonderful geethašŸ‘
I don't read stories but tsmsp n this forum amazed with different stories, this kanum story will be memorable oneā¤ļø

Thanks for taking time to entertain usšŸ¤—
Well have to start with one more story along with "Me n U"šŸ˜‰

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Bhaana

Wow...cute n simple love story with your narration made it wonderful geethašŸ‘
I don't read stories but tsmsp n this forum amazed with different stories, this kanum story will be memorable oneā¤ļø

Thanks for taking time to entertain usšŸ¤—
Well have to start with one more story along with "Me n U"šŸ˜‰

Hai bhaana.
Thank u so much dear.
I am feeling grateful, that u like my stories,
Thanks for ur love and support towards me. And encouragement u gave me, i am really thankful to u.
Thank u so much dear
I have posted my new story's outline. I hope, u will like this story.
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Posted: 7 years ago
I loved it. ā¤ļø I absolutely loved it Thank u for the wonderful story Geetha šŸ‘
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Im_MV

I loved it. ā¤ļø I absolutely loved it Thank u for the wonderful story Geetha šŸ‘

Hai monisha
Thank u dear
I am glad, that u enjoyed the story.
Thank u so much for ur love and support dear.
Once again thank u so much dear.
I have posted my new story's outline, pls let me know ur opinion.
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Posted: 7 years ago
So good from start to end geetha!!
I have already said how much I liked the story!!!!
Last part was awesome too!
Thanks again for the treat! 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: _Asfii_

So good from start to end geetha!!
I have already said how much I liked the story!!!!
Last part was awesome too!
Thanks again for the treat! 😃

Hai asfi
Thank u dear.
I am really happy to hear that.
Thank u for love and support.

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