Akdha FF - A spontaneous desire Chapter 20 TZR updated pg 159 June 24

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Sweetshruthi

@Sweetshruthi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Oh my Gosh!😲

Jodha is in critical condition... ammijaan is in ICU

jalal unkowingly donated blood to his own babies

I am so much touched and moved

I hope babies and jodha will be fine soon

There are lots of suspense in first chappy .. can't wait more

plz update next part soon .

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Meenakshi

@Meenakshi731

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

hai, i just loved the story👏. It's awesome 😊. please update soon ... eagerly waiting for the update.if u can please pm me😳

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@Zayn_1Dholic

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Interesting and amazingly emotional chappy...Jo ka accident?nahiiinnn...aww..the flashbks were so cute and the jalal-baby parts were awesme...update sn..waiting..thankz fr the pm

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lovejodhaakbar

@lovejodhaakbar

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Sooo interesting..wow jodha and jalal behave so rude toward each other publicly, wonder what the cause of it??? And the teaser?? Pregnant wife??? Jodha??? 3 years of marriage?? Oh my..iam so exciting.. Please2 update soon...thank u 🥱

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lovejodhaakbar

@lovejodhaakbar

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Too excting i didnt see ur update...oh my..please let jodha and the babies ok..(cant wait to read their flashback journey)

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jodhavani94

@jodhavani94

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

hai awesome dear super chappy ya. what happened to Jo . pls make her fine soon
. hope nothing will happen to her. pls tell me that she will be fine pls pls pls pls. and update soon and pm me pls pls pls pls pls pls 😊

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.GreekPrincess.

@.GreekPrincess.

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

awesome chappy
jodha is in critical condition😭😭😭hope she willl be fine😭n ammijaan is ICU..
i liked jalal n babies bonding so cute..he donated blood his own baby😳
when will he know about his babies n jodha😭plz dont let jodha die😭😭
update soon plz
and pm me

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crystalwings

@crystalwings

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Chapter 2 teaser:

Jalal rushes to the Neonatal Intensive Care Unit (NICU) to see his babies as their father, he is not new to them, just a few hours ago he had entered the same unit to donate blood - not knowing they were his own blood -- tears flow down his cheeks as he bends down looks into the incubator and whispers "hello my precious little Hassan and Hussein - I am your abbu, I am so happy to finally meet you both - I loved you before you were born and love you even more now" -- it is at this moment of bonding, for the first time, Jalal begins to feel like a father, a new found feeling engulfs him, he feels determines to be strong to take care of his family, his wife and babies - they need me, He reaches into the incubator to touch them...