part 19 - soji are now talking with each other freely and their relation is geting better.. but ya the canada thing scared the hell out of me.. wen u had written it in previous 2 updates i thought it is just for showing soham's work in khet.. but wen u told that the canada track is actually coming.. i was scaredπ.. cant see soji far from each other.
Hahahah yeah, i tried to hint at it before, but don't worry, nothing major will happen, it's just to put a little spice in my story. I'm not a crazy cv's, there won't be much drama !
could compleely feel rajji's pain when she heard soham telling infront of everyone that he will have to go canada n rajji went downstairs.. and wen rajji said " canada is so far ".. awww my heart went out for her.. could feel her fearπ..I was sad for her too, it's not easy to let someone you love go so far away from you. ππ
but next moment she held her up and showed that she is happy and encouraged soham .. kudos to u for completely sticking to the way rajji's character has been shown and exploring it even more and in a better wayπ.. and hurray finally soham could feel rajji's pain wihtout anyone telling himπ.. he could sense it that rajji is not happy with canda going but still trying to show that she is happy..and angad simran scenes are also perfect according to their characteristicsππΌ..
thank you thank you !
i tried to really make her as strong as she was in the show. And sohum is getting more and more sensitive when it comes to rajji. She's not just the bahu of the house anymore, she really is his wife and he cares for her π³π³
part 20- i have to admit it that this part is my most favourite one from all the parts till now..ok right from the starting.. wen rajji woke up in soham's arms..there was no awkardness between both and rajji joking with soham was such a pleasure to read.. this part explains that soham n rajji are now actually behaving like husband and wife with each other.. the emotions, the depth in their relation has come out brilliantly the way u wrote.. soham's all attention on rajji throughtout the day bcoz his heart already started to miss her.. he wants to talk with her and make her calm.. and at last rajji couldnt control her tears n hugged soham.. i would say this hug was pending from many updates.. finally u brought the hug now ..and in this update the timing and importance of soji hug is most perfect.. it was like now they had to hugπ.. and the last para of the update is most precious and u have written it amazingly.. so many emotions in that one para..rajji sleeping by keeping soham's hand near her heart and soham realises that wat hapened that night can never be a mistake.. it cant get better than this..
Woohoo ! glad you like this part ! I wanted to make this subtle and not over the top, i hope i've succeeded !
thank you so much for the compliments !π³π³ i remember last year i had deleted the hug but when i updated it on here i decided to put it back in. It's time to make them move forward, they can't stay "bigi bili" for too long now !
that last part with sohum and rajji sleeping, i added this right now (it was not in last year) and i'm glad i did ! it truly shows the soji we fell in love with. I miss them !
part 21 - thanx for the tie sceneπ.. loved it. and i loved the way soham said. "u are making it hard for me to go"ππ..u know i was readin this part with a frightened heart bcoz of canada track.. and wen soham was leaving and kisses rajji on forehead and that entire scene.. i was feeling like some emotional song is playing in backgroundπ€£π€£..
Hahahaha π€£i wish i could add background song to my FF !! it would be so good ! π
part 22 - when u told abt canada track i had imagined abt some other angle in canada that may take up soham's attentionπ..
nope, no bani in this FF !π
and it gave me more tensionπ.. but thankfully u didnt took that angle in ur story.. thanx a lotπππ..
you're welcome, even i don't want that to happen !
ok ..but now ye priya tapak padi soham ke piche.. the way u have written it i could imagine her being a chipku kind of person who is half obssessed and half madπ..
that's exactly her !
abhi dekna hoga soham apne aap ko kaise bachata he is bala seπ ..pehle bhi kuch kam tha kya jo abi ye bhi soham ke piche .. poor rajji ..
poor rajji yes but also her husband is too hot so obviously other ladies will swoon over him !
but watever it may i am sure it will lead to soham realising his love for rajji.. ππ
waiting for next updates dear..
Nice updates...
story is getting more interesting..., waiting for others parts
Originally posted by: pinki123
Oh wow yaar
It was amazingIt is soo interestingPleasr coutinue soonI really cant wait for next partAnd i dont like this priyaPoor sohambut it is interestingPlease . coutinue soon
all parts are so nice πππ...bcz its only about soji and their love especially soham discovering his feelings for rajjiπππ ...now there is no awkwardness or hesitation between them ..and finally soham realised that whatever had happened was not mistake.πππ..they are talking freely and normally ...at first i thought soham will reject the proposal because of his 30 day promise...but .hope ithis canadian twist will bring positive twist πππ...this pshyco priya will do the same work what buaji had done in the show πππ...its very difficult to see our soji far from each other ...but dooriyaan bhi hain zaruri ...while reading that part of businessmen proposal i think please yaar send him to some other country not canada ..at least we will feel safe ...but after forehead kissing scene i m feeling safe ..πππ...
short but nice update..πππ...omg !!!priya is in love with soham
and soji cant contact with eachother...i hope this situation will not create misunderstanding .. soham please call rajji ..she will not get disturbed ..infact she will jump with happinessπππ
the story is getting more n more interesting ...πππ,,waiting for next update
so romantic..finally soham reached india ...i loved his gift ...and soji talking to eachother ..looking at eachother..their hug β€οΈ...rajji feeding soham ..i could imagine all the scenes infront of my eyes ...πππ
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