~First Love With A Bad Guy~SwaRon SS - Page 17

dear loved it superb

Awesome confession .. the way sharon confessed was really beautifully written.. swaron making each other beast 😆 .. 

AWosm

Edited by nature2 - 11 years ago

it was a beautiful update..

When it comes to SwaRon ss/ff I am bit greedy n yeh to tera ss hai sooo I am more greedy😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆


I loved the last part

cute and sweet si love story 👏👏👏👏👏 loved it ...

awesome awesome awesome end!!!🤗
loved the way Sharon confessed 😳
overall it was beautifully written an amazing ss
👏
but y did u end it so soon😭 I wish u would have extended a bit little u are a superb writer
I would love to read wen u update ur new works
thanx for d pm 🤗

NEW FAIRYTALE---SIREN AND THE BEAST

Its OOosum and lovely update..The emotional ride in the form of words was amazing...The way u expressed each and all emotions of SwaRon was perfect..i loved it..

So moving to update...Sharon was scared of loosing him..And here swayam want to leave her...And finally sharon confessed her love for swayam...Great..

Then whole confession by sharon was beautifully written...Loved the way u described SwaRon confession part...And last SwaRon was making each other beast...LOL...But yes now she was also beast..

So,its short SS but i really loved it...And i really enjoyed a perfect read...So,keep writing more...keep updating u'r other work soon...Becoz i am waiting for DHT's next update..

Thanx for PM..

Prateek

I've been wanting to read this from the day you posted the Prologue but i didn't have the time to. Today i finally read it. And i'm in love with this SS. It was just sooo awesome. Perfect mix of Cuteness, romance, rage, jealousy and everything. I'm gonna go read it again from the first chapter. I really hope you write more in this one. I'm literally having goosebumps reading the scenes. Specially the one where they fight. And when he turns around and leaves, i'm like almost screaming! "Sharon go!!! What are you waiting there for!! Go and console him, kiss him!!!!!!" I know i'm mad but chalta hai, hai na?😊 Edited by damonelena - 11 years ago

loved d update.. nicely penned down