FF: Ek Rasta, Alag RahiPt.78Pg. 90 03/01

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Ek Raasta, Alag Rahi 
Radhika, a bubbly punjabi girl was saved by Birju and brought to Purohit House. Having a memory loss, she was asked to stay and as time lapsed she was treated like their own daughter. Dev, a charming and handsome boy, returned to India after 5 years. He is the youngest son of Purohit Family. He loves his family, a very kind person but rude in times. Dev and Radhika will have a heated conversation which leads to hatred in their hearts. Eventually Dev will fell in love with Radhika, however Radhika will get an alliance of Rohan, Dev's cousin to which Radhika will accept for a purpose. 
Will Dev tell Radhika his feelings? What could be the purpose of Radhika's acceptance?Will Radhika be able to see the love of Dev?

Chapters

chapter 1:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=2
chapter 2: https://hwww.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2902323&TPN=2
chapter 3: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=3
chapter 4: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=4
chapter 5: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=5
chapter6: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=5
chapter 7: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=6
chapter 8: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=7
chapter 9: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=8
chapter 10: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=10
chapter 11: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=11
chapter 12: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=12
chapter 13: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=13
chapter 14: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=14
chapter 15: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=15
chapter 16: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=16
chapter 17: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=16
chapter 18: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=18
chapter 19: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=19
chapter 20: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=20
chapter 21: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=20
chapter 22: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=22
chapter 23: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=23
chapter 24: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=24
chapter 25: https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2902323&TPN=25
chapter 26: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=26
chapter 27: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=27
chapter 28: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=28
chapter 29:  https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=29
chapter 30:  https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=30
chapter 31:  https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=31
chapter 32:  https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=32
chapter 33;  https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=33
chapter 34: https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2902323&TPN=34
chapter 35: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=34
chapter 36: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=35
chapter 37: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=36
chapter 38: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=36
chapter 39: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=38
chapter 40: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=39
chapter 41: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=41
chapter 42: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=41
chapter 43: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=42
chapter 44: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=43
chapter 45: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=44
chapter 46: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=45
chapter 47: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=46
chapter 48: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=46
chapter 49: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=47
chapter 50: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=47
chapter 51: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=49
chapter 52: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=49
chapter 53: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=50
chapter 54: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=52
chapter 55: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=52
chapter 56: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=53
chapter 57: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=54
chapter 58: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=55
chapter 59: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=56
chapter 60: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=58
chapter 61: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=59
chapter 62: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=61
chapter 63: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=62
chapter 64: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2902323?pn=63

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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice waiting for ur ff thank u
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really interesting.waiting for the FF
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Nice FF.Waiting for it to begin.
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Sound interesting! Please do carry on!!! 😃
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Interesting plot ,carry on...
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thanks guys for your support..
ill write the ff in hindi but eng trans in parenthesis because im not very much good in english and deep hindi but only with punjabi im comfortable that's why radhika is a punjabi girl...
and i don't know much about hinduism so i didn't choose Lord krishna and hindu religion...coz i thought maybe in future i may hurt someone's belief😊...i hope u'll enjoy my first part...

Part1

A boy lifting a bag full of vegetables, humming and walking nearby a beautiful ghat. He was enjoying every part of the ghat, the scenery, the sunset, the river, everything was just mesmerizing. Suddenly he saw a girl drenched with water, lying on the shore of the river. The moment he saw her, he felt terrified and approached to check her. He found her unconscious with a deep wound in the head, blood dripping from it. Without wasting time, he took her to the hospital.

At the hospital…

"Kya hua inhe Doctor saab?"(what happened to her, Doctor)

"Inke saar mein bahut gehri chot ke karan inhe hosh nahi aa rha…"(due to her deep wound she hasn't gain conscious…)

"yeh theek toh ho jayenge nah?"(will she be alright?)

"theek toh yeh ho jayenge lekin hosh aane ke baad hi pata chalega ki koi andruni chot toh nahi aayi.."(she will be alright but after she gain conscious we will tell if there's any brain damage or not..)

"Kanha, inki raksha karna, kuch mat hone dena inhe" he said in a silent prayer(Kanha, please take care of her. Don't let anything happen to her)

Suddenly his phone rang…

"hello"

"Aree! Birju kaha hai tu? Tera kab se intezaar kar rahe hai!!"(Birju where are you?we are waiting for you)

"Woh, Daima main hospital mein hu aur…"(Daima, I'm in a hospital and…)

"Kya? Kya hua tujhe?"(What?what happened to you?)

"mujhe kuch nahi hua hai, woh ek ladki mujhe ghat mein mili thi bahut hi buri haalat mein thi isliye main unhe hospital le aaya"(nothing happened to me. I've brought a girl in the hospital whom I've met in a bad state at the ghat.)

"Kya? Ab Kaisi hai woh?"(What? How is she now?)

"Doctor Saab, toh keh rahe hai ki woh abhi khatre se bahar hai par hosh aane ke baad pata chalega ki koi andruni chot toh nahi aayi."(Doctor said she's out of danger but they'll tell completely after she has gain conscious if there's any brain damage or not)

"Kanha ka shukar hai ki woh bach gayi..dhanyawaad kanha"(Thank God, she's saved…Thanks Kanha)

Suddenly the Doctor came..

"Suniya, yeh kuch dawayi hai aap yaha pharmacy se le aayie aur uske baad aap unse mil skte hai unhe hosh aa gya hai" Doctor said while giving the prescription.(Excuse me, please buy some medicines from a nearby pharmacy and after that you can meet with her coz she has gain conscious)

"jee acha, dhanyawaad, Doctor saab" Birju said (Okay, thanks Doctor)

"Daima unhe hosh aa gya hai main unse milne jaata hu, bye!!"(Daima, she have gain conscious, ill just go and meet her)

"Theek hai birju, main bhi wha aati hu use dekhne ke liye.."(Okay Birju, ill also cum to meet her)

****

She opened her eyes. She was still feeling weak and looked around the surroundings. It wasn't hard for to guess that she was in a hospital. She knew it beforehand that she won't die easily, that someone would save her, maybe for good reason she thought. Suddenly the nurse spoke..

"Kaisa mehsoos kar rhi hai aap aab?" she looked at the nurse and found her with a concerned face and a sweet smile on the lips.(How are you feeling now?)

"abhi acha mehsoos kar rhi hu.."she replied with the same smile.(Now im feeling well)

"Bhagwan ki kripa se aap bach gyi, warna jab aap aayi thi nah tab toh umeed hi nahi thi aapke bachne ki"(because of god you got saved, we didn't hope that you would survive)

Kash main maar jandi, hun zindagi wich jeen layi ki rakhaya yah…pata nahi rabba hun tuhade kehde khel wich main khelna yah..she said in her mind.(I wish I would have died, there is nothing left for me to live here…I don't know what is God's new game for me)

She wondered who was the great person, who had saved her life and brought her here.

"Aap jaante hai ki mujhe yahan kaun lekar aaya hai."she asked the nurse(Do you know who brought me here?)

"main lekar aaya hu aapko…"a voice came from the door and she looked at the door(I've brought you here)

"aab aap kaise hai?"Birju asked (How are you now?)

"jee, aab achi hu, lekin main  aapke bhut shukar ghuzar hu ki aapne meri jaan bachayi aur aapse maafi bhi maangna chahti hu kyunki meri wajah se aapko kitni takleef hui.."she said with a folded hand(Now im feeling well but I wanted to thank you for saving my life and apologize because of me you had a hard time. )

"arre, yeh aap kya kar rhi hai, meri jagah koi aur bhi hota toh yahi karta" Birju said while holding her folded hands(what are you doing, if someone else was in my place, he would have done the same)

She felt nice and touched seeing Birju being concern for her then tears came rolling down her cheeks.Birju rubbed the tears from her cheeks and said "Rone se kuch nahi hoga behen, kanha ka shukar manao ki aapko nai zindagi mil gyi"(nothing will happen if you cry, sister,just thank God that he gave you a life.)

"Aap sahi keh rhe hai, mujhe rona nahi chahiye, dobara zindagi milna bade naseeb walon ko milti hai."(you are right, I don't need to cry, only lucky people get a second life)

"yeh hui nah baat, aab thoda sa muskura doon, warna tumhare pyare se chehre yeh udasi achi nahi lagti"(that's the spirit, now smile because sadness doesn't look nice in your sweet face)

She smiled for the sake of his savior of life then she thought to know him more and ask where he have found him

"waise aapka naam kya hai aur main aapko kaha mili?"(what is your name and where did you found me?)

"mera naam birju hai, main yahi ka rehne waala hu, aap mujhe ghat mein bahut hi buri halat mein mili thi kya hua tha aapko?" Birju said (my name is Birju, I live here. I've found you at the ghat in bad state)

"woh main…."suddenly she stopped when she saw an old lady entered the room with the smily face and basket of fruits. Birju looked at the same direction and smiled seeing the old lady.

"aap aagayi daima, badi jaldi aagayi aap toh.."(You came so fast, Daima)

"Haan Birju main aa gyi, yahi hai nah woh ladki jiske bare mein tum bata rhe the? Daima said pointing at the girl.(Yah I've came, she's the girl you're talking about?)

Daima approached the girl and sat beside her

"Kaisi ho tum ab beta, kaisa mehsoos kar rahi ho?" Daima asked(How are you?How are you feeling now?)

"ab main acha mehsoos kar rhi hu par aap?"she asked with a confused look(I'm feeling alright now but who are you?)

"main birju ki daima hu, tum bhi mujhe daima keh sakti ho"(im birju's grandma, you can also call me daima)

Seeing the care of Daima and realizing that she came all the way from her house just to meet her, she felt blessed by meeting such people, maybe it's God's new plan. She felt happy at first but got sad afterwards thinking that if these people will know her true identity they would never talk to her just like what happened to her before..

"Kya soch rahi ho beta?" she jerked by the voice of Daima.(what are you thinking?)

"jee, kuch nahi bas yahi ki aap log kitne aache hai, aapne mere liye aapne kimati waqt mein se thoda sa waqt nikala, mere bare mein socha.."she said with teary eyes.(nothing I was just thinking that how great people you are that you gave me ur precious time.)

"aisa nahi hai beta, tum hume aapna hi maano, waise kya naam hai tumhara aur kaha se aayi ho tum?"(its not like that beta, you consider us ur own, by the way what's ur naam and where did you come from?)

She looked at Daima realizing the question Daima asked kya naam hai tumhara aur kaha se aayi ho tum, how is she suppose to answer the question? How will she tell them that she is a….?will they behave the same like what she had experienced before?

"Nai main ena nu sach nai das sakdi…nai das skdi ki main kaun yah…jo maina pehla hoya main dubara nai hon dena..par main hun ki kara? babaji kuch karo" she thought in her mind. (No, I won't tell them the truth. I won't tell them my identity. I won't let repeat the history. But what will I do now? God please do something.)

sorry for mistakes..😊...hope u'll like it😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the first part.Sounds interesting. Pls continue.