||ABHIYA FF||- *DEAD HEART*completed Pg.162 - Page 122

Originally posted by: Abhiya_Visu

superb fantastic mind blowing lovely update
could not have had a better ending loved it
 going to miss this FF but i will read it again n again
i will be missing your updates yaar
 you are a fantastic writer i loved this ff and i love your writing
  thanks yaar for a wonderful ff
hopefully you soon  will come with a another amazing idea for ff on abhiya

Originally posted by: ..tora.tangled.

loved the ending aditi!!👏brilliant way to end this story...it was an absolute pleasure to read...it was different in its concept in  a way..and the way u presented the whole story was fabulous...hope to see a new story from ur side soon..🤗

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan

Beautiful ending dear... the soul tying scene and sacrifice was wonderful... the idea was very unique and glad you came up with this... wonderful job and will be hoping you write more in future 😳

Thnx tanzie...😃 i m so glad that u liked it... it's a pleasure that u liked those scenes..i'll definitely come again asap with a new idea...

Originally posted by: love-piya-abhay

just superb ending dear ,i like all the part and love the last part ...just perfect end ,thanks for pm ,i hope you will come out with another amazing ff on abhiya one day 

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Oh oh..I'm feeling so sad you ended it so soon😭

But it was a fab update. What really stood out for me was when Pia explained to Kiah why she would give her life for Abhay. Aditi, I want to see more of your works. Please- it's a request from my heart.

Originally posted by: Rmuk

Aditi just beautiful ending, u justiced to this whole story and plot, just loved this ff a lot. U are a fab writer and I love ur simplicity in all this updates. I too believe in writing simple words in everything, complexity se I go mad lol. Just loved all ur lines abd every logic specially good deatroyes the evil. I am gonna miss this ff a lot. Plz do write more ff, it's a pleasure to read works of amazing writer like u.

Originally posted by: ilove99

😭you made me literally cry at the last para😭

Amazing story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i loved each n every update and every twist and turn!!!!!!!!!!🤗

u know how much i loved it so if u ever plan for its sequel do tell me😃🤣

Originally posted by: sdoll

Meera, itna emo mat ho yaar...😆 but really i m not finding any word 2 describe my happiness after reading that last para touched ur heart...thnx dear...🤗 n i'll definitely tell u when i'll start another story..😉