||ABHIYA FF||- *DEAD HEART*completed Pg.162 - Page 121

Oh oh..I'm feeling so sad you ended it so soon😭

Aditi just beautiful ending, u justiced to this whole story and plot, just loved this ff a lot. U are a fab writer and I love ur simplicity in all this updates. I too believe in writing simple words in everything, complexity se I go mad lol. Just loved all ur lines abd every logic specially good deatroyes the evil. I am gonna miss this ff a lot. Plz do write more ff, it's a pleasure to read works of amazing writer like u.

😭you made me literally cry at the last para😭

beautiful Aditi but gonna miss this FF 

awesome ending  Edited by abhiya_pkyek - 11 years ago

Originally posted by: luckdiya

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1ST of all a big hug 4 u aditi :) its outstanding ...i luvd ur ff sooo much bt dis is d lst updt :( i enjoyed throughout ur updts... "he tries 2 avoid death at any cost / he craves 4 lyf " i ws feelin d sm pain...ah!! piya's condition at tym ws worst dan abhay ..she ws in a trance ...It touched my hrt & d title of d stry ws related 2 abhayendra bcoz he is d 1 who hd DEAD HRT... Hp u vil cm bck wid new dhmakedaar stry😃
luv u tk care... 4 me u r a fantastic writer keep it up

A big hug  2 u 2 dear..🤗 n i m so glad that u liked my FF.. n the way u wrote ur feelings abt my FF , i m so touched by it..thnx 4 being such a lovely reader...😳 n thnx 4 ur praise dear...☺️

Originally posted by: mandy1024

This FF was an absolute delight to read Aditi 😃 n do u know y? For the sheer simplicity  n casual outlook it had. What I mean to say here is that u depicted every character realistically here with shades of grey 👏 Hats off to u for that 👏 Pia n Abhay were no quintessential saints here n tats the best part. Pia was like any teenage girl her age - fun loving, carefree, arrogant n a bimbo as well(I guess the bimbo bit was realistic bcoz she was a diva 😆). She was selfish to attain what she wanted at all costs n probably that was the reason she never stopped craving for Abhay though he belonged to someone else clearly at that time. Abhay a lover pining away for his dead lover did not hesitate before he made an innocent girl a pawn in his deadly game  There were moments when even a monstrous Abhayendra seemed human 😭 Hats off to u for coming up with a unique storyline 👏 I am surely gonna miss this FF for a sure but u have done justice to the story 👏 The finale was superb 👏 Pia finally got some sense into her bimbo brain 😆 n could realise the truth on her own 😛 Kiah saved Abhay with Pia's help 😊 Finally she realised that Abhay means more to her than everything else 😆 Tanisha was the only selfless soul in this whole story n it was a fitting end when her goodness destroyed the evil incarnate 😃 Perfect ending! I am glad that it was her n not Abhiya who killed Abhayendra 👏 Loved the last para too 😳 BTW do come up with a new story. Will eagerly look forward to it 🤗

Oh! Mandy...u've written it so beautifully❤️... i always knew that u r an amazing writer...the way you made the summary of my FF, it is just superb👍🏼.. thank u so much dear... n i m on cloud 9 after reading all of ur comments, i never thought that my this little attempt to share my idea will be loved so much by u all...thank u so much...🤗

Originally posted by: Abhiya_Gunner

Amazing Update!! 😳
Am gonna miss this FF😭

Thnx a lot ...😊

Originally posted by: --peehu--

that was amazing! Would surely miss reading ur updates

Thnx peehu..😊

Originally posted by: Alicia2001

wow great story plz update soon
it's an amazing story to read when u update the story i'm really going to miss reading this story of your so are u going to do an other ff i do pm me when u write a new story
thanks for the pm

Thank u so much 4 giving ur precious time on my FF. I m glad that u liked it.😊

Originally posted by: ..dishu..

really beautiful ending dear. will miss this FF for sure.

Thnx... i m glad that u liked the ending...😊

Originally posted by: lost_in_love

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wow...wat a lovely ending..!!!! 

so abhayendra failed infront of true love. loved the way pia realised placing her hands n his heart,that he isn't abhay!! her pain,sadness,abhay's agony not wanting to part were beautifully written dear...👏.  n then pia's hesitation...for me this was the best part, ⭐️ coz every person more or less loves himself or herself the most,that's the hard reality of lyf,pia felt the same,but..but wat made it different was their love..her love for abhay that gav her strength to sacrifice her own life..!!! n that's wat we call true love!😳 and you wrote it sooo beautifully dear...i so so loved it! ❤️

then again pia saved abhay by her sheer pure love...n that was soo amazing..!! 👏abhay forgiving her n both of them forgiving n loving eachother ..their engagement everything...was so lovely...! 

and last but not the least, the answer pia gave was again beautiful ...😳

P.S. yaar aditi..this ff of ur's was one of my fav8! i always eagerly waited for it...n now i will miss this ff badly!! 😔

plzz do start another ff,if u get time..dear..plzz...

do take care dear..n thanks for this lovely ending...🤗

Thnx a lot indu...🤗 Ah..the way u wrote ur comment i m just overwhelmed with joy😭... u've mentioned everything which i wanted to portray😃...i was nervous at 1st that how i'll describe all these emotions in my ff  coz i m very bad at that..but now i m feeling that i m successful on describing emotions though still i m very bad at that...😆 n hope i'll get a new idea soon , so i will be able to torture u all again with my story😆

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-

i jst love love love the update❤️ Superb ending...!!

Thank u so much ...😃