SV FF: Mujhe Dil Se Haq Hai 2 part 12 7/20/10 - Page 4

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Posted: 15 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: bmtdluver

short and sweet update radika!! (but don't take it the wrong way, im not complaining). It was really cute how chinu is trying to bring them together.

lol, btw, great job pushing gina di into the fire by saying she'll update next😆😆😆😉😉
well at least someone got my point *coughGinacough*

thanks sweetu!!! love you :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

great update, keep it up girls!

hiiiiii....i haven't seen you in a very long time, thank you so much for commenting!!!! :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
Awwww it was soooooo sweet jaanu !!! :D
It was really cute & sweet. But why so short yaar? Oh well its the quality that counts not quantity i suppose. But your quality is tooo good !!

LOVED IT :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
wowwwwwww wonderful FF continue sooooooooon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35
why so shorrt yaar..but it was soo cute..update soon gina :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: svforever

thanks sweetu!!! love you :)

lol.....
@gina- take the hint please!(well, if you have time)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hello everyone ! Heres part 12 of Mujhe dil se haq hai. Hope you like it, i wrote it hurriedly, so sorry for mistakes and so 😳


A week had passed of vidya and sagars wedding. It was a week filled with joy and lots of festivals and wedding pujas that both vidya and sagars parents did not notice how the bride and groom were feeling since they were caught up in celebrations. This particular day the bride and groom were in the centre of the focus whilst everyone would come and give them presents and blessings. Sagar would give a smile now and then whilst Vidya would just be quiet and look down. Chinu knew why Vidya was sad so he tried to hide it by saying:

-Dekhiye bhabhi bahut Sharma rahi hain, he said and laughed a bit. Everyone else smiled.

-Vidya toh bachpan se aisi hi hain, vidyas mom answered.

Sagar looked at vidya who was sitting next to him. He got close to her to whisper in her ear. Vidya felt a closeness so she turned her head and just then sagar's mouth slowly touched vidyas cheek. Everyone else thought Sagar was about to kiss vidya on her cheek.

-Ohoyyy bhaiyya please yahan chote bacche bhi hain, thoda toh sharm karo , chinu joked.

-Nahi main woh. . Sagar tried to say but got interrupted when Vidya suddenly stood up and left the livingroom and pooja which they were doing.

-Dekhiye bhabhi phirse Sharma rahi hain, chinu said

Everyone else just smiled. Sagar then also left and ran after Vidya who was in their room.

-Dekho Vidya main toh sirf'

-Mujhe please akela chord do

-Leken main toh'

-Sagar PLEASE! Leave me alone!

Sagar left the room and went downstairs. He told everyone that Vidya was not feeling very good earlier today and had a fever now. People were a bit worried and some thought maybe vidya was too shy to come back down so they did not ask more.

After an hour, when everyone left, Sagar went back to their room. He saw that Vidya was still on the exact spot as before. Vidya looked up when he came in. He went to the bed where vidya was sitting. Vidya got a bit scared so she stood up. Sagar knew talking to her at this moment was impossible so he went to his desk and wrote a note saying:

Vidya, I was trying to whisper in your ear to tell you to smile once a while since people are worried about you. But you moved and then' Well you know. Still I am sorry for the inconveniency.

He put the note on the bed and then left the room. Vidya read it and felt stupid. She needed to apologize to him. She waited for a long time but he did not return. She decided she would go and look for him. She went down in her saree that she was wearing earlier in the ceremony: .

She saw everyone was sitting in the livingroom but did not see sagar.

-Arre Vidya beti, aab tum kaisi ho? Sagars mom asked

-Main theek hoon. Woh kahan hain?

-Woh? Tumhari matlab hain sagar?

-Jee ..

-Arre beti woh bahar garden mein hain.

She hurriedly left to the garden and found sagar staring at the stars. Vidya stood in front of him. Sagar looked up and was a bit surprised.

-Kya hua? He asked

-Umm Im sorry, she said and looked down.

He smiled.

-Its okay.

Suddenly it started to rain heavily. It followed by a quick sound of thunder. Vidya panicked and hold grip of Sagar who was standing next to her. She hugged him tightly. Sagar slowly and gently hugged her back. The weird feeling in his stomach returned.


Feel free to comment 😛 Next up is Radikas turn to update.

// Gina
Edited by theflyingdonkey - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
omg why did u had to end there...eee u r tempting me now,cause we all know what happend in the rain heheh 😆 Radz u have to continueeeee soonn pleaseeeee..omg i can so picture Divz wearn that 😍 grt update as usual GIna
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
great update AHAAAAAAAAAA SV in rain radhika continue soon cant wait to read further
Edited by strawberryshake - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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great update gina, vidya prob felt like an idiot😆. Hmm, interesting spot to leave on at. Can't wait to see what radika does!

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