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Posted: 11 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: tinaswea

Sorry for making ew all teary! I did not mean to!

Thankew sooo much!
It means a lot!
Yeah! I'll definitely wtite more!
Thanks once again
Lots of love
Tina <3


no need to say sorry babes
it just ki tumne itna emotional part likhe ki mein apne aap ko control nahi payi😳
and u again made me proud
Keep writing
Love u sweetheart
Muahhh
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
UR BRILLIANT 👏
Pehle toh aaj ke epi ne rula diya and now ur OS...i dont have words tina ..u described panchi's pain so well...it has always been difficult for a women to accept that she cannot have a baby ...i cried a lot...shayad isiliye tumne pehle hi warning de di na...

To write such brilliant OS , any other person would take 3-4 months ...but dear ur fab writer ...kitne din main likha ye OS ⭐️👏

Thank u and god bless u..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: sneha02

Tina... u are write amazingly well...

N your takes are way too novel...

An extremely emotional os this is...
Where situations seem to get the better of people...
One different name btw would have helped.. m sorry but m mad...

Love ya girl for these brave attempts...
N your fascination with death goes on...

Great going cutie...
Lots of love

Thankew soo much di!
It means a lot!

I am sorry! I'll definitely keep it in mind! I'll definitely use a different name in such OS!

Love ew 2!
Uh guys must be hating me! I am sure! Sorry!

Thanx once again!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Sarah_Angel9

Oh No yeh kya hogaya!! 😲 u r an amazing writer Tina bt can't say i loved the os:/ hope u understand sis..i just can't imagine rv with ruku baby or any other haddi..& the thought of making love nd marriage with ruku just grossed me out..dara diya tune mujhe yaar!:p and panchi died and her sacrifices:( my angel:(i cried so much.. aab ek happy wala OS likhna with no haddi, plss

Thankew sooo much di!
I completely understand! I couldn't fulfil ur expectations! Sorry 🥱
Sorry for making ew cry as well!
Yeah! AB EK HAPPY WALA OS LIKHUNGI!
sorry once again 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: anjali1805

Hey Tina.. There is no second thoughts about you being a great writer. This os was also very good. But i just cant imagine rv n panchi apart and the name rukmini kind of annoys me.. I know ki its just a name but still.
Panchi made a big sacrifece n her death brought tears in my eyes..
You really seem to b fascinated by the idea of separation... Only one thing i felt that rv was not depicted the way he actually is bcoz i feel that he wud never let panchi go away from him. Sorry i dont mean to hurt or offend you...
But keeping my rahi love love aside this os was fab.. I love the way you writ..
And pls do write a happy ending wala os for rahi..
I will be waiting..

Thankew s much didi!
Sry for using that name!
It's perfectly fine! I understand!
Thanx once again
It means a lot!
I'll definitely write an OS with a happy ending!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: sweetdesire


no need to say sorry babes
it just ki tumne itna emotional part likhe ki mein apne aap ko control nahi payi😳
and u again made me proud
Keep writing
Love u sweetheart
Muahhh

Aww... that's really sweet of ew di!
Thankew sooo much!
That's really sweet of ew!
It means a lot!!
Yes, I'll keep writing!
Love ew 2
Tina 😳😛😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: s2singh

UR BRILLIANT 👏

Pehle toh aaj ke epi ne rula diya and now ur OS...i dont have words tina ..u described panchi's pain so well...it has always been difficult for a women to accept that she cannot have a baby ...i cried a lot...shayad isiliye tumne pehle hi warning de di na...

To write such brilliant OS , any other person would take 3-4 months ...but dear ur fab writer ...kitne din main likha ye OS ⭐️👏

Thank u and god bless u..

Thankew soo damn much di!
I am so happy that uh liked it!
Sorry for making ew cry! Hehe uh are ri8 isiliye mention kiya tha! 😛
I wrote this OS in 7 nights! Kyuki I m busy during the days!
Thanx once again! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: tinaswea

<font color="#3333cc" size="5">Thankew sooo much di!</font>

<font color="#3333cc" size="5">I completely understand! I couldn't fulfil ur expectations! Sorry🥱</font>
<font color="#3333cc" size="5">Sorry for making ew cry as well!</font>
<font color="#3333cc" size="5">Yeah! AB EK HAPPY WALA OS LIKHUNGI!</font>
<font color="#3333cc" size="5">sorry once again😊</font>

oyee pls dont say like dis that u cudnt fulfill my expectations! I love u nd love ur writing! It's Just that i really hate the haddis who come between my RaHi..nd i've alergy with that name too..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: Sarah_Angel9

oyee pls dont say like dis that u cudnt fulfill my expectations! I love u nd love ur writing! It's Just that i really hate the haddis who come between my RaHi..nd i've alergy with that name too..

Ookay! SoRry !
Love ew more! 😊😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
hey Tina!
It was different!
Panchi was sad and he tried to make her happy but she regretted it every min if her life!
I kind of dint like RV,he fell for Ruku?i was disgusted on RV,Panchi left home and he made love with Ruku?
but I was glad when he heard Panchi died it made a difference to him he regretted that too,but the meaning of ur story was fab,she sacrificed for him for his happiness and he got married to Ruku!
it was new and different!
I like ur sad endings u know,every perfect story isn't always happy!
keep writing more tina😳

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