SECOND CHANCES - A RAHI OS - Page 3

Originally posted by: priya1101

Hey Neha.
First of all i am really sorry for my late comments,i was little busy.
Now coming to ur os,its Perfect.
Kudos to u dear for writing such beautiful os.
U portrayed it so beautifully,that i was imagining it all happening infront of my eyes.
I hate that Avi for mistreating our Angel.
The purity and strong bond of RaHi is clearly visible in this os.
I loved everything about this os.
I loved the bond that Panchi and her daughter shared.
My favourite part is when Ranveer and Panchi met after many years,It is the highlight of this os.
It is their destiny that brought them together.
I loved that promise of Ranveer that he will never let single tear flow through her eyes.
I loved that Plaque part.
U r an amazing writer.
Hats off to u.
Keep writing dear.
Lots of love and a tight hug for writing such a beautiful os.

Originally posted by: anjali1805

Hi.. Neha. C i told u ki main aaj hi comment karungi..
B4 i start i hope we r gud frnds and have the right to give true review and no need of buttering at all.
Dude how cud u do such a big injustice to RAHI. You know how much we love them u love them too.
So u get one thing very clear that we r not gonna tolerate this nxt time.

Dude itna achcha os kaha chupa rakha itne din. One thing is for sure ki yeh tumne sarah ke bolne se pehle hi soch ya likh rakha tha. This was simply ah-mazing. Me loved it frm the bottom of my heart. This side of rahi was a pure bliss. This is what our rahi are... Ranveer will brk his heart just to c his moti smile and Panchi will kill her heart just to preserve her frndship with rv and not to cause damage to their relationship coz she know she is his only family.
Arghhh that stupid avi.. How dare he brk panchi's heart... I m sure us waqt rv hota toh he wud hav killed avi himself.
I loved the mother daughter relationship..

The end was just so perfect. The best part was that although the story was quite diff u kept the rahi essence intact. Loved that plaque. Loved their meeting. Loved the way RV blamed himself although he wasnt completely at fault but he beliebed that panchi was his responsibility. I loved the way he swore that he wud not let any tear fall frm her eyes. Afterall destiny finds its way and panchi reached those arms where she belonged..
Rahi sirf ek dusre ke sath hi achche lagte hain..
Keep writing more.. Will be waiting for more oses frm u...
Love u loads...

P.S. Aur haan agli baar itna wait mat karwana.. We wont tolerate.. 😉

Originally posted by: tinaswea

So, the much awaited OS is here! I was waiting for it like anything! 🥳🤗

Uh are indeed the best writer in this Forum! 😎😊

It was so nice!

I loved it...

I hate that cruel Avi! Huh

So rude of him! 😕

I loved Panchi's character! Uh portrayed it so beautifully! 🤗

I am in love with this OS 😛

Coming to my Ranveer, he was perfect as always! Oh! I am falling for him all over again! 😳😳

I loved the end! 👍🏼

I loved Panchi's bond with her daughter! It was indeed the best best bond a daughter and mother could share! I love the never ending and everlasting love panchi had for her daughter! 🤗🥳

PS - uh are an amazing writer! ⭐️

Keep entertaining us ! ⭐️

It was written with a lot of perfection! ⭐️

In short, uh rock! 😛😆

Uh have immense amount of talent!

Don't let go off it!

Plz utilise it!😆😳

Uh have a bright future! That's what I think 😊😛

I'll be waiting for uh to write another wonderful OS! 😊

Uh are much much much better writer than me!😉😆

I loved it!❤️

I enjoyed it thoroughly! 🤗

Keep it up!

Keep writing! 🤪

Love ew sooo much! 🥺

Tina 😊😛😉

Originally posted by: s2singh

Neha I just loved it ...👏

Panchi's journey was so beautiful , ⭐️

Ranveer loved her from beginning, but kept it to himself so that Panchi wont get hurt, wow so typical Rahi...😳

Loved it yaar..

Itna achcha likhti ho...keep it up dear👍🏼

Originally posted by: --Akshu--

I loved it Neha!

the way you wrote the whole thing was amazing!

the way everything was perfect when it started?

She loved RV,but never said it ad she found Avi,the perfect someone,he cared for her,loved the ViChi proposal but Ranveer loved her too,but he dint wanna ruin it,she was genuinely happy,he dint wanna do it,he backed off and also their friendship took a back seat!

ViChi getting married their honeymoon eberything so perfect but again here Avi cheated her,he beated her treated herlike shit but she remained there for her daughter!

the last RaHi part was fab,he finally got her best friend back who regrets for not speaking up at that moment,regretting that he let her stay with a monster!

loved it Neha,do write more!😳

Originally posted by: Andriaa

Neha its too beautiful..😳

as u said this is very realistic...

keep writing more..👍🏼

Originally posted by: indiantvlove

Beautiful OS, loved it

Originally posted by: diyataarey

Res for the ROFL queen 😎

Finally Unres 🤣

I. Am. Stunned.

Omg...Leader you just made me applaud...!!

First of all i'll come to the story.

It is wonderful story no doubt. Emotional and sweet. The way i like it.

One of the social issues domestic violence was raised. I am a feminist sorta person and...if issues like these are written upon...i am quite interested on them. And the side of the RaHi love story was cute.

Now the writing. It was mature and simple. I loved it. The way you have described everything is commendable. The torture of Avi...the way you explained it...i could really feel the pain of Panchi.

I actually closed my eyes in fear of feeling the hurt. It was that well written.

Leader i bow down you. Its amazing!

Keep rocking and writing more!