SECOND CHANCES - A RAHI OS

Yayyy...I am first one to comment...yeepiee🥳..First of all toh thanks a lot for finally posting it...you are really too lazy my rasgulla...But I know that last week u were genuinely buzy so is baar maaf kar deti hun😆...now coming back to *Second chance*.I just LOVED it to the core...first of all toh the concept...so matured and unique and I must say ( imagine the way Nonu said this to moti😉) you handled it so brilliantly...10 on 10 for that..The way you write it..BEAUTIFULLY..you describe RaHi relationship so perfectly..they both love each other but aah,still fear to confess..our idiot RaHi..but don't u think that this the only thing we love most about them..they just care way to much for each other...before their own happiness they think about each other..Thanks for maintaining essence of RaHi intact...Poor Panchi..Have to go thoru from so much pain..that Avi..aarrgghh,I hate him so much..how could he do this to our Angel...But you portrayed Panchi's pain so brilliantly...and what can I say about the last part of this OS..RaHi meeting after so many years..love their reactions..I just have to say one thing..Perfect ending of a perfect story..You are really too good my rasgulla..Plz keep writing more and more..Take care

hai dear 😊 u r indeed a fabulous writer I really loved this story
I do want u to write more stories on rahi darlu
take care,love u

😃 by sruthi

wow yaar fabulous I loved reading it You are an awesome writer 👍🏼

wow it was amazing os

Res for the ROFL queen 😎

Amazing Neha...🤗

Neha itne amazing kaise likhteho?! U described it SO Beautifully..poor Nonu-Moti:( both have suffered bc of that Avi:@ ugh..thank u 4 killing him. Loved how u described their imotions..And the last part<3 their reactions! I could feel it.. & the plaque! Awwe<3.. my Fav part without any doubt..Tysm 4 this Neha:) waiting for ur next OS, Pls write soon..u r an amazing writer, i mean it.

Neha..what an AWESOME OS..the content ws so INTENSE...Mature RaHi ws a pleasure to read..!! loved this OS..!!

Hey Neha.
First of all i am really sorry for my late comments,i was little busy.
Now coming to ur os,its Perfect.
Kudos to u dear for writing such beautiful os.
U portrayed it so beautifully,that i was imagining it all happening infront of my eyes.
I hate that Avi for mistreating our Angel.
The purity and strong bond of RaHi is clearly visible in this os.
I loved everything about this os.
I loved the bond that Panchi and her daughter shared.
My favourite part is when Ranveer and Panchi met after many years,It is the highlight of this os.
It is their destiny that brought them together.
I loved that promise of Ranveer that he will never let single tear flow through her eyes.
I loved that Plaque part.
U r an amazing writer.
Hats off to u.
Keep writing dear.
Lots of love and a tight hug for writing such a beautiful os.

Hi.. Neha. C i told u ki main aaj hi comment karungi..
B4 i start i hope we r gud frnds and have the right to give true review and no need of buttering at all.
Dude how cud u do such a big injustice to RAHI. You know how much we love them u love them too.
So u get one thing very clear that we r not gonna tolerate this nxt time.

Dude itna achcha os kaha chupa rakha itne din. One thing is for sure ki yeh tumne sarah ke bolne se pehle hi soch ya likh rakha tha. This was simply ah-mazing. Me loved it frm the bottom of my heart. This side of rahi was a pure bliss. This is what our rahi are... Ranveer will brk his heart just to c his moti smile and Panchi will kill her heart just to preserve her frndship with rv and not to cause damage to their relationship coz she know she is his only family.
Arghhh that stupid avi.. How dare he brk panchi's heart... I m sure us waqt rv hota toh he wud hav killed avi himself.
I loved the mother daughter relationship..

The end was just so perfect. The best part was that although the story was quite diff u kept the rahi essence intact. Loved that plaque. Loved their meeting. Loved the way RV blamed himself although he wasnt completely at fault but he beliebed that panchi was his responsibility. I loved the way he swore that he wud not let any tear fall frm her eyes. Afterall destiny finds its way and panchi reached those arms where she belonged..
Rahi sirf ek dusre ke sath hi achche lagte hain..
Keep writing more.. Will be waiting for more oses frm u...
Love u loads...

P.S. Aur haan agli baar itna wait mat karwana.. We wont tolerate.. 😉