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Tina Sharma

@tinaswea

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

So, the much awaited OS is here! I was waiting for it like anything! 🥳🤗

Uh are indeed the best writer in this Forum! 😎😊

It was so nice!

I loved it...

I hate that cruel Avi! Huh

So rude of him! 😕

I loved Panchi's character! Uh portrayed it so beautifully! 🤗

I am in love with this OS 😛

Coming to my Ranveer, he was perfect as always! Oh! I am falling for him all over again! 😳😳

I loved the end! 👍🏼

I loved Panchi's bond with her daughter! It was indeed the best best bond a daughter and mother could share! I love the never ending and everlasting love panchi had for her daughter! 🤗🥳

PS - uh are an amazing writer! ⭐️

Keep entertaining us ! ⭐️

It was written with a lot of perfection! ⭐️

In short, uh rock! 😛😆

Uh have immense amount of talent!

Don't let go off it!

Plz utilise it!😆😳

Uh have a bright future! That's what I think 😊😛

I'll be waiting for uh to write another wonderful OS! 😊

Uh are much much much better writer than me!😉😆

I loved it!❤️

I enjoyed it thoroughly! 🤗

Keep it up!

Keep writing! 🤪

Love ew sooo much! 🥺

Tina 😊😛😉

Edited by tinaswea - 11 years ago

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Smriti Singh

@s2singh

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Neha I just loved it ...👏

Panchi's journey was so beautiful , ⭐️

Ranveer loved her from beginning, but kept it to himself so that Panchi wont get hurt, wow so typical Rahi...😳

Loved it yaar..

Itna achcha likhti ho...keep it up dear👍🏼

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Neha

@A-Musing-Me

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: sweetdesire
Yayyy...I am first one to comment...yeepiee🥳..First of all toh thanks a lot for finally posting it...you are really too lazy my rasgulla...But I know that last week u were genuinely buzy so is baar maaf kar deti hun😆...now coming back to *Second chance*.I just LOVED it to the core...first of all toh the concept...so matured and unique and I must say ( imagine the way Nonu said this to moti😉) you handled it so brilliantly...10 on 10 for that..The way you write it..BEAUTIFULLY..you describe RaHi relationship so perfectly..they both love each other but aah,still fear to confess..our idiot RaHi..but don't u think that this the only thing we love most about them..they just care way to much for each other...before their own happiness they think about each other..Thanks for maintaining essence of RaHi intact...Poor Panchi..Have to go thoru from so much pain..that Avi..aarrgghh,I hate him so much..how could he do this to our Angel...But you portrayed Panchi's pain so brilliantly...and what can I say about the last part of this OS..RaHi meeting after so many years..love their reactions..I just have to say one thing..Perfect ending of a perfect story..You are really too good my rasgulla..Plz keep writing more and more..Take care

Lots of Love
Geet

Aweee...yea yaar m too too lazy... maaf kar de please...

Yes dear...nonu moti think of each other before their own selves...love them for that...

Thank god n u too that could keep the rahiness intact...else mera kya hota...

Thanks dear for such a beautiful compliment...

Muahhh

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Neha

@A-Musing-Me

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: sruthi.r
hai dear 😊 u r indeed a fabulous writer I really loved this story
I do want u to write more stories on rahi darlu
take care,love u

😃 by sruthi

Shruthi love ya too babe...

Thanks soo much for that lovely compliment

Muahh

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Neha

@A-Musing-Me

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: sidra08
wow yaar fabulous I loved reading it You are an awesome writer 👍🏼

Sid...my dr poet.. thanks yaar.. muahh

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Neha

@A-Musing-Me

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Prince6495
wow it was amazing os
Ranveer loved panchi from start but sacrificed for panchi hiw sweet😳
avi such a jerk😡 firstly he cheated on panchi and than tortured her . Panchi tolerated all this for her daughter .
Finally Panchi got her happiness her love Rv ..
its awsome
u r a fab writer ⭐️
plzz do write more

Thanks stavan...

Thanks for the compliment...

Glad u liked it..

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Neha

@A-Musing-Me

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: diyataarey
Res for the ROFL queen 😎

Unres karne ka nahi socha kya meri rofl queen

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Neha

@A-Musing-Me

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: luv_u_Bharti
Amazing Neha...🤗
I really loved it... ❤️ 👍🏼
Second Chances dunno cm 2 all...
I was really touched by d way u potrayed Panchi's journey...👏
& her voyage 2 love & happiness...
A perfect story wid an awesm ending...⭐️
Thankx a ton 4 d pm 😊
Write More 😃

Khushi... thanks re...

Yess...second chances are rare..

Glad u loved the ending

Muahh

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Neha

@A-Musing-Me

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Sarah_Angel9
Neha itne amazing kaise likhteho?! U described it SO Beautifully..poor Nonu-Moti:( both have suffered bc of that Avi:@ ugh..thank u 4 killing him. Loved how u described their imotions..And the last part<3 their reactions! I could feel it.. & the plaque! Awwe<3.. my Fav part without any doubt..Tysm 4 this Neha:) waiting for ur next OS, Pls write soon..u r an amazing writer, i mean it.

Aweee sarah..

Glad u liked it...

N your words mean a lot...thank u..