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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nicky13

yeah everything is settling down slowly-2 ... How r u?



I am good😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Diii, update it sooon...ithini dher kyon??????...my bihaan ko jaldi tewk karke lao naaa...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Dplee when are you going to update this one
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Posted: 9 years ago
dplee di I beg you to give an update...you have left the fan fiction with a vey interesting sentence at the end and now I am getting desperate to know what happened next pls di complete the fan fiction with anything that comes to your mind bcos I know whatever it is that comes to your mind will be absolutely superb!!! so pls di aur intezaar mat karwao...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Guys...sorry for the delay..I'll update it next week, pukka...weekend is full of crazy staff so please bear with me..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Okay... Itna toh chalega ;)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Dplee



Thanks Chandu..don't worry Bihaan will be alright. Just a twist will be there 😉

still waiting for it dii 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi guys! After a long time, I am updating this SS. I am crushed under thousand works and hence the delay. Please bear with me. Here the fourth part. Enjoy!


Part IV

"Let me go!!" Bihaan screamed at the top of his voice. Sanjay and Ashwin were holding him while Dhruv was frantically trying to call the therapist. Vasu Pandey was sobbing when Bauji reached Bihaan's room.


"Let me go bhaiya. I can't be in the room all the time. Why are you all behaving like I am a child? And why this women has to come to my room every time? Where is dadi? Where are bhabis?"


Seeing his condition, the eldest of the Pandey household came forward. Dadi, hearing Bihaan's screams, has came to his room only to find him in totally mess. Her heart cried seeing her youngest grandson like this. Bihaan was the essence of life in her home. He cared about everything, everybody but in return, he got only heartbreak. The two most important women broke him beyond repairing and it broke her old heart.


"I am here my baccha!" She said and welcomed the child with open arms just like she did twenty years ago when he first came to their life. Bihaan hugged her like a lost child and all the other people were shocked to see her like that. Dadi hardly left her place near the Mandir since Bihaan went to the rehab. She even stopped crying once all the misunderstandings were clear and Vasu's misdeed came into light. She refused to speak anyone and did nothing but to pray. She was so hurt that she didn't come to Bihaan's room once Vasu took his charge.


"Ma!" Ballu started to speak but dadi held her hand to stop him.


"Bihaan, you want to go out? Let's go beta. It's long time since you and me have gone for a walk." Dadi said to Bihaan. Bihaan's eyes were sparkled with joy and he happily held dadi's hand.


"But dadi, doctor told..." Dhruv tried to resonate but dadi cut his words.


"Do you think I am a fool? Bihaan will recover like this? Where you all have kept him like a prisoner? He needs to be him. He needs to go out, breath freely. He needs to embrace life, not secluded in a room like he doesn't need to even see the daylight. My baccha had enough. Now he will be just like as he was as soon as he recovers his physical strength." And without sparing any glance, dadi took Bihaan out.


They went to the lawn and sat leisurely like they have did million times. Bihaan inhaled deeply. He missed it. He was away from light for a long time. It felt like he is getting into life after a long time. Dadi smiled at him indulgently. They were quite for sometime. But soon Bihaan itched to ask dadi about his dreams.



"Dadi..."


"Hmm"


"Hum ek baat puche?"


"Ha mere bacche..ask what you want." Dadi caressed his face lovingly.


"Did I forget something or somebody when I fallen ill?"


It was dadi's turn to be pale. She swallowed nervously. Doctor advised not to give Bihaan any stress. He is in delicate condition and it was advised not to push him to recover.


"Why? What happened?"


"Nothing dadi. But I get a dream sometime that there is someone that I couldn't recall properly. Its a girl dadi, with a sweet laughter. It's like I have met her somewhere, it's like I know her somehow but couldn't recall her. Whenever I try to see her face, my dream breaks."


"Are my baccha has fallen in love kya? That's too with a dream girl?" Dadi teased him but her heart was at war. She was shocked that Bihaan is getting Thapki's flashback. She was at loss what to do and so she tried to lighten the matter.


"Next time when you meet that girl in your dream, ask her name. I'll personally go to her to ask her hand for you."


Bihaan got shy. He lowered his hand and answered.


"Kya dadima, she is just a dream. And I am so rough, gunda, which girl will fall in love with me?"


"My baby is the best in this world. Somebody has to be very lucky to fall in love with him." Dadi said with tears in her eyes. Only if he could knew, what mess love has created in his life. Only if he could know that he was already in love and that is no dream of him but reality.


She was about to tell something when she saw the doctor. The doctor came straight to them. Bihaan was not aware that it was his therapist. He was told that the doctor was their new business partner. He checked Bihaan with small talks. They chatted for a long time and once Bihaan get tired, he left dadi and the doctor to go to his room. Gradually, all the family member gathered around them. The doctor informed them it was indeed a great step for Bihaan that he wanted to come out instead of fussing around his room. It was better for him to be normal and he instructed everyone to be normal like before. Doctor said that Bihaan needs love and only love can cure him.


All were silent when dadi told them about Bihaan's flashbacks of Thapki. The doctor considered it to be great sign of memory gain but he requested everyone not to pressure him. Dadi assured him that all things will be taken care of. As the doctor was about to leave, dadi had an idea.


"Doctor, can I ask you something?"


"Jee maaji."


"How about letting Bihaan to meet his wife as if they were meeting for the first time? All things can be sort out afresh like you said."


"It's a good idea maa!" Ballu exclaimed. Everyone murmured that it would be great.


The doctor thought for sometime before answering the family. He has seen their care for the son but the doctor has seen Bihaan in pain. One of the most crucial person for his condition was Bihaan's wife and it may harm him too. But as he saw the expectant faces, the doctor decided to take the risk.


"Mrs Bihaan Pandey has to play a great role in it maaji. We can stage an accidental meeting between them. But let me be clear. It could also harm him. Or he can again fall in love with her or at least be friends. I can't guarantee that his memories would return but if the poor soul gets accompany, the melancholy that has surrounded him can finally leave him. But be sure to make it accidental as..." But the doctor didn't get the chance to finish as Bihaan's shout drowned his words.


"Dadima..come fast! Look I have found her! I have found the girl from my dream. She is here! She is here only!!"
Edited by Dplee - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Okh plx diii..its beautiful everything, in this sto is going so right, plx plx update asap..
I love it..
I know I was not abou
Thahaan.

But bihaan is incomplete without thapki..so make it happen..
And ur bihaan is much more cute and loveable.
Edited by manaan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: manaan

Okh plx diii..its beautiful everything, in this sto is going so right, plx plx update asap..
I love it..
I know I was not abou
Thahaan.

But bihaan is incomplete without thapki..so make it happen..
And ur bihaan is much more cute and loveable.



Rida...thanks for reading. I think I have given enough hint that Thapki will play a major role here. And I too truely believe that Bihaan is incomplete without Thapki. So, stay tuned!

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