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Posted: 9 years ago
For you 👏
I love how you narrate a situation... I love the way u used nature (river n waterfall) ... Music (tune n dholak) to make the comparison... You have poetic attitude girlll...
N that "dog" wala dialogue was my favourite one from show...

If you are biased towards Bihaan... So is towards Vasu 😆 usko hate karne ka ek or reason de Diya 😛 still after that Dhruv Ki zindagi 😡

I was feeling connected with Ballu ji's emotions 😭 depicted beautifully

Thapki realized finally 😳 so can hope for ThaHaan in next updates 😉
Sanjay dutt hi "munna bhai" hai
Hopes hamaari "high" hai [taza taza naara hai abhi burner se utaara hai 😆 ]

Last me Bihaan shouted 😲 😭


Update soon

Thanks for the reminder "mera wohi hai sahaara" 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Dplee I m so sorry yaar ... I didn't read any of ur story from long time... I was busy actually I was stuck somewhere... I just came today to this forum and I saw your story... It is awesome really nice... Poor Bihaan Kya ho gya hai uska haal... I really hope jaldi sab kuchh theek ho jayega... Thanks

Love

Nicky
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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG dii dont tell me it was our poor baby shouting 😭😭
okay i take my words back i am loving this vasu she deserves all this ! 😡 hate that women even more now! Really heart touching part ❤️
di please update soon!! want to know if our baby is fine or not?
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Neha99

Glad u included baujis pov n even then felt bihaans pain bcz it was evident from baujis words bauji is hurt bihaan is hurt everyone is hurt but vasu couldnt forget about ds ki khushi...
Good to read that thapki is gonna wait for bihaan
Loved it n loving ur idea of including everyones pov 👏



Thank you Neha!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sukanksha

For you 👏
I love how you narrate a situation... I love the way u used nature (river n waterfall) ... Music (tune n dholak) to make the comparison... You have poetic attitude girlll...
N that "dog" wala dialogue was my favourite one from show...

If you are biased towards Bihaan... So is towards Vasu 😆 usko hate karne ka ek or reason de Diya 😛 still after that Dhruv Ki zindagi 😡

I was feeling connected with Ballu ji's emotions 😭 depicted beautifully

Thapki realized finally 😳 so can hope for ThaHaan in next updates 😉
Sanjay dutt hi "munna bhai" hai
Hopes hamaari "high" hai [taza taza naara hai abhi burner se utaara hai 😆 ]

Last me Bihaan shouted 😲 😭


Update soon

Thanks for the reminder "mera wohi hai sahaara" 😛




Thanks Su..hum poet nahi blogger hai😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nicky13

Hi Dplee I m so sorry yaar ... I didn't read any of ur story from long time... I was busy actually I was stuck somewhere... I just came today to this forum and I saw your story... It is awesome really nice... Poor Bihaan Kya ho gya hai uska haal... I really hope jaldi sab kuchh theek ho jayega... Thanks

Love

Nicky



Nicky! It's so good to see you dear after so many days. Is everything settled in your new place?


Can't tell how much I missed your remarks on my story. Thanks for reading sweety
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: chandaaaxo

OMG dii dont tell me it was our poor baby shouting 😭😭

okay i take my words back i am loving this vasu she deserves all this ! 😡 hate that women even more now! Really heart touching part ❤️
di please update soon!! want to know if our baby is fine or not?



Thanks Chandu..don't worry Bihaan will be alright. Just a twist will be there 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Dplee, I read it y'day but dont remember whether I commented on this! So here it is... Sorry if its second time.
It was just wonderful! But Vasu is Vasu! Even after so much she still has the guts to make the Tha--ruv proposal! But I like her suffering.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Dplee




Nicky! It's so good to see you dear after so many days. Is everything settled in your new place?


Can't tell how much I missed your remarks on my story. Thanks for reading sweety

yeah everything is settling down slowly-2 ... How r u?
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: fan.matsh

Dplee, I read it y'day but dont remember whether I commented on this! So here it is... Sorry if its second time.
It was just wonderful! But Vasu is Vasu! Even after so much she still has the guts to make the Tha--ruv proposal! But I like her suffering.



Maty..comment as many times as you want



I wanted to keep Vasu realistic in my ff. And the reality is that she loves Dhruv more than her life. In every situation, a mother will always think of her dear child only. If there is something to be blammed it is her inability to love Bihaan equally. She tries to love Bihaan and she is successful to some extent but her first priority will always be Dhruv

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