A series of Unfortunate Events, Romantic Edition (UPDATED ch7 pg 9)*

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rtms

@rtms

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#51

its beautiful.loved bihaan's gift n the dialogues.thahaan's small scene of closeness was also nice.was not all expecting DS there at the moment.a jealous shraddha?wts up in her sleeves?interesting.waiting eagerly to read the nxt part.the progression of the story is good.

most likely on our show v will see a jealous aditi instead of jealous shraddha.DS will be like this only even on our show.

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fan.matsh

@fan.matsh

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Beautiful moments btn thahaan.. he bringing her choodiyan n making her wear them - was simply wonderful. I hope v get such scenes in our show again... this time showing romance btn thahaan...
Plz update fast. waiting ...

Edited by fan.matsh - 9 years ago

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sudanindia2014

@sudanindia2014

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Aww chapter 6 is here at last and it's awesome
I'm not Indian and I don't know Hindi so I sort of have holes in the story because of the Hindi dialogue but I don't skip it I try my best to read it and sometimes I managed to get what they are saying depending on the vocabulary I gained by watching Indian serials so I'm cool and I really love your story and can't wait for chapter 7

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P.D.Dutta

@P.D.Dutta

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Ohhh.. We are gonna have a jealous Thapki!!! Wonderful writing dear. Can wait for the next

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yumna

@billo77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Really enjoyed Chapter 5 -6 , Thapki and bihaan relation is so cute . I truly enjoyed reading thapki and bihaans interaction between each other . Wasn't expecting Thapki to hug bihaan from the back , but it was soo cute loved it!!Everything is so nicely written , catching each thought and emotions .Please make the next part longer 😳