OS anyone?

I wrote this OS for Nads a few weeks ago and Shareen told (practically threatened) me to post on the forum. 😛

Let me know what you think.

Paagal Onu OS.

Onu sat in the corner of the room, huddled, with his knees close to him, like he was protecting himself. But from who? The warden lady? Or maybe that lady who kept coming to visit him... No else had ever visited him, not his parents, not his Laboni Maa... Not even his Mishti. But why did that woman keep coming to see him? Who was she?

Onu looked around the room, his new home. He saw all the writings. Mishti. His Mishti. He felt his eyes start to water so he brushed the tears away with the back of his sleeve.

Where was his Mishti? Why hadn't she come to see him? Why hadn't she come to rescue him from here? He wanted to get out of this place. It was dark, it was cold and it was just so lonely. He didn't have anyone. The only thing that made him happy was his writings on the wall. But they were the same things which made him sad.

Onu got up from the floor, walked over to an empty part of the wall and looked around it before picking up his piece of charcoal and began writing.

"I Love Mishti"

If Mishti saw all of his writings on the walls, then she would be so happy... If only he could show the writings to her.

"Onu?" a familiar voice called him, which caused him to freeze. He looked up slowly to see that lady standing by the door with the warden.

Onu looked away. What was it about that voice? Why did it sound like it was someone he knew? But it wasn't.

Onu went back to his writings on the wall, wiping his eyes with his sleeve every time he felt tears running down his cheeks.

Originally posted by: shareen

ME! 😍

Finally 😳

*Edit

Lubziee 🤗 Firstly, YAY! I'm SO SO glad that u've written an OS after such a long time Chamatkar is what this is 🤣

Paagal Onu! Gosh, it brought back all the TL memories, especially the scenes of the first epi.

It was absolutely BEAUTIFUL..loveee how you penned down Onu's thoughts! Aww :(

Isn't that lady Tani? U know what? :P This requires a 2nd part..We demand another installment

FAB work like always Lubziee..i thoroughly enjoyed reading it ❤️

LY