Twinj SS: Embracing the Rain Updated (Chapter VII-Page-9) - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
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omigosh
you should update real soon
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Happy reading guys. Do drop your comments.

Chapter: 6

It was raining so heavily that she started to shiver in his arms. He was holding him tight and that's why could feel it.

Kunj: I think you are not okay. We need to go to a warm place right now. You are shivering.'

Twinkle: There is no better place in this world which can give me as much warmth as your embrace.

Kunj chuckled a bit but he held her hand tight. Let's go.'

Twinkle: But where?

Kunj: You believe me right? Then no question please. Just hold my hand and yes I am going to take you somewhere. He called someone and a car stopped just in front of them. The driver greeted him and handover the keys.

He gently opened the car door for her saying Your Highness, please get in. Your man is ready to serve you.'

She couldn't blink her eyes or asked a question. She just got in and he took the driver's seat and started the car.

Twinkle: Will you please tell where are we going?'

Kunj: To buy clothes for you.'

Twinkle: What? Kunj that's so sweet of you but you know I can't take things...'

She couldn't even finish her sentence when he put his finger on her lips.

Kunj: Ssshhh. You are sneezing and if you don't change immediately you are going to get fever. And you don't need to shop. I have already selected a dress for you. We will go to the mall so that you will be able to change it.'

Twinkle: I didn't understand.'

Kunj: You will princess within a few minutes. Now just don't ask any question it's a surprise.'

Twinkle: Kunj but Maa? She doesn't know and she will ask me why I am in a new dress and from where did I get it? What should I say?

Kunj: Tell the truth that your boyfriend presented you and he laughed.'

Twinkle: Kunj please be serious. You know I can't say it to her all of a sudden.'

Kunj: You do trust me right? I will go to your mom and tell her I am the guy who fell in love with her sweet innocent daughter and I will always love her more than my life. She will never refuse me.'

Twinkle giggled and the car stopped in front of the luxurious mall of the town The Sarna Paradise Center.'

Kunj opened the car door for her and handed over the keys to the guard who just gave him a big salute.

Kunj: Let's go.'

Twinkle: Wait a minute. You are Kunj Sarna right?'

Kunj: Right you are. The son of Mr. Manohar Sarna, owner of Sarna Group of Companies.'

Twinkle's mouth started to form an O' shape. Are you serious? If you are Kunj Sarna then how can you fall in love with an ordinary girl like me? So many girls are after you and they are far more rich and beautiful than me' she asked in a sad voice.

Kunj who was listening to her silently now speak up Who told you that you are ordinary? Yes hundreds of girls are after me because of my wealth. I am their choice and I can't help it. But you are special because I chose you. You are my dream girl. The girl, who can take away the sleep of Mr. Kunj Sarna can't be an ordinary girl. She is special in so many ways. Never say it again okay.'

There were tears in her eyes. He gave his hand and she grabbed it tightly with a smiling face. When they entered the mall a man came towards them hurriedly with a box covered with pink wrapping paper and laces. He gave it to Kunj and left immediately.

Kunj handed over the box to her. A gift for my love. Will you please accept it'- he asked.

She nodded her head in yes. He smiled and just a lady came to show her the changing room. Please Ma'am come with me.'

Twinkle followed the lady leaving behind the smiling Kunj.

She opened the packet in the fresh room. It was so beautifully decorated that she didn't feel like to open it first. There was a small note inside the box written by Kunj I'm Yours. I know you must be thinking when I selected the dress. I selected it few months back when I used to think I would give it to the special lady of my life. You are the lady whom I have wanted all my life and I want to get old with you. I want to enjoy the first sunshine of the day and the silvery moon beam of the night with you. I promise I would love you more everyday and make it even beautiful than yesterday. Will you be mine?'

She smiled and touched the pink floral dress. It felt feathery and thought in herself If it's a dream then she will never gonna wake up. She will love him forever...'

Imagine Twinkle in this dress.


Edited by Cloudy_Noon - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
so sweet
waiting for the next episode

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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
i was in aweee shooo sweet mode while reading it..😳
nice update rini😊
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I really lack words describing ur story...splendid I mean the plot is really amazing...the concept of rain which u used just portrays ur pretty imagination...read all parts in one go..and the way u described her pretty brown hazel eyes was so beautiful...it just seemed so real...the story is so graceful..the plot is slow moving yet the most adorable one...excellent job😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I loved this chapter...
Buddy what I love most about this story is the flow of the plot. Its so airy and light...almost like the flutter of a butterfly's wing. The whole subtle progression is so wonderfully written, I makes my heart swell and my head feel light. The story is such a lovely distraction from everyday life.

This story is too close to magic! I love every single bit of it.
Kudos to you buddy!👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dear Friends
I just write for you all. All the appreciation and kind words which I receive from you people just brighten my day a bit more. Thank you all for such loving words. You all are my inspiration. Love you all.
Rinita
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow..it's soo amazing..
Loved it..
Plz continue soon.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Update sooonnn
Im.waiting yar
Infact all.of us are waiting
Jaldi jaldi update karooo
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Rini it was an amazing update.
Ur imagination is👏
Continue jaldi jaldi.

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