Twinj SS: Embracing the Rain Updated (Chapter VII-Page-9) - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
rini...nice update...
i loved the talk between twinkle and leela..
twinkle's thoughts ..
esp the verses on the umbrella...❤️
loved them...
u knw...i saved those lines ...
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This chapter was such a joy to read!
Just reading Twinkle's thoughts was so amazing!
And the poetry!! I love it! Its E.H's or KPK's? Anywho it fit soo well and it was something I can totally imagine Kunj writing!

All in all a beautiful chapter. It truly made my heart flutter!
Kudos to you👏👏

Girl you never fail to touch my heart with your kind words. We all should learn from you how to appreciate others. Thank you so much.
The poem is 'I am Afraid ' by Sheikh Ariffin. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sanju dearly I am flattered. You people are my support system. Thanks for appreciating my work. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cloudy_Noon

Aw buddy the same could be said for you. You are lovely!
I remember reading this poem but didn't remember the poet.
But if you have the time definitely try reading Erin Hnason's poem. They are absolutely beautiful!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Happy reading friends. 😊

Part:4

Twinkle woke up early in the morning. It was around 5.30. She took a quick shower and prayed to Babaji for the exam. She hurriedly took her breakfast and Leela told her to wait for a few minutes to take her coffee as she knew without her morning coffee Twinkle's day doesn't start. But for the first time Twinkle said she would take her coffee after exam and bided bye to Leela. Leela was surprised but wished her good luck for the exam.

Twinkle's exam started at 8.00 and it went well. After finishing it she came out with Chinky.

Twinkle: Chinky I am having a severe headache. Let's go and have coffee.

Chinky: Twinkle I have another class from 10.30. And you never take coffee at this time. We usually take coffee after lunch.

Twinkle: I know Chinky but today I skipped my morning coffee. That's why having a severe headache. Doesn't matter. Do call me after your class. I will be waiting.

Chinky left and Twinkle thought about the umbrella which was inside her bag. She couldn't decide what to do. Whether to search for him or not. She stood there for a while and was about to leave when she heard his voice:

I guess a pair of pretty brown eyes is searching for me. Here I am'- Kunj chuckled.

Twinkle with her astonishment couldn't say a single word for some seconds but she managed herself.

Don't give yourself too much importance Mr. Sadoo. Why should I think of a person whom I met just once in my life?'- she uttered.

Kunj: Ummm because one of my precious belongings is with you. You want to give me that don't you?'

Twinkle's heart started to beat super fast and she thought in her minds the person who is standing in front of her should not listen to her heart beats. Excuse me' was the only phrase she could utter.

Kunj: Have you listen to the saying Two hearts one umbrella.' If you don't return it back it will mean something like that.

An embarrassed Twinkle quickly opened her bag and returned it to him. Sorry I forgot to return it back and thanks for whatever you did for me last evening.'

Kunj: Hey I was just kidding. I am glad that my umbrella could help someone from getting drenched in the rain. I love getting drenched in the rain. Better you keep this umbrella as it might rain again anytime soon.

Twinkle:' Listen that's so nice of you that you helped me but I don't need it anymore'- she couldn't even finish her sentence and thunder started to roar.

A panicked Twinkle looked at him. He chuckled one more time.

Kunj: Seems like whenever we meet there is a change in the weather. See the grey sky, it's going to rain. I have an idea. How about going for a coffee?'

That's what Twinkle was dying for since morning. How does he know?'-she thought in her mind.' Not a bad idea. I love coffee too' she smiled saying so. A few drop of the rain touched her cheeks right then and he quickly opened the umbrella and spread it over her head. She looked at those strong arms which were busy to protect her. Suddenly, at that time her heart filled with so much love. She didn't know from where those come from.

He covered her with the umbrella all the way to the coffee shop. After some while they entered the Rainbow Coffee Shop' and a beautiful song by Phil Collins was playing that time:

You know I never meant to see you again
But I only passed by as a friend... yeah
All this time I stayed out of sight
I started wondering why

Now I... ooo now I wish it would rain down, down on me
Ooo yes I wish it would rain, rain down on me now
Ooo yes I wish it would rain down, down on me
Ooo yes I wish it would rain on me...

All of a sudden, some droplets of rain water from his hair fell on top of her nose and eyes when he twisted his head. He looked so handsome that she couldn't take her eyes away from him for a single second..

Edited by Cloudy_Noon - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Lovely chapter once again...
It was utterly whimsical, and that's something I always love.
I really like the part where you described Kunj opened his umbrella up to protect her first!
❤️

So I haven't heard the song before..I googled it. Its such a great song!!
Hear 'Rhythm of the rain' by the Cascades.

Lovely chapter👏
Edited by neverlandspirit - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
nice update rini..
u know...when ever i'm reading this particular ss...i feel..i'm in some other field...like a sort of magnetic field...i mean...my eyes will b glued to the screen...i'll b imagining everything...and there is some thing magical?...can i say magical...may b its the rain...😳
i embrace this ss...😆
loved it...😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Wow..
Amazing update..
It was sooo magical..
Simple and beautiful story of twinj..
Lovely..

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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Rini,
Such a beautiful story and also the last update is amazing one.
Love the particular song yaar.
And our Sherni is melting by someone's charm and you wrote it sooo beautifully. 👏
I want to read it more but it ends sooo quickly.
Please provide the next as early as possible.😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Thank you so much girls for your kind and generous words. I am overwhelmed by the love I received from you people. Thanks for the smiles and friendship. You people find the story magical but your words create the real magic. Thank you everyone for your heartfelt love. 😊

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