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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awsm chappies. Loved the way anita ke baand baji. Dekha maine bola tha na this girl is not twinkle. anyway 2 chappies were a treat for me. Chalo ab next chappy jaldi se update karode kyunki i am dying to know twinkle kahan hai? Plz. Jaldi twinj ka reunion karwada do, ab yeh duri mere se bardash nahi hoti.
Edited by ....Anabella... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update .
What a twist Twinkle is not Twinkle?
Where is Twinkle?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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UPDATE FROM SAM
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so here is the 14th chapter.
@anabella dont worry main apko paagal nahi hone dungi 😆


CHAPTER-13

Matlab tum leela taneja ki beti nahi ho? Armaan was baffled why didnt people recognised that she is not twinkle
armaan mai leela taneja ki hi beti hun
it means tum twinkle ho kunj ki biwi his heart churned when he said kunj ki biwi
main leela taneja ki beti hi hun par mai twinkle nahi hun
then who the fcuk are you he shouted at the top of his voice..this lovely woman who was his only friend is'nt the one whom she claimed to be a few days back...IM sorry i should't have shouted on u

its OK i can understand ur state of mind..she cant help but think how hot he looked when he utterd that F word

LONDON:
twinkle was in her office standing infront of an open window that gives a clear view of the busy london,every one was busy in their own world...
It was exactly opposite to amritsar whr the people are intrested in some1 else's lives rather than their owm...amritsar she closed her eyes nd those harsh words came haunting back
i wish i could remove u from my life...teri aur tere BF ki wajah se bhugatna mujhe padta hai it has been exactly 8 months nd ur words still manages to stab nd rip my heart kunj she opened her eyes wiped her tears but not anymore if u dont want me in ur life then u are also not welcome in my life...
8 months back she remembered how she met "HER" nd her life changed..changed for good
FLASHBACK:

girl: OMG! Am i hallucinating ye main khud ko kyun samne dekh rahi hun..a momentarily thought leas to a big accident that landed twinkle in hospital

HOSPITAL:
twinkle lifted her head to see who is the owner of this familar voice..what she saw shocked her standing infront of her was an exact replica of herself she was shocked to the core is this even possible ? How can two people share a similar face heck even her voice too is ditto..then it hits her the voice looked familiar because its her own voice
GIRL:zyada stress mat lo doctor ne mana kiya hai
twinkle: hello im jasmine oberoi you can call me jas or jassi bcoz nmy mom calls me that
twinkle: tumhari shakal mujhse milti hai
jasmine: u got it wrong darling meri nahi tumhari shakal mujhse milti hai she said proudly making twinkle laugh
twinkle:mera naam twinkle hai
jasmine: nice to meet you twinkle
twinkle: waise i dont knw what to say its really awkward
jas: haan toh main kaunsa roz apni humshakal se milti hun
twi: true..BTW jas mujhe dekh kar tumhe hairani nahi hui
jas: agar hairani nahi hoti toh tumhe thokti nahi
both twinkle nd jas shared a laugh
MR.OBEROI: jas beta what ha.. To say rishi oberoi was shocked will be an understatement..he was baffled
JAS: dada,meet twinkle
Mr.oberoi:h.e..hello twinkle beta
twinkle:hello uncle
jas:is'nt this what you called as eitekaaf dad
twinkle:its ittefaq
jas: yeah thats what i said dear,u knw dad shkal ke alawa humara blood group bhi same hai..such a co-incidence
mr.oberoi:may be its not a mere co-incidence..may be u guys are related
JAS: really hum kumbh ke mele me gaye the kya ? Moreover hum amritsar pehli baar aye hain so,how can we be related
MR.OBEROI: jas ur the centre of our universe..you knw how much we love you but we need to tell you something which we have hidden all these years
JAS: OH gopi bahu seedhe point par aao na
mr oberoi: jas...
Jas:spill it dad ur scaring me
oberoi: jas u are my daughter no can change this fact but it is also true that me nd neha are'nt ur biological parents infact we adopted you from an orphanage
this new piece of info shocked both twinkle nd JAS
jas: jst fcuk up dad kya bakwas kar rahe ho how can you even say that
mr.oberoi: tumhe kisi aur se pata chale usse behtar ye hoga ki main bata dun nd tell me 1 thing kya ye janne k bad tum mujhe dad kehna band kar dogi ? Will u severe all ties from ur family
JAS: jst leave me alone with that she ran outside of hospital
oberoi: jass
twinkle: usse jaane dijiye she needs time, mr.oberoi gave an undersatanding look
AFTER AN HOUR
jas came back her eyes puffy because of crying
jas: mujhe DNA test kavana hai
twinkle: sirf tumhe nahi hum dono ko
they go through the peocedure Of DNA TESt
twinkle was anxious what if the result is positive...she will be more than happy to accept jas but why did her mother never said anything about her another child..if jas is her sister then she will certainly be her twin sister...
MR.OBEROI came with results
jas: kya hai result me dad..
POSITIVE the word echoed in the corridor, with that jas slumped on the chair
twinkle who was happy understood that her sister needs her more than ever

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So guys here's the update .. on behalf of Sam😊 ..since she can't post than post limit I guess🤔
Have a look 😳😉
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And for me the update was amazing n fab 😛so she's new twin sis😳
W8ng...pls continue soon 😛😃
Edited by Abhia2Twinj4eva - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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chapter-15how the fcuk can this be possible...if all this crap is true the..then my M..my mom..she herself...orph..an. Jas was unable to complete her voice was heavy with emotionsmeri maa ne mujhe khud orphanage me chod diya...was i the unwanted one she asked nd started crying bitterly[COLOR=MAGNETA]bakwaas hai..agar tum unwanted hoti toh main bhi unwanted hi hoti we are twins that too identical...there is more to this mystery maa se puchna padega[/COLOR]as if tum puchogi aur woh bata degi..it doesn't matter at all im jasmine oberoi.. My parents love me im the apple of their eyes...that is the reality and i dont give a flying Fcuk who my biological parents are if they dont care then i too dont carejst shut up instead of judging our mom jst move ur a*se nd help me main kya help karun ? Heck i dnt even knw what's the name of my so-called momleela taneja our mom's name is leela..leela ki leela,leela hi jaane jas said exasperating twinkleOK..acha maine ghar par call kiya maa vaishno devi gayi hai900 chuhe khake billi haj ko chaliSHUT UP if you dared to utter even a word against our mom then i'll rip you into pieces said said her eyes burning with fury...now listen nd listen carefully you are coming with me without asking anything..nd dont you dare to utter a word..samaj aya jas nodded she was scared to see this side of twinkle...twinkle explained everything to mr.oberoi nd they left...they hired a cab nd after 30 minutes of journey they reached their destination...[LIFECARE HOSPITAL/B]twinkle:excuse me i'm twinkle taneja..mujhe us doctor se milna hai jisne meri maa ki delivery ki thi sm 22 years back receptionist: maam humare saare cases ki files store room me hoti hai..aap pls jaake check kar lijiye.compunder inhe file dhunde me help kao...she know that she is giving away confidential info which is against rules but she is twinkle taneja..if she dared to utter no who know's she may never get a job again in any hospital after all she belongs to the most powerful family of amritsar [B]STORE ROOM after searching for a good 20 minutes...they finally got what they were looking for twinkle:mil gayi jas:chila kyun rahi hai jaldi dekh na twinkle: is me toh likha hai ki unhe sirf ek beti hui hai..twinklethere is no mention of twins..how the F is this possible jas: oh toh tu us doctor ka naam dekh jisne delivery ki hai tw: haan unka naam hai daljeet chadda jas: chal reception pe puchte haitwinkle twinkle: excuse me ma'm hume dr.daljeet chadda se milna hai receptionist:main yahan par 4 saal ye hun nd i've never heard about this doctor chadda haan shayad wo usse pehle retire hogayi ho ek sec...DR.khanna inhe kisi dr.daljeet chadda k baare me janna hai pls can you help them DR: daljeet 6 saal pehle retire ho gayi thi..mere paas uska adress hoga shayad...he checked haan his diary nd haan ye raha. DALJEET CHADDA's RESIDENCE a birthday party was going on..it was daljeet's grandson's birthday party..everyone was happyBOY: im now 10 years old so ima big boy ri8 angeldaljeet: of course prince..Jst then a servant came nd whispered anthing in her ears she was confused who wants to meet her at this odd hour ?She went outside to meet those young ladies...when she saw then colour drained from her face her sub-concious mind knew what was coming while her concious mind ignored the threat D: hello, who are you ? How can i help you ?Twinkle: actually aunt...Before twinkle can complete jasmine charged towards the old woman nd pushed her while throttling her neck jas: listen nd listen carefully bloody hag..leela taneja tune unki delivery ki thi and im her daughter she had twins but this piece of info was missing from hospital records spill the beans warna agle saal se apne B.day par tera nawasa teri barsi manayega twinkle gasped jas chodo unhe leave her.jas finally leaves herafter gaining her composure daljeet bursted into tears D: im sorry beta,im xtremely sorry leela ko judwa bache paida hue the but we've altred the info..T: WE ap aur kaun ? D:RAj luthraj: now who the fcuk is raj luthra T: yuvraj ke papa J:and who the hell is yuvraj jas asked running out of patience D:i was in love with raj that time,when leela accused him of molesting her he convinced me that leela was lying nd to avenge his insult we devised a plan to seperate leela frm her daughter nd bereft her from her child..along with a few nurses we deluded evry1 that leela gave birth to only one daughterUNKNOWN to twinkle nd daljeet jas was recording the whole confession..Jas:kaand toh kar diya ab saza bhi bhugto jas barged into the party nd played the recording evr1 was shocked esp daljeet evry1 was looking at her with accusing eyes even her grandson D: prince..she tried to salvage her image BOY: ur no angel ur satan karma is bitch
Edited by beingdumb - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The update was awesome 😳more interesting day by day 😃
Do p.m. me whenever update is ready 😃😳wud be highly inactive for sometime 😳so plz do p.m. me always😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
Thanks sam for saving me from going mad. The story is getting more and more interesting with each chappy. Plz update soon
Edited by ....Anabella... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
This is turning so interesting update soon Sam!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
Very interesting track ...liked it 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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AMAZING SAM!!!👏😳😃
LOVED IT TO THE CORE!!!❤️
Plzzz update the nxt part soon!!!😛
Can't wait anymore...😭
And thanks a lot for PM!🤗
I'm also sorry for commenting late!!!😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb sam
Loved the twist !!!
Jas is a cool name
Lovely plzzz update soon

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