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17.sonal thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved the Twist..
Very Interesting its getting..
Pls Upadte soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
CHAPTER-16
Twinkle: tumhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha,kya zarurat thi ye sb karne ki ?
JAS: o really or us budiya ne jo kiya wo sab bilkul sahi hai ri8,i cant belive that you are my sis
twinkle: what she did was wrong but what you did was not correct either,anyway chodo use main maa ko call karti hun..mera phone..mera phone kahan gaya,SHIT mai mai phone hospital me bhul gayi..chalo wapas chalte hai
JAS:what..ok f9
HOSPITAL

twinkle's phone was in the reception area she thanked the receptionist for keeping it safe..she was walking towards the exit when she heard a name "KUNJ"..kunj ? Twinkle was confused what he is doing here ? Is he alri8 ? Papaji..she whispered unhe kuch hua toh..tears welled in her eyes..k..kunj he needs me she turned to see and console her husband but what she saw breaked her heart into million pieces standing in the corridor was kunj and alisha..who were in a tight embrace
A: im so glad kunj tumne mujhe maaf kar diya,mujhe wapas apna liya with that she hugged him more tightly hiding her face in his nape

"sssh alisha,galti sab se hoti hai..nd im happy that you've realised ur mistake c'mn ab rona band karo nd give me the the Alisha smile"alisha smiled
this whole encounter was witnessed by twinkle..the smile on their faces was burning her heart..thr proxmity was making it difficult forr her to breath..unable to take it anymore she ran out of the hospital only to crash with jas who was busy in her therapy
(shopping)
J: oye PT usha kahan bhag rahi hai olympics me participate kar rahi hai...one look at twinkle and she was frozen
twinkle was shivering..she was a mess her eyes held her unshed tears nd she was continously nodding her head as if in denial saying NO
jas:twinkle kya hua sab thik hai na ? Jas was concerned she dont know twinkle well but she knew that twinkle is a complete pataka an extrovent but this twinkle looked so pale nd broken she asked again NO reply she again asked her this time shaking her vigorously twinkle pls bata kya hua jas asked now scared.
kunj wo aisa nahi kar sakta..wo..w..o aisa wo aur a..li alisha phir se ek ho gaye.wo bhul gaya mujhe he cant jas mai itni buri hun kya how can he do that h..ow suddenly she suffered a black-out jas was scares she rushed her into hospital after checking her vital signs doctor declared "nervous breakdown"
JAS: n..er. Nervous breakdown jas stuttered..
After a day twinkle gain consciousness
jas was extremely happy that she woke up finally you are awake she started talking with her animatedly but her hapiness was short-lived as twinkle was not twinkle she was silent most of the times..she used to to shout on sm1's smallest of mistakes,she hardly talked with any1 her replies were mostly in monosyllables..
The doctors who examined her concluded that twinkle was in depression..
Jasmine was devasted what could be the reason behind her depression..



twinkle's thoughts:"Everything's just so hard lately. It's all falling apart," she whispered, gaze locked onto the ground. "And everyone's left me."

jas decided that she will take twinkle to london for her treatment...a change of place will be better for her she thought
with a little help for chinky jas got twinkle's passport..of course chinky was ready to help twinkle nd was too stunned to know that her soul-sister twinkle has an identical twin
during her treatment jas was twinkle's only family..she was patient with her she braved her harsh treatment,listened to her talks intently nd during this time she got to know every thing yuvi nd anita's game plan..kunj nd twinkle's relationship,bebe,usha manohar to the extent that she now knows then more than herself...
Twinkle was out of depression in a month..all thanx to jasmine
's dedication and ofcourse the constant support from chris sanator a gorgeous blonde whom twinkle met in a cafe accidently and since then they became tge best of friends



PS: imagine jessie pavelka as chris or anyone you like..ignore the gramatical mistakes
Edited by beingdumb - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsm chappy . Jas. I am so loving her. Par. Yeh alisha kahan se agaye? Jaror koi mu hai kunj will never ditch twinkle for alisha. Twinkle is trying to move on and i so wish to see a jealous kunj. Love the way ur moving on with the story
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow loved it to the core sam
Alisha again plzzz kick her out of ur story
Nice one
Love jas soo nice and outgoing!!
Plzz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
CHAPTER-17

after twinkle was completely out of depression..she looked back at her journey as to how her life has changed in one and a half month..she battled and won against depression which many people were'nt able to do..she decided to help those who are fighting with depression alone or people who are completely unaware of depression with the help of mr.oberoi,jas nd of course chris she started a NON-profit organisation YOU ARE NOT ALONE where funds are raised for people who cant afford counselling and treatment..thanks to the support from chris nd jas and twinkle's relentless hardwork, "you are not alone" is a huge sucess, sure there was roadblocks on the way nd she stumbled a lot of time but she was determined to prove herself that she can do anything without creating "siyappa" and she is no "bacchi".. Jst a month back their organisation has launched their website where people who are depressed or those who are suffering/suffered mental illness write about their fi8 against the disease,share their experience nd motivates eachother...it was a huge sucess nd twinkle taneja aka "T" became an inspiration to others..she was also listed in thr coveted list of young acheivers under 30...indeed its true nothing suceeds like sucess..
While twinkle was busy with her organisation jas decided to avenge her sister's wrong doers
i cant let them live in peace while my sister was in hell,they all took her nd her goodness for granted but now its time to payback..her targets were obviously anita nd yuvi.."get ready to repent ur misdeed guys twinkle could'nt win against you devils bcoz she is an angel nd to take down the devil you have to be satan and that is jst so me..jas said with an evil smirk she discussed this with twinkle nd she approved it what jas said to twinkle was she is going to india to meet their mother..had she said that she will be impersonating her she would definetly kicked her ass
FLASHBACK ENDS

LONDON:

chris: are you ready with your speech darling..we have to reach india by tommorow..im jst so proud of you you've been invited as a motivational speaker that too to ur native place are'nt you happy ?
Twinkle: im chrissy
chris: DONT
twinkle: what dont ?
Chris: dont call me chrissy you know i dont like that..chrissy sounds jst so girly
twinkle: ok chrissy i promise that i'll never call you chrissy is that ok chrissy ?
Chrissy: twinky you've jst landed yourself in a big trouble
with that he started chasing her their laughter echoed in the entire office

KAPOOR mansion

aradhna:armaan maine surgeon se baat ki hai you knw toh tu bhi
armaan: mom rehne doo na yaar kya farq padega in sab se haan? Armaan was exasparated
aradhna: nahi beta,its jst that
armaan: jst that what mom..so you want to say that even you are scared of my "gross shoulder"
armaan badly burnt his shoulder in a fire accident which occured in his school that left his skin scarred forever he remembered ever since then he became the butt of jokes at his school the kids at school treated him as an outcast nd not to say they used to taunt him saying MOnster shoulder,gross shoulder,kids his age would stay away from mr.gross shoulder nd this behaviour scarred his soul forever he avoided them as much as possible..he avoided every possible situation where he has to take-off his shirt he skipped swimming classes,does not wear sleeveless etc..
you know mom i wanted to get rid of this..he ripped his shirt revealing his scar..this scar but now i dont want to,do i have to be perfect do get sm1's love ?won't anyone accept me the way i'm with this.he said pointing his finger tears welling in his eyes..i guess i know the answer shayad isiliye naisha ne mujhe accept nahi kiya hai na ?
ENOUGH ! Roared aradhna that bitch does not deserve you said aradhna on the verge of breaking down
hum dono jante hain mom what's the reality its tough to love sm1 who is so broken,who dont know how to express himself..sm1 who is scarredaradhya took her son in a bear hug crushing him..her son has suffered a lot for smthing or other... He witnessed something at the tender age of 8 that can be said to be every mother's night his little boy saw his dad his superhero making out with another woman half-naked in his own room, that day her son was forced to grow up he matured way quickly compared to kids of his age...his childhood was long forgone..he slogged day and ni8 to be succesful to provide a better future to his kid sister
and he succeeded in doing that she was proud of her son but smwhere she knew that her son was alone aradhna nd armaan's reverie was broken by the chirpy voice of jasmine
arman was scared what if she hates me after seeing this scar ? His heart was heavy nd his throat was dry he stood up nd heard her gasp..he know what was coming.
Edited by beingdumb - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow this is beautiful!
God woh alisha vapas aa gayi.
Update soon can't wait for the whole mystery to be revealed.
Lots of love
Sayli
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome Update. loving this <3
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww loved it sam
Chriss is so nice
Plzz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
I am looking forward to the coming parts.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsm chappy. Hope next chappy mai twinj come face to face. Amd plz i want a jealous kunj. Jo twinkle aur chris ki friendship se jale

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