TWINJ FF: double trouble chapter 18 page 17 - Page 12

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update Sam!
Nice twist huh...
Loving it...awww Jas she's such a sweetheart!
Waiting for next update now!
And thanks a lot for the PM...and for wishin me luck for my exams...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
I read it in one go
its just amazing 🤗
u r really a very good writer 👏
totally diff story
keep it up
and next episode asap
Diy0 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
I read it in one go
its just amazing 🤗
u r really a very good writer 👏
totally diff story
keep it up
and next episode asap please
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Diy0

I read it in one go
its just amazing 🤗
u r really a very good writer 👏
totally diff story
keep it up
and next episode asap

thank you im glad you liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Anabella...

Awsm chappy. Hope next chappy mai twinj come face to face. Amd plz i want a jealous kunj. Jo twinkle aur chris ki friendship se jale

dont worry kunj and twinkle will meet soon nd i know you want a jealous kunj and u'll get it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: beingdumb

dont worry kunj and twinkle will meet soon nd i know you want a jealous kunj and u'll get it

thanks a ton sam. Hayee.. Jealous kunj sounds so perfect. Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
CHAPTER-18 jas could'nt belive what she saw..this guy has to go through so much..i dont know why god is so cruel to us..i was seperated from my family,twinkle nd kunj's love life is a mess,nd armaan this guy is suffering since he was a kid..she saw a range of expressions playing on armaan's face hurt,dissapointment nd fear..the fear of rejection..at that moment she just felt only one thing for armaan LOVE nd respect even after going through all this he was not resentful towards others..he was always there to help others..nd now she is there for him,with himarmaan knows what is going to happen jas will hate him.she will be grossed out seeing his scar and probably will never see his face and this thought stabbed his heart that she will hate him..he cant bear the thought of jasmime going away from him but he has to accept it she deserve some1 better the onw who is not scarred..the one who dont have this emotional baggage to haunt him in the future yeah he was ready...jas came near him..she was all teary. Armaan noticed jasmine touched his scar,ran her hand all over it the skin was rough nd coarse..she closed her eyes aap ko ab bhi b dard hota hai kya ? nahi..was all he could manage silence prevailed in the room...aradhna was seeing the whole exchange BTW the duo nd she was happy that twinkle didnt rebuked her son like others but i know jas its ugly..its really very ugly he closed his eyes as if he was ashamed of it.. jas chuckled..he looked at her bewildered..im sorry but are you nuts ? She said in a dead serious tone..armaan when i say you are beautiful/gorgeous i actually mean it..nd this scar is a part of you so how can it be ugly ?armaan was touched by this kind gesture she dont have any problem with his scar,she is grossed out..she..she wont leave me armaan was extremly happy..he is now falling for this girl all over again..if that is even possible as he is irrevocably in love with this girl jas;armaan everything happens for a cause..its not ur fault and this scar is a proof that even after going through all these hardships..you didnt became a psyco like yuvraj..you have every quality that a girl wants in her life partner ur charming,gentle,cool,sexy nd a armaan was blushing all through her rant..GOD trust this girl to embarss him infront of his mom..he looked at his mom who was was elated, her eyes were teary but there was a big smile on her face..nd the reason is this beautiful girl who is blabbering without a break.. ARMAAN: jas ab ba..s bhi ka..ro mom bhi yahin hai jas: huh, haan to maine aisa kya kaha ur sexy nd even your mom knows that hai na aunty ?ardhna jst nods her head amused by her antics jas came near armaan placed her hand on his cheek caressing him..armaan hamesha aise hi rehna kabhi mat badalna with that she placed her lips on his cheeks nd gave a him small peckarmaan was pleasntly surprised..he loved the sensation when her lips touched his stubbled cheeks jas: OK bye ab main chalti hun bye aunty.. Waise you look good without a shirt.. Jas self talk: W*F im saying..what will his mom think about me shit jas ur a loser.. Jas; ach..a ab mai chalti hun bye..with that she half walked half ran out of kapoor mansion jas: chalo bach gayi..i dont knw mujhe unhe dekh kar kya ho jaata hai.. With armaan's thought in mind she was walking towards taneja mansion when 3 black BMW's raced past her nd stopped in front of taneja mansion jas: ab ye log kaun hai ? A guard came nd opened the door of the car in the middle... Twinkle stepped out of the car dressed in a white shirt black blazer..nd a knee length skirt she was dressed to kill she looked at her home with longing in her eyes chris:are you all ri8 honey ? T: hmmm JAS:what the fcuk ye yahan kaise tapak gayi..GOD jas ur screwed agar ise pata chal gaya ki main twinkle ban ke yahan reh rahi hun toh? Colour drained from her face...kya karun bhag jao yahan se nahi mera passport toh andar hi hai phir kya karun..ab kaun help karega meri..ARMAANwith that she ran towards kapoor mansion chris:what happend ? What's bothering you dear ? Twinkle: wo yahi kahin hai..main mehsoos kar sakti hun use chris: who? Who is here dear ? Twinkle:KUNJ sajna ve...sajna ve...sajnaaa ve
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Posted: 9 years ago
Acha now i got it jas has come to take revenge from the lutharas without informing the twinkle. Voh. Toh gaye kam se. Waiting for twinj to come face to face. And waiting to see kunj's reaction when he sees jas and twinkle together. In short i am greddy for the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved this update dear...
Ohhh ok...twin sis n all...
Interesting
update the next part soon dear!


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Posted: 9 years ago
Really sorry for the late reply.
Read all the updates in one go.
Awesome update, loved it. Like the twist in the story.
do continue soon.plz.

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