TWINJ FF: double trouble chapter 18 page 17

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi guys,
im new here...i skipped TEI after 1st epi bcoz of a stale story nd Jasmine's OTT acting...but jst few days back i saw the whole yuvi-twinle confrontation nd i was taken aback by her subtle perfomance nd was left confused who is kunj ? Are'nt yuvi-twinkle a couple to clear the confusion i read the whole synopsis nd i was impressed.. Sidhanth gupta is such a g
fab actor. I had stopped watching indian shows but im following TEI on nd off my favorite shows are adini feriha koydum on
favorite actor: hazal kaya,beren saat
favourite actor: cagatay ulosou
in this story thr will be sm changes..wedding planning business is now succesful all thanx to twinj but but kunj is still angry nd sm what indifferent towards twinkle..after a fi8 twinkle goes missing..she mets with an accident nd is now hospitalised kunj is devasted,he was heartbroken nd dead..twinkle returns from hospital evry1 is happy esp kunj..bt this twinkle is nt siyappa queen thr is more to her than what meets the eyesif u guys liked the concept then i will continue
part 1-page 1
part 2-page 2
promo: page 2..chapter 3: page 3
chapter4-page 4..promo 1 nd 2 on page 4 nd 5...note on page 5
part-6 on page 6
chapter 7 on page 7 part 8 on page 8
part 9---> page 9part 10--->page 10
chapter 11--page 10
NOTE: page 11
chapter-12 nd 13 on page 13
chapter 14 nd 15 on page 14 chapter-16 and 17 on page 15
chapter-18 on page 17
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
Welcome to the forum dear
It's good to know that you started following the show again. Indeed the leads have grown a lot in terms of acting.
Excited for your story and waiting for it eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
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to say twinkle was devastated will be an understatement she was wretched...hurt beyond repair with each passing second her pain is increasing by ten folds...
FLASHBLACK:
BEBE: twinkle puttar zara mainu meri dawaiyan dede
TWINKLE: abhi layi bebe..
bebe,ye lijiye apki dawai
BEBE: haye, khush rahe puttar
TWINKLE:bebe wo mujhe sindiya's se
urgent baat karni hai humne unki beti ki shadi ka contract mila hai na,aap ye dawai khao mai abhi ayi aur haan dawai phenkna mat (sternly)
BEBE: thik hai meri maa ab jaa bebe chuckled
twinkle left to call mr.sindiya
when she returned what she saw left her gombsacked
lying on the floor bebe was bleeding profusely
KUNJJ !!

SCENE 2:

The whole family was near bebe while doctor was examining her..he gave her an injection nd said
DOC: ghabrane ki koi baat nahi hai she is out of danger now
Kunj : ye sb hua kaise doctor
DOC : inhone expired dawai khaali thi
KUNJ: wht inhe dawi kisne di
twinkle ne chirped anita
TWINKLE barked kunj seething with rage...
CHAPTER-2 on page 2
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is interesting So kunj will bkame her for whatever happened with bebe,Looking forward to it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sounds. Interesting
Looking forward to the coming parts
Btw welcome to the forum 🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago
#6
welcome to the forum
interesting concept
looking forward
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Posted: 9 years ago
#7
Sounds interesting
Continue soon
Looking forward to longer chapters
Welcome to the forum
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Posted: 9 years ago
#8
Welcome to the forum.
Wow!
Great start!
So now kunj will blame twinkle grrr!!
Let's see what happens next.
Update soon.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ok so this looks really interesting
So kunj is going to blame her Nice update
Waiting to read more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Welcome to the forum.
Interesting start. Loved it.
Continue soon plz.

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