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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Awesomee.. Twinkle ka Ye Roop..baap re baap.
Hats.Off yaarr..
I am.lovinh her..
She is punishing Yuvi.. Too.good.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
chapter-11 BEBE screamed twinkle... Puttar kya hua asked a worried bebe she was startled by her scream woh hume jo malhotra's ka contract mila tha na woh super succesful ho gaya isse humare firm ko pure 7 crore ka faid hua hai... Oye puttar ji ye toh hona hi tha tu itni mehnat jo kar rahi hai...indeed her nuh was working her ass-off but she felt the strain BW kunj twinkle has incresed...puttar kaan toh hota rahega par tu kunj ko itna ignore kyun karti hai bebe saked with concern... Ap mujh par bharosa hai na bebe twinkles asked... Hai na puttar ye bhi puchne ki baat hai bebe said of course she has full trust on twinkle... Toh bus tussi thand rakho jo mai kar rahi hun usse twinkle-kunj k beech ki saari duriyan qhatm ho jayegi...bebe admired her DIL's confidence nd left... Twinkle took a quick shower..nd was wondering what to wear..hmm this will look good..after sm time comes out of sarna house nd went towards kapoor mansion..thats when she saw armaan ARMAANshe screamed..arman was about to get in the car when he stopped..he turned nd his breath hitched...thr he saw twinkle walking towards him like a godess wearing a short-skirt nd tank top. Hi kaise hain aap asked twinkle he was staring at the ground armaan was never into girls after his crush crushed his heart forever he feels extremely uncomfortable talking to girls"hi"replied armaan not lifting his lashes i knw ki mai cleopetra nahi hun par itni buri bhi nahi dikhti ki ap meri taraf dekh bhi nahi sakteNO NO she is getting it all wrong he needs to come clean before hernahi aisa nahi hai its jst that mujhe ladkiyon...before he cam complete twinkle:intrest nahi hai..armaan are you a gay ? Twinkle screamed...NO it cant be true god cant be this unfair he jst cant this gorgeous guy cant be a gay...he has to be straight for heaven's sakeno im not its jst that maine kabhi zyada ladkiyon se baat nahi karta toh mai nervous hojata hun jb mai kisi se baat karta hun twinkle heaved a sigh of relief Thank god...at that moment she found this guy the most adorable in the entire universe...is that blush ? God how can sm1 look cute nd hot at the same time wondered twinkle.. aap achi lag rahi hai i mean apne pehle traditional wear me dekha aur ab aise dekh..i mean ap dono hi attires bhot ache se carry karti hai said armaan hesitatinglytwinkle blushed...waise aap bhi kafi hot lag rahe hain..waise apne aj upar k buttons khule nahi chode..u would've looked even hotter twinkle said nd covered W*F twinkle get a grip girl.armaan blushed harder what this girl is saying...what is she trying to do? Waise apki mom kb tak ayengiwhen twinkle was missing leela left for vaishnodevi to pray for her child she is not back so they will work on the deal once leela returns..pata nahi..waise aap mujhe ap mat bulo tum kehkar bulaiyye apna sa lagta haiat that moment armaan felt sm weird sensation in his heart..par mai kais..e armaan stutturedkaise kya kaise muh se bulaiye aur kaise... Waise aap mere dost banenge twinkle said forwarding her handafter thinking for sometime he shook hands with her accepting friendship...when a hands touched a chill ran down their spine...this small exchange was witnessed by a pair of eyes that had nothing but blessings for her children.. waise aap amritsar ghume ? Asked twinklearmaan nodded his head negatively..GOD AaPne ab tak amritsar nahi dekha...laiye gaadi ki chabiyan dijiye..dijiye na nd she snatched the keys orderd him to sit in the car nd drove offarmaan loved how this girl dominated him like he belongs to her antics nd her child-like behaviour is enticing him..all through the journey she talked non stop like there's no tommorow..he loved it the way she uses her hands to make gestures her laugh everything thy had visited the golden temple,summer palace, J.Wala bagh,akal takht evry place that amritsar boast of more than the scenic beauty what armaan loved was twinkle's commentry its as if she lived with them.they had dinner in a 5 star of twinkle's choice.. After dinner they came outside nd was walking towards the car when a security dog barked..twinkle got scared nd hugged armaan with all her might armaan was taken aback but he was surprised how she fits perfectly in his arms...he touched her waisttwinkle's S.TALK:hmm twinkle felt safe in his arms..she can feel his hard muscles beneath the shirtchale twinkle armaan said..she detaches herself from him nd nods her head blushingly.. 11.00pm they returned back home...thnx armaan mujhe bahot maza aya...thanx toh muhje kehna chahiye thank u for everything said armaan...BYE twinkle said bye said armaan kal milenge said twinkle hoping to see him tommorow.OK replied a smiling armaan
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
NOTE the story will get a little more dramatic.. Nd iM NOT seperating twinj so chillax twinkle's attraction will be explained in the upcoming parts
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
Aww thank u soo much di... i knew u were never going to separate Twinkle & Kunj!!!😳😃
I'll be waiting for the next update...update it soon di!!!
Can't wait for it...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
The story is unique in its own way and i have fallen for it. Loved the way twinkle talked to usha, she deserves. I know kunj's words were too harsh but bechare ko itna bhi mat sato. Twinkle's attraction towards armaan is weird. Something is missing. One thing my insides are shouting this girl is not twinkle and the confrmation i get when i read the lines that kunj's heartbeat did not increase when they were close. His heart refused that this girl is not its owner. Chalo. Anyway this what i think the rest depends on you because u r the writer. And the story is what u make. And could u plz pm me whenever u update any of the 2 stories.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: ...Anabella...

The story is unique in its own way and i have fallen for it. Loved the way twinkle talked to usha, she deserves. I know kunj's words were too harsh but bechare ko itna bhi mat sato. Twinkle's attraction towards armaan is weird. Something is missing. One thing my insides are shouting this girl is not twinkle and the confrmation i get when i read the lines that kunj's heartbeat did not increase when they were close. His heart refused that this girl is not its owner. Chalo. Anyway this what i think the rest depends on you because u r the writer. And the story is what u make. And could u plz pm me whenever u update any of the 2 stories.

thanx u for commenting nd i'll PM u when i will update :-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Amazing story.
I am hooked on it.
Waiting for your next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Update ,??? Jaldi plz😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
PART-12 SOMEWHERE IN LONDON: no i cant let this happen..it need to be stopped..i have to fi8 my own battles..with determination on her face she decided that its now or never SARNA HOUSE it has been 6 months after twinkle's return sarna's are out of their financial mess..it was not like that they were to their prev position before the mess but they are in a much better position now... twinkle's changed attitude attiude nd sarna's gaining their financial stability infuriated even more...all her plans backfired miserably twinkle countered her every plan but now its enough..she needs to gain upperhand in this war..she smirked an evil smirk that indicates she is going to plan something that will hurt her a lot...her trump card "MAHI"bechari twinkle with that anita started laughing hysterically... MAHI'S ROOM Anita:mahi chor tu itna gir jayegi ye maine socha bhi nahi tha..with that she slapped mahi tightly there was no one at sarna house other than anita nd twinkle mahi hearing the commotion twinkle rushed toward's mahi's room...she witnessed anita slapping mahi..she flinched at that sight..anita saw this from the corner of her eyes nd smirked plan kaan kar raha hai she thought anita:agar ye necklace itna pasand tha toh bol deti churane ki kya zarurat thi mahi:nahi mom maine ise nahi churaya anita:to ye udke tere kamre me aagaya kya with that she pushed mahi, twinkle enter's the room Anita:dekh rahi hai twinkle ki teri behen ne kya kiya hai..anita said knowing that now twinkle will plead nd will defend her sis...no matter how much she changes herself behen k liye,rishton ke liye jhukegi typical leela upbringing T:aaj mai routine check-up k liye gayi thi doctor ne bataya ki meri ankhe or kaan sahi salamat hai...so i guess i know what is happening this wiped the smile from anita's face..darn this girl..OK so what jb khoon ki pukar sunegi toh tilmila jayegi MAHI: nahi di,maine aisa kuch nahi kiya jst trust me twinkle:she came near her caressed her face nd said maahi i dont trust you this shocked mahi she was shell-shocked mahi:di ye ap kya keh rahi hai main behen hun apki...did she jst heard the she dont trust her she is her sister for god's sake twinkle:are wah jab tu ye yakeen kar sakti hai ki teri behen ne tuhj par acid pheka tha...toh mai kyu yakeen na karu ki tune chori ki...jb mai kya padosi ki aulaad lag rahi thi tujhe mahi was ashamed she ditched her sister accused her when she needed her the most nd now her di is returning the favour... Anita was shocked again she wore the typical W*F expressions "anita luthra haye haye" "anita luthra murdabad" women dressed in white cotton sarees enterd the sarna house mouthed this sloganab ye kaun naare laga raha hai...she went towards those women..dekho ghar me ghus ke bheek mangne me sharam nahi aati "ari kamini bhikaran to tu hai kulakshini jo ameer hote hue bhi dahej k liye bahu ko maarti hai"a woman in her 40's said in a grave tone what the hell dahej ? Maine kisi ko dahej k liya tang nahi kiya or tum log kaun ho ? hum bahu bachao andolan se aye hai...hume yahan se complain mili hai regd domestic abusetwinkle it must b her plan anita said with hatred.. anita:usne chori ki chor hai woh isliye maine use tamcha maara jst then twinkle played a video in her laptop which showed anita sneeking in mahi's room nd placing the necklace in her cupboard...apart from that it has other videos of son-mother duo abusing mahi... To say anita was shocked will be an understatement she was shocked nd scared..so,this bitch was spying on us fcuk ab in logon ka kya karun...she turned slightly opened her mouth to calm them downwhen twinkle camesahi kaha hai ki aurat hi aurat ki sabse badi dushman hoti hai...aap sb yahan se chali jayiye...ye anita luthra-sarna hai aap inka kuch nahi ukhaad sakti abhi inhone upar bola ki these down market bitches jst needs sm limelight and BAS roared the women iska kya karsakte hai hum ab tu dekh...thy started beating anita and smeared black paint on her.. T: isse kya hoga,agar dum hai toh inke gale me juton ka haar dalkar inhe gadhe ki sawari karogi pure amritsar me she instigated themND they did what twinkle said to add insult to the injury news channels telecasted this epi live on the spl.request of Erhm ehmm you know who😆 PS: ok anjum updated this chapter only for you...there is no twinj or armaan-twinkle in this update kyunki mai anita ka guroor todna chahti thi i promise next update will b better
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
Nice one di!!!👏
Loved it...haan ghoorur toh tuthna hi paregah nah!!!😆😉
Ummm...di if u don't mind can u plzzz PM me when u update...only if u have no prob with it!!!
As i'm having my exams now so when i'm free i just peep in the forum & i don't wanna miss ur FF!!!
So plzzz huh only if u don't MIND!!!😳😃

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