TwiNj Three-Shot || The Mending of Broken Hearts - Page 4

Originally posted by: Harini7

You are amazing dear. I am waiting for your next update.

Originally posted by: Ethereal.Surbhi

excellent
excellent
excellent
Just mindblowing
Everything was written n described so amazingly
when i started reading i couldnt realize it already ended.
its just wow. i could actually imagine all the scenes.
so intense so sensous so romantic so passonate. loved every bit of it.
ending was unexpected which made it even more desirable to read the next part.
Hats off to you.
and thank u for this awesome piece
pls update soon. 🤗

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

Awesome

They are madly in love..
Romantic chappy..

Kunj accident..
Hope he got fine soon..

Originally posted by: naina927

I know you are so damn busy but you could have set me a pm gur... what if I missed this extremely beautiful piece...??? Huh...??? Who is to be blamed then...??? Its u girly... you...
Ab next tym pm kar dena maate... coming to the update. You nailed it gur... soo prpud of you... like always...!!!
How beautiful n ironical... twinkle decides to give kunj every right over her... and she finds divorce papers... she wants to take their relationship a step further n kunj wants to end it. Though I feel there is a back story for the divorce papers too... it wont b that simple... may be kunj thinks twinkle still loves kunj or anything like that...
That night as u mentioned... they would have given in to the temptation but the phone call interrupted it... things would have become way too awkward after it. Glad it didn't happen... I would like them to consummate their marriage when they both are ready for it... not by temptation or a weak moment...

@Gur whtever u thought n wrote the outcome is just wow. m sure alternative ending would be awesome too. i just cant wait for the final part. pls write bigger n bigger. 😆
cnt wait for hospital scene.
have a good day/night 🤗

Wow! This story is just amazing, so intense and intriguing. Really can picture the characters from the show in your writing. So looking forward to the next part, the mystery surrounding the divorce papers, and now kunj's accident occurring- makes a great twist. Wonderful job once again, loved it :)

Originally posted by: asmaanixx

I actually don't send PMs to anyone. 🤔

I just don't like the system of it. There will be so many people who will ask to be sent a PM but less than half of them actually comment on the updates. I personally don't like that since I spend extra time to send out an alert to everyone.

I update everything on my index so you can check that out but if you want, I can send you scraps. But PM is a big no since I am writing multiple fics in different forums. It will become too much.

Thank you so much! 🤗

There is definitely a back story for the papers and you will find that out in the last update. :)

Yup! Even in the second part, the way they got involved there was too much unresolved between them. There were too many doubts and mistrust and the way they were taking their relationship further was wrong. They still have a lot that needs to get fixed between them.

i am gonna die of suspense yaar. absolutely awesome,sensuous romantic update but heartbreaking aswell. hopefully kunj is able to clear where those papers came from. absolutely loved the emotions shown in the update. u write beautifully could totally picture what u wrote and for me that is a mark of true writer making the reader feel what the characters go through. update soon plz

Originally posted by: Ethereal.Surbhi

@Gur whtever u thought n wrote the outcome is just wow. m sure alternative ending would be awesome too. i just cant wait for the final part. pls write bigger n bigger. 😆
cnt wait for hospital scene.
have a good day/night 🤗

Originally posted by: ShivuNozzie

Wow! This story is just amazing, so intense and intriguing. Really can picture the characters from the show in your writing. So looking forward to the next part, the mystery surrounding the divorce papers, and now kunj's accident occurring- makes a great twist. Wonderful job once again, loved it :)