TwiNj Three-Shot || The Mending of Broken Hearts

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asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj
Great start dear..

Twinkle..love you girl..

Caring twinkle is nice..

Omg
Divorce papers????
Plz nooo...

Update soon plz

Haha, thank you. I'll do my best to put it up today. 😳

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asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Iansomer1
awesome awesome awesome. loved it. i love how twinkle came to realization that she wanted to move on with kunj u have written beautifully. i had some work so i thought i will read few lines and bookmark and come back later but i couldnt leave in between so wanting ot know what was gonna happen next. pleaseee continue soon i cant wait to read wat comes next. poor twinkle divorce papers omg please dont let it be a sad ending. update soon.thanx

Thank you! 😳

My gosh, I hope you didn't get in trouble because of me. 😆

I will do my best to have the next part up today. :)

As for the ending, you'll just have to wait and see. 😉

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asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: .MysticalWaters
That was mindblowing.
Nicely written.
Liked the overall plot.
Waiting for next part!

Thank you! 🤗

Will try to have it up today. :)

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asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Ethereal.Surbhi
wow awesomesorry for being late
gotta read
yayy

Originally posted by: Ethereal.Surbhi
Its just awesome. cant wait for more
loved it
i am going to read it again at night
detail comment then
thank u 🤗

Originally posted by: Ethereal.Surbhi
Already read it 3 times 😳
still cant get over it
so interesting
so mindblowing
totally invested into it
best of yours
loved from first word to last word
still wanting more
greatly written
made my day
i wish i could read it in o one go
pls update soon
dont make us wait longer
i hope the caller was not Alisha
ending was totally unexpected
i can totally feel Twinkles pain
thank u so much 🤗

Three comments for three times the reading? I feel so special. 😆😳

Thank you so much for the lovely comment. 🤗

You had asked for something long so I thought of posting something before university starts this Monday. 😳

I will try my best to finish it all by this weekend so that I don't keep you all waiting for too long. :)

And thank you for being such an avid reader. 🤗

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asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: kubare
Oh my God!!!!
Loved it!!!

Loved it!!! Loved it!!!! Loved It!!!!

Very very interesting...beginning...cant wait to read where you take us with all this...

Phone call...my guess Alisha or Yuvi...

Divorce papers...anyone of them is the reason for it...

Oh and loved the saree too...

Update soon

Waiting (im)patiently😉😆

I love how enthusiastic you are in the comments. They bring a huge smile to my face, so thank you for it! 🤗

You all have pretty much guessed who the caller is and you'll find out for sure in the next update. :D

I love it too and will love to see Twinkle wear something like that on the show.

Haha, I'll do my best to have it up today. 😆😳

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Sherni_Jerry

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

^ you are welcome. i cant tell in words how much i loved this one one. still longing to read more. i will readd again with next part.
these uni sucks. all the best. it would be painful to wait for this one longer 😆
I am eagerly waiting for next part. hopefully an awesome update waiting 😃
you are an incredible writer.

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asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: BARUNILU_Arshi
Plz update soon plz 😳

I'll try to have it up by today. 😳

Originally posted by: Propinquity.
Wonderfully written.

I could feel Twinkle's confusion and her longing.

And the last few lines were so sad. I felt so terrible for Twinkle.

I'm in love with your work asmaanixx!

Keep up the amazing work :)

Thank you so much! 😳

Have I not told you all my name? 😆

It's Gurleen if you would prefer to call me that. Having you all refer to me by my username feels weird. 😆

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asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Ethereal.Surbhi
^ you are welcome. i cant tell in words how much i loved this one one. still longing to read more. i will readd again with next part.
these uni sucks. all the best. it would be painful to wait for this one longer 😆
I am eagerly waiting for next part. hopefully an awesome update waiting 😃
you are an incredible writer.

It's most probably because it was longer and much more detailed than all the rest. 😳

It does at times. Now if you would like to see an update it will most likely come on Fridays, Saturdays or Sundays. 🤔

I will do my best to not make you wait too long. 😳

And thank you so much once again. 🤗

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Sherni_Jerry

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: asmaanixx

It's most probably because it was longer and much more detailed than all the rest.😳

It does at times. Now if you would like to see an update it will most likely come on Fridays, Saturdays or Sundays. 🤔

I will do my best to not make you wait too long.😳

And thank you so much once again. 🤗

yup it was longer n detail thts why. plus the storyline is amazing. all other OS are my fav too.
dnt worry.. will wait patiently