TS: Mirage of Love - Magic Inc. #1.5 (Completed) - Page 2

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Also make all of your works as nocopy.

In the first post, enable copy protect (tick the box) and for every update just type no copy (one word in square parenthesises) in the post below or above the 'members only'

You can copy this, just remove the * and post

[*NOCOPY*]

Originally posted by: ria2794

very interesting. so she met him as a student. what was their age at that time?

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

And me is back, finally.

Do you know what a relief it is to read your stories, even in absolute terms, but on relative terms it is a balm to soothing the mind and relive frayed nerves (why are stories written in that weird form where the first letter of every word is capitalised 😡- did someone change the grammar rules when we were not looking😕😕😕 or has Word come out with that option - but you have to give it to them, imagine capitalising the first letter of every word, of every sentence🤢🤢🤢

Okay, back to RagLak - I love them here (I never liked them in the serial but then I hated the easy way of making them the villains, but you do don't, most of your stories they are human with all the attendant human frailties).

The opening sentence - about Laksh hating mirrors, I like the symbolism, him hating the reflection the mirrors shows actually reflects on his thoughts. His house reflects what he wants to avoid. And his heart admits that his illusions reflect the reality he is running away from.

And it is reflected in Ragini's thoughts - as she remembers him. Strange, in the moments of great happiness or sorrow, we miss the person we need / love the most.

And then the reflection of what they lost - her last words to him changed him to precisely what he did not want to be and his words made her realise that what could have been her strength had been treated by her as her weakness.

I just love the subtle reflection of the paragraphs, mirrors to his house to his thoughts to a chance news clipping to her thoughts back to him and ending with her - in the end all that life did was to hold a mirror to them throwing back memories at them, reminding them of what they lost.

Originally posted by: ExpectoPatronum

Gossips still strike as fast as lightning at MI, man someone's gottu make that right but again, can beings(magic/non magic) ever stop their tittle-tattles😛

I had half expected Ragini to step up and propose Lakshya, her being a no-nonsense woman😆

Kudos for yet another successful story in your basket!👏⭐️