Swasan FF :A Cinderella Story(Epilogue pg 29(23/5/17)

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: iamreader

Unres

Replied back dear..😳

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Sparkler8
Hey Nita!!
I am so glad you are starting a new story.

Res for now.. Will be back soon..
*fingers crosses* Hopefully I can be up to date with your updates..

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Interesting start, dear!

In fact it reminds me of a crazy idea I had for an FF but dropped it due to my current commitments.

Swara seems frustrated with the way her life is. Sanskaar seems to be interested in Swara. It didn't seem like he was in the cafe by any random reason. He was there for Swara. Either he is stalking her or is flirting, like Swara thinks, a Casanova type.

Please continue, Nita. Want to know what's Sanskaar's agenda.

Cheers
Sharon

Thanks Sharon dear.. Really happy to know you are interested in this FF and commitment are there for me as well.. Hence struggling with regular updates.. I would have loved to read yours.. But I get it even I just penned this down to make me stop thinking about it.. I understand starting an new FF seems bit daunting at this point.. Believe me I am pretty much like that..

Yeah Swara had her share of pain and she is not some ideal goody goody shoes but I am sure we can relate to her more in this FF.. She is definitely not evil.. And sanskar I like to keep him an mystery for some more time

Love

Nita

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

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Dear Nita,

I was the first to res and I am absolutely the last to unres

So this chapter gives a hint into why Sanskaar left his mobile number with him, he was trying to "test" her for someone, I wonder whom (I have read Chapter 5 too, so will ask my question there). And he knows how fake she is and simply hates it. But he cannot help being nice to her.

Swara is also quite impressed, and is actually hopeful of meeting him again. And she does, just not in a way she ever imagined, - as her boss, the CEO of the company she joined. Talk about surprises.

I am liking this twisted fairy tale.

love,

Nyna

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Sharon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Res for Chapter 2..

Will unres both Ch 1 & 2 over the weekend :)

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

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@Nyna and Sharon : Thanks for the Res guys.. Take your time..

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Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: NitaReid

Honestly I feel like a terrible person.. You took your time to leave me such an lovely feedback and I am yet to read the last few chapter of yours.. Seriously I would love more than anything to read it right now.. But life I pretty busy that I haven't had an chance to sit back leisurely and read.. I don't want to read yours in an rush.. Surely I am anticipating the day when I finally get time to read yours.. Just like I am bidding my time to read other lovely works in IF..

BTM still got one epilogue left and I have to sit down and write it out before everyone forget the ff altogether.. Wow too much to do and here I start a new story what was I thinking.. Sorry about the rant.. Sometime I feel bit pressured about it

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Nita

Don't feel terrible dear. Lately I've been very bad as a fellow IFian too! My wattpad journey demanded a lot of attention from me given I had to translate a lot of hindi dialogues. Congrats! your first FF is doing great there. Though personally I love both, perhaps the 2nd one better, I guess mystery stories have less readers than romance.

Take your time! I don't know if you could manage my other Swasan FF. When you finally can manage check that one too. We're walking in the same shoes... so no sorry and thanks! 😃 😆

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Nita baby...

Chapter 2 was awesome...short but its oky..as u said its good to have something to read...rather than nothing...

I just enjoyed swasan povs...both made their own judgement regarding each other...and now destiny landed them together..it would be great to see both ways colliding again...anxious for next...

Talia

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showrav

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Hello Nita dear my sweet buddy how r u hope u don't mind using sweet word on u first time from me hehehe.
beautiful story dear & beautiful start read both chapter in one & I can say surly I m gonna love this very much like others stories of ur may be more so waiting eagerly I know u already said u are break from writing than also waiting for ur return with a bang.
based of the story u set beautifully now let see how they will mat their expectation each other.
don't worry swara ji ur miserable days will end soon cuz now hero will enter ur life.
pity on swara life how she survive in this & what can I say about her family no comments her father remained me the great shekhar godia.
Waiting to know sanskar past also why he become pre judgemental about girls I may assume something why he become like this.
& now u end this a interesting point I m eagerly waiting for their confrontation as a boss & employee & office romance may we get in future hehehe.
like to know how swara will change his perception about her as a gold digger.
Update soon dear
Bye
Take care
& stay bless & happy