Thou art flame, my love : Chapter 6; P-20 - Page 5

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Hey Dyuti 🤗

Res ..

I will catch up on this first as its in beginning and will move to other fic sure this is gonna be aweosme like Z vs T and lovely title😊😳

Lucky

Originally posted by: lucky.m

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<font size="2">Oh Dyuti ..I love this setting .College stories are such a fun to read and Sanskaar as Senior ..Swara as junior ..I was grinning like an idiot while Sanskaar recited those lines to Swara ..and guess this is going to be a love fighting against all odds and winning kind of love story . Sahil is bad guy😡 and acid attack on Swara ,Sunny stands by her ..that's what a true love does .</font>

<font size="2">A strong setting and great start ..Looking forward to read more</font>

<font size="2">Edited to add .. I remember this lines readingof Sanskaar here . These are lines from a poem by Robert Herrick</font>

<h1><font size="2" color="#6600ff">Thou art my life, my love, my heart, the very eyes of me, And hast command of every part to live and die for thee"</font></h1>

<font size="2">Love</font>

<font size="2">Lucky</font>

<font size="2">PS; lyrics part of phool ka taaron ka ..super funny😆😉</font>

Dear Lucky,
Yes college stories are so heart warming, innocent and sweet. Emotion is not my strong forte, so had to struggle with that part. The end result was good I guess, I could make YOU smile!

Men get attracted to their girls usually for their overall beauty, or eyes or something like that. Then attraction grows into love. If the first thing that you noticed about your partner is no more,can love stay or not?It's a test of true love.

And Sunny will pass with flying colours, against all odds.

And the song! I praised myself indirectly in the story, by Sunny's dialogue! 😉

I haven't read many English poems, I'll admit. So missed these beautiful lines. Will try to to read more! Thanks a lot.

Love,
Dyuti

Originally posted by: StarySKY

Dear Dyuti ..🤗

So chapter 1 .. nice beginning for the story ..

I love the title of the story .. and the titles you used for every part ..

So Swara and Laksh are junior and friends .. Sanskar a Senior who lost his heart at the first sight ..

I loved the poem ..

That Sahil 😡.. acid attack on Swara , hope Sanskar give him what he desarve ..

I very eager for this journey of SwaSan ..

By the way just asking ..

Can't Swara just have a plastic surgery , or there is a problem ?!

Love

Khushi

Dear Khushi,
Yes Lucky is Swara's friend, and Sanky the Majnu senior! The story title is inspired by English language of older times! And chapter 1 title is an English love song title.

Acid attack victims go through plastic surgeries for treatment . But the success depends on the extent of the injuries.

Thanks for staying.

Love,
Dyuti

Originally posted by: iamreader

Dear Khushi,
Yes Lucky is Swara's friend, and Sanky the Majnu senior! The story title is inspired by English language of older times! And chapter 1 title is an English love song title.

Acid attack victims go through plastic surgeries for treatment . But the success depends on the extent of the injuries.

Thanks for staying.

Love,
Dyuti

Dyuti dear...

Hey dyuti. How z u? Long time since I have come in the forum. A wonderful yet heart wrenching story of swasan who have a lot of hurdles in their love. Love their flashback. I am not much into poems. They're beyond my understanding level 😆.

Beautiful update Dyuti!
I just can't wait to read more of this!!

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Dyuti dear...

Amazing start.. loved swasan first faceoff..i.was right about sahil ruining her face...felt so horrible...waiting for more...

Talia

Dearest Talia,
Yes you're the only one who guessed it right. Thanks for your compliment. Hope to do justice to this subject. I'll try so that the next chapters get better or at least match the level.

Wish to post soon.


Love,
Dyuti